Meditation on the Harp by Salvador Dali
(1932-34 67 x 47 cm)
Meditating for being one with you
You have given me all of you,
not keeping anything for yourself.
Trusting me enough to bare it all.
Your vulnerability was always
known to me somehow,
even without your saying so.
You have done much more.
You have opened yourself to me,
a very big responsibility
to care for, to nurture.
I am not one to let you down,
I will retain this part of you safe
within me. The same way
I expect you to keep me
safe within you.
You somehow complete me;
fulfilling that part, the vacuum
which I wasn’t aware, existed.
I was in a slumber,
you woke me up
crashing my defenses with your love.
With you I can be me-
nothing else matters anymore.
The great master
painted us the way we are
in the recesses of our minds;
the harp playing for us
for eternity….
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You have given me all of you,
not keeping anything for yourself.
Trusting me enough to bare it all.
Your vulnerability was always
known to me somehow,
even without your saying so.
You have done much more.
You have opened yourself to me,
a very big responsibility
to care for, to nurture.
I am not one to let you down,
I will retain this part of you safe
within me. The same way
I expect you to keep me
safe within you.
You somehow complete me;
fulfilling that part, the vacuum
which I wasn’t aware, existed.
I was in a slumber,
you woke me up
crashing my defenses with your love.
With you I can be me-
nothing else matters anymore.
The great master
painted us the way we are
in the recesses of our minds;
the harp playing for us
for eternity….
...............................................................
Read more images poetry here .
One high note, one low. Following and then leading; in harmony.
ReplyDeleteWell done my friend.
I really don't get Dali. Interesting work though.
ReplyDeleteI hear an inner dialog, between us. I'm glad you wrote this. Thanks.
Rose
xo
Very thoughtfully written.
ReplyDeleteI think in a lot of ways i could relate to it!
Strange though that may seem!
You pulled a lot out of this painting.
ReplyDeleteA dynamic baring of one's soul for another. I love how you connected with Dali's painting. To meld with another is a gracious act.
ReplyDeleteSpiritually entwined !
ReplyDeletesoooooo lovely... are you published yet?
ReplyDeletei can relate to this in a special way... wonderful!
ReplyDeleteVery strong finish!
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by.
"you woke me up
ReplyDeletecrashing my defenses with your love."
I like this. The image it projects, the music it sings.
I loved this and relate to it intensely. Well done!
ReplyDeletesuch a beautiful romantic poem..
ReplyDeletei could relate to this.
Loved this..so open and vunerable..trusting me enough to bear it all..that is what we all want in the one we love what we hope to find..nicely done..m
ReplyDeleteSimply beautiful!
ReplyDeleteKeshi.
Your lovely poem brought tears to my eyes, Gautami. And I love Salvador Dali! His paintings are so unique, draw me right in.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for stopping by and commenting on my post.
wonderful. I liked the Dali illustation
ReplyDeletenice work!
ReplyDeleteGuatami,
ReplyDeleteI've always enjoyed Dali's paintings, for some reason the bizaar starkness fascinates me.
Your poem, although prompted, by Dali, stands alone in it's tribute to the strong feelings felt between lovers. Really, very beautiful.
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brian: I did start this as a conversation. Infact it is a monologue. I wasn't very sure if it would work. Thanks for saying that it works.
ReplyDeleterose: There is an inner dialogue. You got that right.
steve: Well, what can I say to that?
my backward: Thanks!
getzapped: Dali painted that for entirely different reasons. I saw melded lovers after a while. I closed out my thoughts of why he painted that. Not easy.
jac: yes! Thanks..
ReplyDeletekindness: no, not yet. I do not think I am good enough to publish. Thanks!
polona: Glad that it made you feel that way.
norma: Thanks for saying that.
rethabile: Thanks for finding music in it.
tammy: thanks for saying so.
Thanks kai, keshi, sage and andrew.
ReplyDeletemadd: We all desire to be like that with one special person. Maybe we all are. I saw that aspect in this painting. Though Dali's work are not so simple.
robin: that is best compliment. Thanks!!
remiman: I too felt that it stands alone. I think if I take out the last stanza, it stands alone that way too.
Yes, Dali is very fascinating. I love his works.
What a beautiful poem. I flet like the paitning was speaking to me.
ReplyDeleteJust a quick word to thank you for stopping by. You said this is not quite poetry...I disagree. It is very much exactly that and more and it works as written with line breaks or would work as well as a prose poem. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteSuch an open poem. Great take on this week's prompt!
ReplyDeleteI like the Dali painting, too.
jone: Dali's painting always speak out to me. Sometimes not what he means but what I want it to be.
ReplyDeleteron: I thought of not having line breaks but decided to write like this. It reads better for most.
january: Thanks. I liked yours too.
Lovely, thoughtful poem. I think conversation between lovers is often unintentional poetry.
ReplyDeleteWonderful job as always. I particarly like the last stanza.
ReplyDeleteI like how at the end the meditator comes out of the painting and looks at him/herself inside of it; that the subjects of the painting have moved beyond the moment and look back at it.
ReplyDeleteI love love love Dali, that was a very fitting poem...awasome:)
ReplyDeleteTara/paris: I too believe that.
ReplyDeletewhitney: Thanks. I wasn't going to write that but wrote it as an after thought.
swissmiss:You got it exactly the way I wanted it to be read. Thanks!
etain: I can never get tired of looking at Dali's paintings.