Saturday 21 May 2011

guise of a smile

those vibes emanating from him
were evil guised as good
I sensed it in his rambling
he being your friend
I ignored my inner warning

he almost destroyed us both

20 comments:

  1. Enlightening post, and true to listen to those red flags that speak to us, they speak for a reason.

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  2. ugh...yeah i know this one...better to head the inner voice..

    nice 160

    my 160

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  3. I think wa all know someone like that. I just wish the good weren't so persuasive,

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  4. It sucks when you can see a friend of a friend isn't a good person. Unfortunately an experience I think we've all had.

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  5. Sometimes that inner voice speaks more than we know or choose to know! I guess it's all about listening and faith!

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  6. concise....enigmatic...good!!

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  7. Those inner warnings are there for a reason. Great Sunday 160. Thanks for playing.

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  8. If only we would listen to the red flags of our mind. Such an interesting poem.

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  9. Good one.. one needs to be always alert..

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  10. Another good example of why it's best to listen to your inner self! Great 160!

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  11. So many times we do this mistake to ourself !

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  12. To the point. No rambling here!

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  13. WoW! How right you are!
    You penned this beautifully, Gautami.

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  14. We should always trust our instincts but do I? Not always lol This poem packs a powerful punch in a few lines, fantastic job!

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  15. Wow! Brilliant! I am awe struck by the idea!

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  16. Simple and true words spoken in an strong and artistic manner.

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  17. Simply stated, efficacious piece.

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  18. Inner warning always is right :)

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  19. trust your instincts.
    bless you.

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  20. Wow. Succinct and powerful. I think the evil disguised as good can often be more dangerous than plain unveiled evil.

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