tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post925242201299301403..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: incomplete yet so repletegautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-59041199210234983682010-06-09T08:04:18.946-07:002010-06-09T08:04:18.946-07:00beautiful flow!Pamelabeautiful flow!<br>Pamelaflauberthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-82819217016869382092010-06-08T19:10:39.096-07:002010-06-08T19:10:39.096-07:00This one had me searching for that meaning, and I ...This one had me searching for that meaning, and I think I found it. I love how you're able to take inanimate and give it life, breathing existence into your pieces.Missyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10572512831301719991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-53315082206554025362010-06-08T13:54:38.621-07:002010-06-08T13:54:38.621-07:00Loved these lines:earth as his belovedhe kissed it...Loved these lines:<br><br>earth as his beloved<br>he kissed it passionately<br>needing none other<br><br>Beautiful poem!naramalone.comhttp://naramalone.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-51390906307932828462010-06-08T08:07:01.858-07:002010-06-08T08:07:01.858-07:00these lines stand out for me -- hidden from moonhi...these lines stand out for me -- <br><br>hidden from moon<br>his non-existent shadows<br><br>great poem!angiehttp://another2doors.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-19865281786386784692010-06-08T06:10:25.360-07:002010-06-08T06:10:25.360-07:00Yikes! Death to the villian? You worked hard on...Yikes! Death to the villian? <br>You worked hard on this one.<br><br>Mine is at the link above.<br>..Jimhttp://jimmiehov6.blogspot.com/search/label/Haiku%20Bonesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-12188090360903260542010-06-08T05:44:21.158-07:002010-06-08T05:44:21.158-07:00Yeah! I too like how he didn't get what he wan...Yeah! I too like how he didn't get what he wanted but embraced what he got and loved it.<br><br>I linked in from Carry on Tuesdays -- lovely finding your words here!<br><br>LouiseM.L. Gallagherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13522775693728655487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-44088060070148115832010-06-08T05:09:20.155-07:002010-06-08T05:09:20.155-07:00I love how he didn't get what he wanted, but e...I love how he didn't get what he wanted, but embraced what he ended up with anyway.<br><br>The Rolling Stones..."you can't always get what you want, but you get what you need" played through my head after reading this.<br><br>- DinaDina Spicehttp://mypoeticlicense.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-60513381566968875572010-06-08T00:18:47.398-07:002010-06-08T00:18:47.398-07:00Such beautiful poetry that seems to just flow easi...Such beautiful poetry that seems to just flow easily. Good job!Kuyerjuddhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11343372542010548507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-88737001526148773772010-06-07T09:07:00.344-07:002010-06-07T09:07:00.344-07:00I love how the imagery of each stanza gets flipped...I love how the imagery of each stanza gets flipped into something new for the next one. Really love this one, Gautami!Julia Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-123481764234662982010-06-07T03:21:15.106-07:002010-06-07T03:21:15.106-07:00Now that is what I call falling in love, need I sa...Now that is what I call falling in love, need I say it: I LOVE IT ;)<br><br>and the word verification is perfect for your version of love:<br>BRITIAL<br>instead of<br>bridal<br>because it needs the T of a BRUTE<br><br>and I know you get this :)Lorrainehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-15600688981423216032010-06-06T17:30:08.248-07:002010-06-06T17:30:08.248-07:00I love the feeling of this poem - sweet, sensual a...I love the feeling of this poem - sweet, sensual and earthy.Zouxzouxhttp://www.zouxzoux.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-84206775535138527312010-06-06T16:51:05.779-07:002010-06-06T16:51:05.779-07:00She certainly brought him down to earth!She certainly brought him down to earth!Stan Skihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-57372113751171892372010-06-06T14:48:08.944-07:002010-06-06T14:48:08.944-07:00I like the flow and rhythm of this poem.I like the flow and rhythm of this poem.SOLhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09663418154339084941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-5154915954669272282010-06-06T10:08:54.403-07:002010-06-06T10:08:54.403-07:00Don't have words to express, just one thing.. ...Don't have words to express, just one thing.. amazing lines.. <br><br>sweet earthy embrace<br>took him in<br>held him like a lover<br><br>Thoughts.. you have a way to express Gautami..Ramesh Soodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.com