in the inky depth of that pool
I feel safe from immeasurable flames
I yearn for your breath
that breath you stole from me
in the guise of sleep in the waking hours.
oh, it is just a dream-
why did I allow it to erode me?
I pull the sheet closer still,
forgetting myth from truth.
I put on a mask again
throw a clay pebble into that imaginary pool
no one will allow bend the rules-
except you. except you.
that breath I need to keep in hiding-
leave it on the doormat on your way out
"time just moves on with its own pace,
unwavering about the aftermath-
uncaring about what to come."
WOW! Fantastic write, kiddo, and I can relate to it so well, sadly. I especially love "throw a clay pebble into that imaginary pool".
ReplyDeletewonderful imagery, and we both chose a mask!! xx
ReplyDeleteFantastic imagery!
ReplyDeleteTime is so uncaring, but what can we expect when we waste it so. Are dreams better than life? What a pleasure it is to visit you.
ReplyDelete"forgetting myth from truth"
ReplyDelete- what a great line, in a thoughtful pen.
Thank you for sharing and taking part of the Toads' challenge ~ M
I loved this...
ReplyDeleteEach line is a poem by itself...
Awesome!
great write. strong imagery.
ReplyDeleteAnything that steals the breath away is haunting...whether dream or reality. Wonderfully woven,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
Your banner caught my eye right away & I enjoyed this deep poem.
ReplyDeleteYour poem is beautiful! so many great lines, but this one -
ReplyDeletethat breath I need to keep in hiding-
leave it on the doormat on your way out
Love this one!
Beautiful
ReplyDeleteU capture the feeling of the piece well really enjoyed your poem
ReplyDeleteYou've created layers of feeling.
ReplyDeleteWell wordled.
ReplyDeleteclay pebble...emotional write
ReplyDeleteBeautiful use of language and images!
ReplyDeleteerosion takes many forms..internal soul erosion is perhaps the hardest to bear..beautifully written
ReplyDeleteThis liquid combination of time and breath and dreams is all i could ask for....thanks G
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