Wednesday, 26 October 2005

Autumn nights............elemental feelings

cool autumn nights
desiring of heating up
another body

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bathed in cool heat
breathless, hair a mess
autumn feels like sex
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5 comments:

  1. void26 October 2005 at 10:49

    On cool autumn nights
    The sweet taste of marlboro
    as I kiss the fire
    :-)

    M.

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  2. Enemy of the Republic26 October 2005 at 11:47

    This is a good poem. I never equated autumn with sex--what a metaphor! Glad to meet you and will return!

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  3. Deb26 October 2005 at 20:12

    I apologize for my other deragatory comment. The content struck a little too close to home.
    You are a gifted poet and have a beautiful soul. Please forgive me.

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  4. Just A Human27 October 2005 at 05:55

    why autumn nights?
    why not dusk or dawn?

    and why a body?
    why not mind?

    i enter your eyes... glide through your imagination and feel the breeze of your thoughts.

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    BTW - excellent work of words

    My version:

    juicy body soft as cushion
    every bite sweet as heaven

    ah the fruits of nature
    i am biting into sex

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  5. gautami tripathy27 October 2005 at 10:55

    Thanks Gulnaaz.

    I like it, Manoj.


    Thanks eotr, you are welcome to return. And get your friends to. Great party we can have here!

    deb, its ok. Thanks. there is nothing to forgive. smiles, please.

    Ah Just a human, what can I say.....you are good too...:)


    Gautami

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