Friday, 21 July 2006

illusion...haiku
















so rugged surface

convoluted and/or denuded
or my mind conjures

3 comments:

  1. Interesting one, Gautami. I'm going to have to step away and re-read it again in a few hours&#8212I struggle with the third line "or my mind conjures". My initial take is that the "convoluted and/or denuded" judgment of the observed rugged surface is a conjuration of your mind. But perhaps I am off the mark with this theory. Thanks for making me think!

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  2. Nice one! The mind does indeed "conjures" --always creating what it wants. Right?

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  3. mike:haikus do make one think. classic haikus are full of zen philosophy. i am trying to get there...

    don:right! we only think what we want to..

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