Sunday 2 October 2011

unspoken

I wrote that headline in my note book
you tore it
lonely page wandered
bereft of energy
a joke you said
I know better

music is the only language you understand


24 comments:

  1. Very nice use of form and the words. Glad to have you join us at POETIC BLOOMINGS.

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  2. could be...as music certainly speaks to the soul...

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  3. Nicely done! A disenfranchised thought and feeling....

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  4. words full of energy...thanks Gautami!

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  5. brief but visible. the fragment of page, the missive misguided. there is a wistfulness here, borne aloft like a scrap of paper.
    liked it very much.

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  6. Very well done, I thoroughly enjoyed this!

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  7. strength.

    please have a wonderful tuesday.

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  8. A very nice write!
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/10/02/two-yearning-heart/

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  9. As usual, your words are heavy with meaning. There is certainly power in music.

    Namaste..........cj

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  10. Yes, thank God there is music. People are difficult to understand. Should one try at all?

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  11. Yes, thank God there is music. People are difficult to understand. Should one try at all?

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  12. I am so happy that music is here and everyone loves to listen to this can sure help when expressing feeling and words can not be found or the right ones can not be said great job
    http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/03/memories-and-photographs-of-you/#comment-1370

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  13. Very nice response to the prompts.

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  14. Hello.
    Music & poetry...is anything else needed?

    Nicely done as usual.

    Thief In The Night

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  15. So good! I love the subtle form and the pause that overtakes the last line.

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  16. so much power in so few words. love it.

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  17. Who would you let get that close that they could tear your words... there is more here.

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