Oh my gosh this is so adorable!The lyrical quality is veryappealing, as is the picture thatmarries well with your words.
wow very interesting and adorable
The repetition is like a poke in the ribs by a big bear's claws..keeping you up..though you try and try to sleep..wonderful piece..Jae
What a lot of fun this piece is. Not a lot of room on the bed for both you and the bear. He will have to hibernate alone I expect after the smutty ditty.
Just love it
Awesome poem, want to rap with the verses :-)
This was a great prompt to write to! I love your response. Very clever!
Love how the girl is the one who wants to hibernate, but the bear is keeping her up! Amyhttp://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/08/04/crucifixion-texas-style/
Very clever and engaging rhythm!
I enjoyed this Guatami. With all the prompt site closings, perhaps you would like to join us at The Sunday Whirl, where I post a wordle every Sunday at 12:01 a.m. Poems are posted all week that include the wordle words. We'd love to have you join.~Brenda
I like the consistent rhyme.
funI know that feeling(minus the smutty bear)
I want a smutty bear to sing me a ditty. The brain work here is amazing.
Ha! That's really good.
Identity is always an interesting issue. And I'd agree, the shift in desires here, bear with girl, is an interesting point of view for your poem here. Great idea!
Great poem, very interesting. I'm intrigued to know why the bear is smutty o_0