Sunday 9 October 2011

rambunctious tale

it was a close call
I jumped out of the coffee mug
that spoon saved my life
in the fallow garden near that pond
gulliver had visited me
saved me from the swallows-
gave me the obsolete mug to rest my case
I admire him for offering me crumbs
now I will read the rambunctious newspaper
until you get that automobile for my ride

"first tell me, why did want to scald me with hot coffee?"

31 comments:

  1. This is wonderful, Gautami! You gave the spoon better energy than I did in my Magpie. LoL
    Mine is here:
    Reincarnated Rant
    I wrote a different piece for the wordle, but do love your incorporation of the whirl words in this piece. Excellent work!
    Brenda

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  2. What a clever and intriguing read! I love it!

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  3. there was something playful about this piece..a little surreal..fairy-tale like almost..loved it! Jae

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  4. You've done it again. Absolutely unique and so you!

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  5. I loved this, delightfully written!

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  6. Ouch, burned with a hot spoon.
    Very nice worlde from you Gautami. :)

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  7. I love anything having to do with Gulliver. I love it.

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  8. Great- fun ! we will see what my brain says later on. Thanks

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  9. I like "obsolete mug to rest my case"...yes, very clever little piece...

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  10. This is such a fun piece and a delight to visualize.

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  11. I like what you did with the spoon and with the mug.

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  12. Very nicely done. I like it.

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous Travel

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  13. Nice combining of prompts to come out with a marvelous story!!

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  14. Spoons make great see-saws and oars!
    Love the swallows and Gulliver-thanks!

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  15. Dear Gautami: Definitely I feel the sentiment here; why would Gulliver scald especially if he

    "saved me from the swallows-"

    the mystery continues!
    Fun and inquisitively exquisite!

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  16. I haven’t thought about Gulliver’s Travels for forty years. Thank you for the memory. This is a lovely, playful wordle poem, and you make the most of it.

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  17. Seems the little guy has spurred much humor this week.

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  18. A lovely read, intriguing to take in without the picture, which hovered behind like a harmony to your melody.

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  19. Love this Gautami.....what a fun magpie!! :-)

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  20. Engaging piece, to be sure! A delightful read...

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  21. A clever surprise as the litle king jumps out of the mug...of course!

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  22. I think the presence of the little king in the image made us all think a little of the nursery.
    Excellent Magpie!

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  23. Very cleverly crafted as always. I love the conclusion!

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  24. Gulliver and Alice so much growing and shrinking...great thoughts in this ...I love that he climbed out on a spoon...was it a silver one I wonder?

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  25. This made me smile.. nice take on the latest Magpie :)

    Cheers,
    Arnab Majumdar on SribbleFest.com

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