tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post8799343940486282622..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: Ode to Tiredness-----With due apologies to Keats---Poetry Thursdaygautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-30358014808253920522007-09-08T19:19:00.000-07:002007-09-08T19:19:00.000-07:00Wow...you wrapped out how I've been feeling fo...Wow...you wrapped out how I've been feeling for three weeks now! I'm sure others could relate too. It's a very busy time. I can't wait to get back to my blogging self. <br><br>Glad to see you're still a inspirational visit my dear. take care, and thanks for visiting me!Mariehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03165578165979664051noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-82463394970560832972007-09-08T07:12:00.000-07:002007-09-08T07:12:00.000-07:00i collapsed upon each new line until there was no ...i collapsed upon each new line until there was no line to hold me anymore.Jakhttp://theargonaut.wordpress.com/2007/09/07/in-him-was-life/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-64666097294463546002007-09-07T23:41:00.000-07:002007-09-07T23:41:00.000-07:00Gautami, keep it or pass it on if you wish, to fiv...Gautami, keep it or pass it on if you wish, to five bloggers who inspire you. You certainly not only inspired me with sleep on this poem, I think you were looking at me when you wrote this. Hahahha! I feel tired just like that! :-)Ceshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17338000465619901229noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-52816870335516379112007-09-07T16:28:00.000-07:002007-09-07T16:28:00.000-07:00I...can...really...relate...to...this...one....Goo...I...can...really...relate...to...this...one....<br><br>Good job! (Sigh)<br><br>(Yawn)...Pardon me.pepektheassassinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13494251587598676788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-1888054779125181262007-09-07T13:23:00.000-07:002007-09-07T13:23:00.000-07:00Congratulations on your well-deserved awards!!You ...Congratulations on your well-deserved awards!!<br><br>You said this perfectly. Even if I didn't know the feeling, I would know it from your words.tumblewordshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67465361483970088632007-09-07T10:09:00.000-07:002007-09-07T10:09:00.000-07:00ah...i know this and you have articulated it exact...ah...i know this and you have articulated it exactly.<br>Love,<br>D.Left-handed Trees...http://www.blogger.com/profile/06057727021295729384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-5095958861156605952007-09-07T00:43:00.000-07:002007-09-07T00:43:00.000-07:00Oh gautami, I soooo get 'the tiredness' po...Oh gautami, I soooo get 'the tiredness' poem...Beautifully expressed, my dear...And I truly have been feeling pretty exhausted these days...spent fro the awful awful heat we had for almost 8 days straight...So, I "get" it!<br><br>And Michele does, too....<br>I was trying to post over there and had to do the word verificatiob SIX times...I just cannot see that thing most of the time....! Anyway, by the time I got back---you had posted before me---SO, I posted again at Michele's and this time I read and typed the WV the first time and was correct! HOORAY! (lol)<br><br>Anyway, so happy to be here!OldOldLady Of The Hillshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02458879772193114892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-52148739083037154092007-09-06T23:39:00.000-07:002007-09-06T23:39:00.000-07:00*Eeih! beautifull,beautiful. A long time since i r...*Eeih! beautifull,beautiful. A long time since i read poem with such a unique flow of rhyme. i can't stop myself from reading it over and over gain. Thank God u r a blogger!Antoinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11676268168087060557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-377856192668564232007-09-06T19:19:00.000-07:002007-09-06T19:19:00.000-07:00Ooh, I hope my body didn't get ideas from this...Ooh, I hope my body didn't get ideas from this!<br><br>congrats on the awards!Susan Helene Gottfriedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-34166339597062073412007-09-06T18:54:00.000-07:002007-09-06T18:54:00.000-07:00Congratulations on your two blogger awards! Post t...Congratulations on your two blogger awards! Post them proudly.