tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post9204410523191565868..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: ransomgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-90391437426168389162011-02-11T19:32:58.245-08:002011-02-11T19:32:58.245-08:00A mix of sensuality, beauty and images... I like ...A mix of sensuality, beauty and images... I like it. Thanks for sharing and for visiting and left a kind comment in my poem :-)Sorayahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09849410324663079558noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-41287931017390558542011-02-11T11:46:22.310-08:002011-02-11T11:46:22.310-08:00This was such an intense One Shot... beautiful! I ...This was such an intense One Shot... beautiful! I think I can relate to this one all too well, Gautami.. :)<br>And I really like those last lines (the one in quotes) of your poems... they are the perfect summary!!!Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-19485633625647267182011-02-11T07:45:09.563-08:002011-02-11T07:45:09.563-08:00Very nice! :-)Very nice! :-)Susannahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-25827347137018797612011-02-10T12:18:52.606-08:002011-02-10T12:18:52.606-08:00so nice...and the last line was a powerful "w...so nice...and the last line was a powerful "wow"Claudiahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-69001524144274734602011-02-10T09:41:20.447-08:002011-02-10T09:41:20.447-08:00I agree with so many of the other posters here - t...I agree with so many of the other posters here - this is a lush, sensual, sensuous poem - and it is gorgeous.lightversehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03018296461199649445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-83399639326438702052011-02-10T09:04:58.520-08:002011-02-10T09:04:58.520-08:00A lovely love poem.....dips into the good part of ...A lovely love poem.....dips into the good part of exotic.<br><br>Lady NyoAsobimehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15661326504398833746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77180319692300380042011-02-10T07:09:05.442-08:002011-02-10T07:09:05.442-08:00Passionate and sensual. What a tribute to a lover...Passionate and sensual. What a tribute to a lover.Myrna R.http://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-35564865126769460462011-02-10T01:07:04.757-08:002011-02-10T01:07:04.757-08:00I enjoyed it so much.. Thanks for sharing...Last l...I enjoyed it so much.. Thanks for sharing...<br>Last line was perfect...<br><br>ॐ नमः शिवाय<br>Om Namah Shivaya<br>http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/02/whispers-another-kind-of-valentines-day.htmlShashihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-74884236318789078552011-02-09T11:14:45.837-08:002011-02-09T11:14:45.837-08:00These are the words of someone in love. Great stu...These are the words of someone in love. Great stuff, Gautami!Eric 'Bubba' Alderhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31771709933011280172011-02-09T09:04:00.714-08:002011-02-09T09:04:00.714-08:00Beautifully sensuous. Absolutely love where you to...Beautifully sensuous. Absolutely love where you took this prompt. I had a difficult time with it and almost skipped it completely. Did however find inspiration. I love what you do Gautami,<br><br>ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2011/02/09/thank-you-neil-reid/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-74976553648763262392011-02-09T08:40:13.030-08:002011-02-09T08:40:13.030-08:00Gautami this is sensual poem. I agree with Judy, i...Gautami this is sensual poem. I agree with Judy, it is our interpretation of the prompts. That is what poetry is all about.<br><br>Pamelaflauberthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-69749288368508345692011-02-09T08:37:35.917-08:002011-02-09T08:37:35.917-08:00That would make one heck of a valentine. Head ove...That would make one heck of a valentine. Head over heels.barbarahttp://catsdetour.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-66807024561004892272011-02-09T04:27:36.399-08:002011-02-09T04:27:36.399-08:00I like your style and what you said about this bei...I like your style and what you said about this being your interpretation of the prompt. That is what poetry is about and I forget that. I really like this poem and I like the way you end with senses taking over you. Then the clincher at the end! Well done!Judy Roneyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05439992575221937268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-60101765900562856582011-02-09T03:34:25.476-08:002011-02-09T03:34:25.476-08:00I love the way you worked with all three prompts t...I love the way you worked with all three prompts to create this poem! Well crafted. I liked the third stanza: intellectual into sensual!Maryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-92015914052780227642011-02-09T02:53:45.503-08:002011-02-09T02:53:45.503-08:00The words reverberate..the last line sums it up.The words reverberate..the last line sums it up.irenehttp://enerihot.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-79540299448156780752011-02-09T00:49:55.611-08:002011-02-09T00:49:55.611-08:00Nice very very nice Gautami. you write so well.Nice very very nice Gautami. you write so well.budh.aaahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13277544197089022458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-14320783239732985502011-02-09T00:30:20.757-08:002011-02-09T00:30:20.757-08:00Beautifully crafted sensual poem - thank youBeautifully crafted sensual poem - thank youmarousiahttp://marousia.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-65946992954834358612011-02-08T20:16:40.099-08:002011-02-08T20:16:40.099-08:00What a wonderful sensual poem! I love this one.What a wonderful sensual poem! I love this one.Teresahttp://razzamadazzle.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-20244012616138495432011-02-08T20:13:29.621-08:002011-02-08T20:13:29.621-08:00Rings so true - not wanting to give way and yet yo...Rings so true - not wanting to give way and yet your heart falling captive against perhaps your better judgment. Well written dear. Yes, it was a brilliant last line.Beachannyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-1422664710144730052011-02-08T19:13:06.228-08:002011-02-08T19:13:06.228-08:00As usual, I loved your write. And I agree that la...As usual, I loved your write. And I agree that last line was priceless!Catyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13203872150946002183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-51979382185159996552011-02-08T18:47:08.809-08:002011-02-08T18:47:08.809-08:00this was a delicious write...and yes that last lin...this was a delicious write...and yes that last line rocked...Brian Millerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-39002648672151369672011-02-08T18:13:13.924-08:002011-02-08T18:13:13.924-08:00Love that last line!Love that last line!Timoteohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.com