tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post885839024859732860..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: congealed----Read Write Poem & Monday Poetry Traingautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-11179669813927134892007-11-26T09:45:00.000-08:002007-11-26T09:45:00.000-08:00Beautiful--and I liked the idea of hanging them al...Beautiful--and I liked the idea of hanging them all together like this...<br>Love,<br>D.Left-handed Trees...http://www.blogger.com/profile/06057727021295729384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-47972244677084278292007-11-21T10:06:00.000-08:002007-11-21T10:06:00.000-08:00very interesting and a beautiful flow to this poem...very interesting and a beautiful flow to this poem.polonahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-46220941735678026832007-11-20T11:26:00.000-08:002007-11-20T11:26:00.000-08:00Yeah, I like it! I think it's really good that...Yeah, I like it! I think it's really good that you managed a whole poem of American Sentences at such short notice. The link thingy's really hi-tech too!aka Danny Wisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-2998791632717695322007-11-20T08:13:00.000-08:002007-11-20T08:13:00.000-08:00this was fascinating and incredible!whoot! you go ...this was fascinating and incredible!<br>whoot! you go Gautami!<br>tried to visit last night but google kept throwing me out. beast.<br>i'm gonna have to try this one....Rhianhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17825362911575046105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-13829679319598627652007-11-20T06:47:00.000-08:002007-11-20T06:47:00.000-08:00This was great! I loved the way you brought it all...This was great! I loved the way you brought it all together, I could only put one sentance out there as a thought. This was great!slynnesoyouthinkican.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-39844044167131231042007-11-20T01:05:00.000-08:002007-11-20T01:05:00.000-08:00I liked the last line particularly - "reminde...I liked the last line particularly - "reminder of my gelled life"Catherinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08236329216260906624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-41551464286924499342007-11-19T19:36:00.000-08:002007-11-19T19:36:00.000-08:00Wow! This is my first glimpse of American sentence...Wow! This is my first glimpse of American sentences. Loved it!Missyhttp://www.missyfrye.net/Blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-60321922489891885152007-11-19T19:11:00.000-08:002007-11-19T19:11:00.000-08:00You took on quite an enterprise! I've thought ...You took on quite an enterprise! I've thought to integrate my lines into a poem, but not a poem entirely made up of American Sentences. Well done!kimberleyhttp://watercolorblues.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-8605715343953181252007-11-19T19:10:00.000-08:002007-11-19T19:10:00.000-08:00You did the linked lines really well. I tried my ...You did the linked lines really well. I tried my hand at it this morning and it felt like the lines were really long. You, however, used your line breaks and vivid imagery to keep the poem moving. Nice!Jessicahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09701158085304753313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-34270011672592526542007-11-19T19:03:00.000-08:002007-11-19T19:03:00.000-08:00That's really neat. I'll have to try it ou...That's really neat. I'll have to try it out for one of my Christmas editions. :)Amy Ruttanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02212879406999128140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-9208874405306601542007-11-19T15:09:00.000-08:002007-11-19T15:09:00.000-08:00Nice. I'll have to give this a try.Nice. I'll have to give this a try.Roscoe Jameshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08902338458122913172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-80178436391469512792007-11-19T14:57:00.000-08:002007-11-19T14:57:00.000-08:00how cool that you combined them to make a poem an...how cool that you combined them to make a poem and yet each one can stand alone. Have you tried writing ghazals?Paulinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-47785378395099533162007-11-19T14:39:00.000-08:002007-11-19T14:39:00.000-08:00Very interesting twist to combine several American...Very interesting twist to combine several American Sentences into one long poem. I like the creation you came up with.writerwomanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07645753712657412094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-24233416910602673382007-11-19T12:35:00.000-08:002007-11-19T12:35:00.000-08:00That comes across as something Ginsburg would have...That comes across as something Ginsburg would have come up with, yeah. And darned hard, too! <br><br>I admire people with the discipline to do these sorts of poems. Way cool.Susan Helene Gottfriedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-17597130809365836492007-11-19T12:01:00.000-08:002007-11-19T12:01:00.000-08:00ga-roooooooveey mama!I was diggin your jive...it s...ga-roooooooveey mama!<br>I was diggin your jive...<br>it sounds like a trip that I took back in the 60s..<br>Far Out!homo escapeonshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10826410608415260786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-64127602577693360502007-11-19T11:41:00.000-08:002007-11-19T11:41:00.000-08:00I like this style of poetry, Gautami and your poem...I like this style of poetry, Gautami and your poem is very good. :)T.A.Chasehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05406355224426259202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-56486974011774733812007-11-19T10:36:00.000-08:002007-11-19T10:36:00.000-08:00Superb Gautami, wow. You make it sound so easy, ye...Superb Gautami, wow. You make it sound so easy, yet I learnt how difficult. "reminder of my gelled life" says it all. Thank you.ULhttp://ul-typingaway.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-52963167245447217542007-11-19T09:50:00.000-08:002007-11-19T09:50:00.000-08:00'blocking out, I take out milk and try to cook...'blocking out, I take out milk and try to cook my breakfast, spoiling it.<br>congealed oats- stuck to the walls of glass- reminder of my gelled life.'<br><br>LOVE your closing lines. I agree with everyone - this form suits your voice perfectly. Thanks for popping by my party!juliahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-60770617518695864712007-11-19T09:09:00.000-08:002007-11-19T09:09:00.000-08:00Danika, I emailed this to Paul Nelson. Let us see ...Danika, I emailed this to Paul Nelson. Let us see if it pleases him or he slays me!gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-73889232720938308802007-11-19T07:13:00.000-08:002007-11-19T07:13:00.000-08:00I cangratulate you for doing a so good job with th...I cangratulate you for doing a so good job with this so difficult kind of poem!! I find it impossible to do that kind of poem and being able to have a result just a bit beautiful!!<br>I admire you for this!!!Jillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12871047592501542942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-14055849308195611062007-11-19T06:56:00.000-08:002007-11-19T06:56:00.000-08:00Interesting concept, hadn't thought of the com...Interesting concept, hadn't thought of the combined sentences, but they work well.<br><br>Rose<br><br>xoRose Dewy Knickershttp://dewyknickers.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-4536368552577561772007-11-19T06:23:00.000-08:002007-11-19T06:23:00.000-08:00You are always a brave one. I could only attempt o...You are always a brave one. I could only attempt one-sies--two-sies. And here you have a poem....debhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14744896385434246402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-76242752356700005422007-11-19T06:14:00.000-08:002007-11-19T06:14:00.000-08:00this flows nicely. You've lost your landscap...this flows nicely. You've lost your landscape at the top of your blog!Crafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-14300655392310911642007-11-19T06:06:00.000-08:002007-11-19T06:06:00.000-08:00lovely evocative images. i especially like that i...lovely evocative images. i especially like that it seems to tell a story. <br><br>time has been much on my mind this week so this speaks strongly to me.Joy Reneehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04976987581528470589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-32826999525075592472007-11-19T06:04:00.000-08:002007-11-19T06:04:00.000-08:00i like the new template. But what does the autolin...i like the new template. But what does the autolink thing do?<br><br>Nice form of poem...interesting.Ghost Particlehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07439371766182405053noreply@blogger.com