grooved chest-
great looks;
smooth features,
marked surface-
straight lines;
a rule-
goes into
great lengths!
picture source: internet
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After structured poetry, it is good to come back to short, brief free verses. Mundane stuff really.
a clever one!
ReplyDeletecool! :)
ReplyDeleteKeshi.
polona, keshi: I am trying to write on inanimate objects. I can't seem to do very well. pat is too good about writing on those objects.
ReplyDeleteThanks!
You say mundane, but I like it. Good job.:)
ReplyDeleteThought you were lost for words?
ReplyDeleteAlways something out of left field.
Have a wonderful day tomorrow....
shooting words...nice
ReplyDeleteAm smiling too !
ReplyDeletecleverly done excellent!
ReplyDeleteandrew, magiceye, jac, trinitystar: thanks!
ReplyDeletewhitesnake: I do not call these true poetry. These are something which are what is known as asides!
And I thought you were describing your boyfriend. Excellent!!
ReplyDeleteI get it. You like a "take charge" type.
ReplyDeleteI like your word play :-)
ReplyDeleteHa! Very clever and reminds me of my daughter's ruler with the caption "Great Women Rulers" and a list of female rulers through history.
ReplyDeleteWould you like that Anthropomorphisized?
ReplyDeleteThe true measure of a man is how he treats someone who can do him absolutely no good.
Samuel Johnson
lovely one Gautami...
ReplyDeletepat: that is funny!
ReplyDeletepug: hmm. You can assume whatever you like.
britt, amalendu: thanks.
ces: well, you got that right.
donn/h.e.: How do you suggest I do that?