Sunday 18 December 2011

citizen of dreamland

I circled the purple
a game I played
as luck would have it
I had no trouble winning
my dream allow me to be flexible
I become a citizen of one the states of dreamland
far beyond earth, earth year
I don't lag behind
as I now fly wingless
no friction to curtail me

"happenstance?"

22 comments:

  1. Nice, Gautami. Concise and pretty.

    Pamela

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  2. circle the purple, that's an interesting game, could be taken many ways.

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  3. Love your title and I like the idea of flying wingless!

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  4. Love the title... a great piece!

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  5. no friction to curtail me - I like that!

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  6. a citizen of dreamland - I like it, and the idea of flying wingless...

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  7. Awesome! Fly free!
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/18/this-christmas/

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  8. I love "citizen of dreamland"...lovely.

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  9. No friction, indeed! Abstract and playful.

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  10. happenstance in dream land, yes possible and true :)
    happy gooseberry day!

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/19/in-the-silence/

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  11. Lovely! Flying wingless does sound wonderful.

    Kay, Alberta, Canada
    An Unfittie’s Guide to Adventurous Travel

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  12. 'Citizen of dreamland' - I am one too!!! This was a good read.. and so fresh!!! :)

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  13. At this time of year we are all citizens of Dreamland.
    Cheers,
    Mark Butkus

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  14. i got a few dreams i would not mind inhabiting...

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  15. isn't it great to become a citizen of dreamland every once and a while..flying wingless...nice..

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  16. In dreamland, anything is possible. Good poem.

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  17. I enjoyed this read; I've often dreamed of flying wingless and dancing on air. Something I often wish I could do in our physical reality.

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  18. I have always wanted to fly, but I kept envisioning myself with wings. You trumped me on this one. Beautiful, Guatami.

    -Nicole

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  19. Many great lines here. And "flying wingless" is just an amazing concept.

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  20. Oooooh. Love it! Dreams are my thing and I've begun flying wingless as well! As a full fledged citizen of the Land of Dreams, I welcome you!

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  21. Miss Gautami...?
    The missing Gautami?
    Loved your 55 Dream Girl
    Thanks for playing, thanks for remembering, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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