<br><br>I really love these lines in your poem:<br>"where mind sleeps body moves-<br>where body sleeps mind dances-"<br>Perfect.juliahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-10882086475753273392007-09-06T18:11:00.000-07:002007-09-06T18:11:00.000-07:00You captured the feeling perfectly!You captured the feeling perfectly!Jessicahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09701158085304753313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-86887855755825686312007-09-06T17:53:00.000-07:002007-09-06T17:53:00.000-07:00This was a great, Gautami- you made tiredness soun...This was a great, Gautami- you made tiredness sound so poetic!Regina Clare Janehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14287107184977896696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-6627257425263147122007-09-06T17:49:00.000-07:002007-09-06T17:49:00.000-07:00This is EXACTLY how I feel right now. I worked all...This is EXACTLY how I feel right now. I worked all day (seven hours) on my feet, and I am beyond tired. <br><br>Michele sent me.kenjuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07342414519714356343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-35587611732923953962007-09-06T17:41:00.000-07:002007-09-06T17:41:00.000-07:00"supine, stupefied feet/lay limp with fatigue..."supine, stupefied feet/lay limp with fatigue" is such a great line. I especially like "stupefied"! It's the feet that seem to feel it first and longest...on me anyway!...debhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14744896385434246402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-75660357775139406132007-09-06T15:33:00.000-07:002007-09-06T15:33:00.000-07:00Gautami, I don't think Keats would mind; no re...Gautami, I don't think Keats would mind; no reason why he should. I enjoyed the way form in this poem handles the common scourge.Rethabilehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03523368313680103826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-13543575971224601382007-09-06T13:58:00.000-07:002007-09-06T13:58:00.000-07:00sleep is life's own vacation.... i support it ...sleep is life's own vacation.... i support it wildly...<br>in answer to your question on my post... my aggressive use of punctuation is very simply,,, the way,,that i write.....paisleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-64200162164795752452007-09-06T13:10:00.000-07:002007-09-06T13:10:00.000-07:00Mmmm... I think I need a nap now! Great words.Mmmm... I think I need a nap now! Great words.split endshttp://splitends.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-45099259941659839672007-09-06T12:57:00.000-07:002007-09-06T12:57:00.000-07:00Unfortunately, this tired feeling is my life!And I...Unfortunately, this tired feeling is my life!<br><br>And I hope your friend recovers soon.Januaryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13036651950996873368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-64395734293120907382007-09-06T10:54:00.001-07:002007-09-06T10:54:00.001-07:00what a unique and awesome subject.as long as my mi...what a unique and awesome subject.<br>as long as my mind does not tire, I shall be happy :)Ramblerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04048279856792308653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31886981623638071012007-09-06T10:54:00.000-07:002007-09-06T10:54:00.000-07:00You did a wonderful job of expressing how the mind...You did a wonderful job of expressing how the mind does not always sleep.<br><br>I will keep your friend in my prayers. I'm very sorry. HUGSTammyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-82713928746704871582007-09-06T08:47:00.000-07:002007-09-06T08:47:00.000-07:00I prefer to pay tribute with my snores, not always...I prefer to pay tribute with my snores, not always the case. You nailed it perfectly!!Pat Paulkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03673667238840127360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-82485426068634960172007-09-06T08:20:00.000-07:002007-09-06T08:20:00.000-07:00A feeling I can well relate to this morning, after...A feeling I can well relate to this morning, after a night dominated by restless dogs!<br><br>Very nicely conveyed!Mike Davishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09320789675752582743noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-54732772754635100402007-09-06T07:38:00.000-07:002007-09-06T07:38:00.000-07:00Awesome poem! It's great to be tired when I...Awesome poem! It's great to be tired when I'm in bed, terrible when I'm anywhere else.Gilsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14764043301335852527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-34959817061621616032007-09-06T07:19:00.000-07:002007-09-06T07:19:00.000-07:00you described my friend very well. :)you described my friend very well. :)dsnake1http://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-970512737969473012007-09-06T07:03:00.000-07:002007-09-06T07:03:00.000-07:00LOL--no fatigue here--kiddos started back to schoo...LOL--no fatigue here--kiddos started back to school today. Yippie! I'm free. . . freeeeee. . .LJCohenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07530826748768737972noreply@blogger.com