Saturday, 28 May 2011

jingling chains

turquoise blue stones on my wrist
are at home
I jingle silvers chains that hold them
sheen of green peeps through blue
when a butterfly flutters nearby
I let it sit on my bracelet
an antique, one of the legacy of heroes maybe
those heroes who were really sea pirates

"let the guitar play you"

24 comments:

  1. enjoyed all the imagery here,
    blue turquoise, silver chains, butterfly flutters.

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  2. Beautiful use of imagery!

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  3. A very interesting take on the prompt!

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  4. Colorful images here.

    =)

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  5. Gautami...
    I Love turqoise.
    I Loved your 55.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Sunday...G

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  6. So very interesting and unexpected ;-) Peace and blessings

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  7. Thanks so much for coming by my site. I see you ahve a poetry site and I would like to invite you to visit my site www.poetrytalkingtotrees.blogspot.com. It is more of a creative writing site, I dabble in it all.

    Anyway - back to you:

    THis is such a fun post, loved the imagery, the sounds, the colours, the feelings, the visions - everything that it brought up was very vivid. Lovely work.

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  8. A novel and lovely vision, chock full of beautiful textures...very enjoyable...excellent job !

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  9. I like the image of a butterfly landing on old pirate booty.

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  10. What pretty images. I love the idea of owning some pirate-stolen jewellery!

    (Romantic old pirates - not the sort you get these days!)

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  11. "let the guitar play you" is so unexpected that it's perfect! I really like this!

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  12. I love the vibrancy of the poem and the rhythm, it was very sensory

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  13. Cudos! Not only it's beautiful, it managed to combine so many prompts. *envy* :)

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  14. Jingle: No wonder you find this stunning. I was stunned just to see a "Jingle" commenting on this jingle.

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  15. so vivid and striking images here . i thoroughly enjoyed reading it!

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  16. What beautiful images you create with this lovely post!

    Namaste..........cj

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  17. What beautiful and ethereal imagery you painted here.

    This writing was like a spell.

    Really compelling and lovely.

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