Wednesday, 5 May 2010

silent alphabets

alphabets of speech
escape in vibrant spaces
leaving silent hums
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22 comments:

  1. ThomG5 May 2010 at 10:31

    this has a great feel to it, in such a small space of words.

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  2. anthonynorth5 May 2010 at 10:32

    Great haiku.

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  3. Rajlakshmi5 May 2010 at 10:36

    beautiful haiku... brilliantl;y written...

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  4. Stephen Bess5 May 2010 at 11:48

    Very nice.

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  5. Andy Sewina5 May 2010 at 11:59

    Hum! I like it!!

    <3

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  6. Sweetest in the Gale5 May 2010 at 14:57

    Such a physical feel to your words...wonderful!

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  7. Dee Martin5 May 2010 at 16:25

    I had pictures of letters dancing and then slipping quietly out the door...this was a fun one!

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  8. Thomma Lyn5 May 2010 at 18:58

    Oooh, nice -- a musical haiku. I can hear a melody for it! :)

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  9. Bill5 May 2010 at 19:27

    blank page
    what are we
    waiting for

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  10. sage5 May 2010 at 19:41

    very nice!

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  11. Tammy Brierly5 May 2010 at 20:50

    Wonderful!

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  12. Ann (bunnygirl)5 May 2010 at 22:26

    Cool. I love thinking about language and this is spot-on.

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  13. Ramesh Sood5 May 2010 at 22:45

    which speak to the heart more intensely.. beautiful thought, that Gautami!

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  14. one more believer6 May 2010 at 13:31

    sparse on a page yet filled with an energy of huge proportions...

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  15. Ralf Bröker6 May 2010 at 15:48

    I needed quite a while to get closer to the text. Very intellectual short-poem.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  16. Tumblewords:6 May 2010 at 19:49

    Oh where, oh where do they go?

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  17. Amity6 May 2010 at 20:24

    wow...packed in so a limited words but the meaning seems to reverberate in a wide spectrum!

    beautiful Gautami!

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  18. Vivek7 May 2010 at 02:56

    Nice evocation of syncopation

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  19. Linda Jacobs7 May 2010 at 09:05

    Ooooh, I like the word "hums" at the end. That's what words do once they've been spoken.

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  20. Deb8 May 2010 at 08:29

    Escape! It did fit the circus theme.

    Thanks for joining the Big Tent!

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  21. Peaceful Pandemonium8 May 2010 at 09:24

    You inspired me. So few words said so much...which was also the meaning. Perfect and brilliant.

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  22. Sioux29 May 2010 at 05:39

    i love this one!!!

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