Saturday, 8 May 2010

rein in the ruined reign

ruins call out to me
I gravitate towards it
reigns of the past loom large
overshadowing all in its wake
I rein in my chaotic thoughts
giving in to utter bliss of the moment-
past, present, future merged together
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19 comments:

  1. Ramesh Sood8 May 2010 at 06:57

    Past , present ,future merged together..that sums up and one knows one is in touch with an enlightened soul.. very well expressed..

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  2. anthonynorth9 May 2010 at 01:11

    Yes, we've got to grasp order out of it all.

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  3. Loch Rob9 May 2010 at 04:44

    Sometimes the past can loom over us. Living and being in the moment has its rewards, but can be so difficult to do. Nice play on words in the title too. :)

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  4. Amity9 May 2010 at 05:26

    past always reigns sometimes and we could hardly get away with it...

    why it is so? maybe it will always be that way!

    lovely execution of thoughts Gautami!

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  5. Ralf Bröker9 May 2010 at 16:29

    The here and now is yesterday and tomorrow in a compact form. So is your verse. I like it.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  6. Irendi9 May 2010 at 22:15

    I really like this- short, sweet, and to the point. I look forward to reading more!

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  7. lucychili10 May 2010 at 01:22

    nice use of repetition to tie
    the past present and future together

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  8. Rallentanda10 May 2010 at 02:16

    Anyone who can rein in the chaotic thoughts is doing well. Good for you triptoes!Nice to hear from you again.

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  9. hoff10 May 2010 at 09:23

    i love the idea of past, present and futere melded as one; nice job!

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  10. flaubert10 May 2010 at 13:24

    Love what you did with this prompt.
    Pamela

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  11. one more believer10 May 2010 at 14:04

    this is a great poem g...it like where this goes

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  12. Tumblewords:10 May 2010 at 15:32

    I enjoyed the way you used 'reign' and 'rein'...nice work.

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  13. songofsea10 May 2010 at 15:39

    Yeah the past sure does reign...U said it well. :)

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  14. SandyCarlson10 May 2010 at 17:35

    A beautiful merging. Ruins are like old friends who remind us how fragile, how temporary, life is.

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  15. Stan Ski10 May 2010 at 21:07

    When it all comes together, would you really want to change a thing?

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  16. keiths ramblings11 May 2010 at 01:25

    Short and to the point! Another winner.

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  17. Linda Jacobs11 May 2010 at 05:47

    I like how you honor the present! and clever use of rein and reign!

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  18. Jack11 May 2010 at 06:11

    Gautami,

    Read 2 poems now. Both show depth of thoughts.

    Take care

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  19. sg beatty11 May 2010 at 08:57

    nice writing. enjoy your thoughts and play on words

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