oh my so very mysterious!please consider ridding your blog of word verification....this is my 3rd try to decipher Thanks!
I need a cloak to hide.we all need a cloak to hide when necessary and become invisible. please remove the word verification
The photo is so amazing. You have captured the voice of the narrator well. I especially love the closing lines, which lifts the reader out of the circumstance and brings hope.
The last line - very intriguing... ~ to escape!
I see the power of those wings...
I like that little sideways step from line 2 to line 3. And the intensity of the wishful lines (3-5 and the final couplet)
I am not sure Venus can be trusted either. Hiding in her shadow however could be a good ploy, just don't make her jealous.
I miss feeding the sea gulls, I wonder...do they miss me?
I enjoyed this piece. How often do we find ourselves wishing we could do just that -- fly away.
Words with wings..Nice
"One that has become an issue with the world..." Potent
that's visit deep inside the soul,nice one
Your poetry is lovely .. this is no exception!!
Cultivating Venus in oneself is a wise move after a stretch in prison !
Sprouting wings and flying away is sometimes the best...