tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post9142798962533340335..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: road tripgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-63547493959439298942009-04-17T07:42:00.000-07:002009-04-17T07:42:00.000-07:00Very dark - very evocative. My road trip was prett...Very dark - very evocative. My <a href="http://myreflectionsmusings.blogspot.com/2009/04/napowrimo-14-road-trip.html" rel="nofollow">road trip</a> was pretty uneventful! Praise be.Jenn Jilkshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05259681360456905055noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-7328345643974908552009-04-15T11:38:00.000-07:002009-04-15T11:38:00.000-07:00your trips to the dark side are always unique and ...your trips to the dark side are always unique and specialpolonahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-88559489610912536512009-04-15T05:09:00.000-07:002009-04-15T05:09:00.000-07:00Good grief I can't believe you wrote this drib...Good grief I can't believe you wrote this dribble.......<br><br>fast and furious ... Have you been taking things from others????<br><br>I am starting to wonder if you really are a woman or one of those transit whats its that roam the streets over there.......<br><br>I must say however.....I loved it!Whitesnakehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-64038995225666099932009-04-15T03:44:00.000-07:002009-04-15T03:44:00.000-07:00Mister Coppens, do you call this grovelling?Mister Coppens, do you call this grovelling?gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-58913167668474158122009-04-15T02:56:00.000-07:002009-04-15T02:56:00.000-07:00Road trips can have their ups and downs.Road trips can have their ups and downs.anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-65229013016601686802009-04-14T20:13:00.000-07:002009-04-14T20:13:00.000-07:00OMG that is so grody to the max...totally! Serious...OMG that is so grody to the max...totally! <br>Seriously, you should never EVER hitchhike, especially with a foul-mouthed trucker who has oily nuts!<br><br>I want to know who ambushed you?<br>Why? What is wrong with people?<br><br>My guess is that your protagonist is going to die...this is going to end poorly..<br>except for the trucker who will just go on his merry way as if nothing ever happened.Mister Coppenshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10826410608415260786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-42458813606182889172009-04-14T19:42:00.000-07:002009-04-14T19:42:00.000-07:00Quite the (mis?)adventure in that first one, and v...Quite the (mis?)adventure in that first one, and very intense. Well done!<br><br>Enjoyed the NaisaiKu too. <br><br>And thanks for stopping by!Kimberlyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08629699907387811744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-51885000861895049712009-04-14T19:37:00.000-07:002009-04-14T19:37:00.000-07:00OH this was GREAT! I love it LOL. And I loved the ...OH this was GREAT! I love it LOL. And I loved the line about the "vacuumed belly." GREAT adjective!<br><br>http://lori102870.blogspot.com/2009/04/turn-my-keythree-in-one-blogby-me.htmlLorihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11263049937762463263noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77582318826442949722009-04-14T17:59:00.000-07:002009-04-14T17:59:00.000-07:00This has the feel of flash fiction. Great story l...This has the feel of flash fiction. Great story line and phrasing.Pamhttp://coosacreek.org/amputated/2009/04/14/exultation-is-the-going/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-935844683749464652009-04-14T17:19:00.000-07:002009-04-14T17:19:00.000-07:00Woa, great story, intense poem.Woa, great story, intense poem.Gavinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12865699135545209220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-82578771621193572342009-04-14T16:40:00.000-07:002009-04-14T16:40:00.000-07:00Wow. What a kick-in-the-gut kind of story. I too ...Wow. What a kick-in-the-gut kind of story. I too hope it's fiction for you while also knowing that for someone out there, it is all too real. Thanks for this.Elizabethhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16097289963025434403noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-7840507723049856112009-04-14T16:29:00.000-07:002009-04-14T16:29:00.000-07:00soooooooooo goodsoooooooooo goodWayne Pitchkohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-9969170790683720042009-04-14T15:01:00.000-07:002009-04-14T15:01:00.000-07:00Excellent poem. As the others said, brave materia...Excellent poem. As the others said, brave material if non-fiction base, great picture painted either way!jimmmaaahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14794851177961398653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-88642347099372676892009-04-14T15:00:00.000-07:002009-04-14T15:00:00.000-07:00Hiya, thanks for taking The NaisaiKu Challenge? ag...Hiya, thanks for taking The NaisaiKu Challenge? again this week.<br><br>Powerful poetry on this post!<br><br>I see you have a new admirer!!<br>He's following you...Wendy Naisahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13865646023843503903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-88913202402602217222009-04-14T14:35:00.000-07:002009-04-14T14:35:00.000-07:00Holy cow! This is something else! Fiction, I hop...Holy cow! This is something else! Fiction, I hope! <br><br>Really excellent job at sustaining the suspense!Linda Jacobshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-81886448058909338372009-04-14T13:39:00.000-07:002009-04-14T13:39:00.000-07:00now thaz an adventure.... never go shopping when y...now thaz an adventure.... never go shopping when yr hungry... spot on the NaisaiKu....one more believerhttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2009/04/14/tangled-up-in-blue/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-71772300369818421722009-04-14T13:20:00.000-07:002009-04-14T13:20:00.000-07:00hey nice one....you know it strangely reminded me ...hey nice one....you know it strangely reminded me of de movie Slumdog Millionaire!songofseahttp://songofsea.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-43448272831351416972009-04-14T12:46:00.000-07:002009-04-14T12:46:00.000-07:00"I travel on dusty roads"_is a beautiful..."I travel on dusty roads"_<br><br>is a beautiful thought..many thanks..zoya gautamhttp://vci2i.blogspot.com/2009/04/echoes-of-indian-poetry-2.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-25261601873294543482009-04-14T08:21:00.000-07:002009-04-14T08:21:00.000-07:00You've been brave and ambitious here. The '...You've been brave and ambitious here. The 'vacuumed belly' alerts your reader.watermaidhttp://watermaid.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-33216596372868378952009-04-14T07:37:00.000-07:002009-04-14T07:37:00.000-07:00Wow!!!!!This truck is interesting.Wow!!!!!This truck is interesting.Jeeveshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-38696804731965202792009-04-14T07:15:00.000-07:002009-04-14T07:15:00.000-07:00I love this, even as I fall...I love this, even as I fall...Lorrainehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-20472286380947595822009-04-14T03:06:00.000-07:002009-04-14T03:06:00.000-07:00Wow. Give me a moment to just stop and breathe her...Wow. Give me a moment to just stop and breathe here after that ... Wow.<br><br>I especially liked the NaisaiKu at the end.sarahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03818420999930644450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67163493999177047922009-04-14T02:46:00.000-07:002009-04-14T02:46:00.000-07:00Phew, I just came to walk in your poetry patch and...Phew, I just came to walk in your poetry patch and I found this. That's some road trip an ambush, left for dead and then being saved by a foul mouthed trucker - amazing story! and a NaisaiKu for pudding!!<br><br>Amazing you...<br><br>BTW I can do The Tamla Walk!!SweetTalkingGuy..http://sewina.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com