Friday, 17 November 2006

Frenzied Entropies

trying to taste coffee from your lips,
stopping space and time with a kiss;
eroding all the rules of diplomacy
with madness and neurotic honesty.

coaxing our flesh to confess
what our words never dare profess
simmering, shivering, reckless kiss
igniting arson between our hips’

inciting the surface of our skin
frenzied entropies lurking within,
catastrophe of emotions and thoughts
which alternatively distort and contort

we unwittingly undrape deceits,
writhing under the silken sheets.
molten tongues, roving palms
yielding to contagion of giddy charms.

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17 comments:

  1. John17 November 2006 at 01:28

    Hey Gautami,

    This is good. I liked the flow of emotions, the use of words, and the sentiments. I didn't know you wrote love poems.

    J

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  2. gautami tripathy17 November 2006 at 01:58

    Thanks John,

    I try not to write love poetry. But sometimes I give in too my whims.

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  3. Ghost Particle17 November 2006 at 03:56

    great weird poem. The words selection, but how it all ads together is nice! Have a great weekend!

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  4. Pat Paulk17 November 2006 at 05:40

    Very good!! Sometimes you just have to saddle up and ride a whim!!

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  5. samuru99917 November 2006 at 07:16

    Wow!
    This is great!
    I love it!
    Thanks for your visit today, and your kind words...meant so much!

    Margie

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  6. Anonymous17 November 2006 at 07:48

    Lovely!

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  7. Poetry by Kai17 November 2006 at 08:26

    good good piece!

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  8. gautami tripathy17 November 2006 at 11:05

    Thanks ghost. This kind of word selection is not easy.

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  9. gautami tripathy17 November 2006 at 11:05

    Yes Pat, I am doing just that.

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  10. gautami tripathy17 November 2006 at 11:06

    Margie Thanks. You are welcome. Hope you are much better.

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  11. gautami tripathy17 November 2006 at 11:06

    Thanks anon and Kai. Do keep dropping by.

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  12. polona17 November 2006 at 13:37

    good stuff! interesting choice of words but works very well. enjoyed.

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  13. J. Andrew Lockhart17 November 2006 at 22:03

    And I thought I was going to bed now! Wow!
    "coaxing our flesh to confess
    what our words never dare profess"
    this is my favorite line.

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  14. Amalendu17 November 2006 at 22:08

    I loved reading this.... Nice flow Gautami..

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  15. gautami tripathy18 November 2006 at 06:20

    Thanks Polona.

    j. andrew lockhart: So did I stop you from going to bed?
    :D

    amalendu: Thanks

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  16. Russell Ragsdale21 November 2006 at 20:01

    Wow, this was really wonderful. What an exciting poem. Thanks for this!

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  17. gautami tripathy22 November 2006 at 06:37

    Russell, you were missed. Thanks for the comment.

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