tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post8647156820515216787..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: is it a love poetry or missing muse or nothing?gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-90038283892856601592010-10-06T19:42:23.893-07:002010-10-06T19:42:23.893-07:00I enjoyed the pivot points; I felt the poem moving...I enjoyed the pivot points; I felt the poem moving and changing direction. Beautiful as always, Gautami!Christinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06291220353313572984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-9960346180747747272010-10-05T18:00:26.000-07:002010-10-05T18:00:26.000-07:00support us by visiting a few poets near your entry...support us by visiting a few poets near your entry.<br>thanks for the contribution…<br><br>here is one of mine:<br>http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/04/what-can-you-see/Jinglehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-9063112753521308932010-10-05T17:49:13.919-07:002010-10-05T17:49:13.919-07:00Love the way you turn words back onthenselves. Cle...Love the way you turn words back onthenselves. Clever.nara malonehttp://naramalone.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-33069300471440444962010-10-05T10:41:42.361-07:002010-10-05T10:41:42.361-07:00Another good one, Gautami. I like "word paint...Another good one, Gautami. I like "word painting on my palette of emotions", and "cracked surface of the earth laughs at my naivete". Wonderful lines that lead to "cottage cheese." That's something I can certainly relate to. Thanks again,<br><br>ElizabethElizabethhttp://claudetteellinger.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-88721160185983236662010-10-04T19:16:02.825-07:002010-10-04T19:16:02.825-07:00yes, you write beautiful emotions simply... Liked ...yes, you write beautiful emotions simply... Liked it.<br><br>ॐ नमः शिवाय<br>Om Namah Shivaya<br>Twitter: @VerseEveryDay<br>Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.comShashihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-24051146365860609052010-10-04T19:08:32.905-07:002010-10-04T19:08:32.905-07:00Wow, very creative!Wow, very creative!OMJhttp://theoldmasonjar.wordpress.com/2010/10/04/where-art-thou-muse/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-48852178099803761912010-10-04T16:59:02.174-07:002010-10-04T16:59:02.174-07:00Perfect word-painting. Very nicely done, my friend...Perfect word-painting. Very nicely done, my friend.<br>Victorialiv2write2dayhttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-15510212206696626942010-10-04T15:19:49.795-07:002010-10-04T15:19:49.795-07:00Nice touch, cottage cheese. Thinking of writing ab...Nice touch, cottage cheese. Thinking of writing about the muse myself. Sometimes my brain is curdled too.irenehttp://enerihot.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-90677194608895497882010-10-04T13:31:14.108-07:002010-10-04T13:31:14.108-07:00From "soar is getting sour" to "......From "soar is getting sour" to "... make cottage cheese": really turns the poem.Maureenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13290283101378474845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-17199726921493537912010-10-04T13:06:10.114-07:002010-10-04T13:06:10.114-07:00ha...i really like those last 2 lines...ha...i really like those last 2 lines...Brian Millerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-59961083539379510872010-10-04T08:20:24.633-07:002010-10-04T08:20:24.633-07:00Interesting PoemInteresting Poemumapoemshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11529447615364043190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-53221449509735410242010-10-04T07:41:31.407-07:002010-10-04T07:41:31.407-07:00cottage cheese ;)nicely done!loveNlightGabicottage cheese ;)<br><br>nicely done!<br><br>loveNlight<br>GabiGabriela Abalohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11316879938383542026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-92142470832036058322010-10-04T06:49:21.468-07:002010-10-04T06:49:21.468-07:00simply beautiful play with words! well done!Rejoic...simply beautiful play with words! well done!<br><br><a href="http://pinklady-bing.blogspot.com/2010/10/rejoice-haiku.html" rel="nofollow">Rejoice (Haiku)</a>Bing (PinkLady)http://www.blogger.com/profile/01562123246667338670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-43759585197749541742010-10-04T05:43:28.120-07:002010-10-04T05:43:28.120-07:00love it!love it!fiveloafhttp://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77259166514384797812010-10-04T05:31:48.535-07:002010-10-04T05:31:48.535-07:00share 3 poems with us within 60 hours... how cool!...share 3 poems with us within 60 hours... how cool!<br>love to see you in our place.<br>stay beautiful all the way.Jinglehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-53830021788212172882010-10-04T05:31:01.419-07:002010-10-04T05:31:01.419-07:00yummy treat,love the special favors in your work.....yummy treat,<br>love the special favors in your work...<br>beautiful contribution!Jinglehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-40378692919612089522010-10-03T18:21:33.313-07:002010-10-03T18:21:33.313-07:00You have done great with this experimental poem..m...You have done great with this experimental poem..middle line works so well...ah, doesn't it happens in life too..Thanks Gautami..newer heights in creativity every day..Ramesh Soodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-14037607170589104352010-10-03T10:16:19.771-07:002010-10-03T10:16:19.771-07:00This is so cleverly written and I love the way it ...This is so cleverly written and I love the way it ended.<br><br>I just watched the opening ceremony of the Commonwealth Games and thought of you!keiths ramblingshttp://www.keithsramblings.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-61353323513273396042010-10-03T09:51:45.776-07:002010-10-03T09:51:45.776-07:00Loved this style of Haiku with a central pivot lin...Loved this style of Haiku with a central pivot line. Very interesting and liked the way it connected. Excellent!!Nankahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-69026153954256054112010-10-03T09:48:37.679-07:002010-10-03T09:48:37.679-07:00Interesting pivot effect. I think it worked quite ...Interesting pivot effect. I think it worked quite well.Rumyahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17548105346820601110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-21908864423104158762010-10-03T09:43:54.945-07:002010-10-03T09:43:54.945-07:00Clever response to the prompt!PamelaClever response to the prompt!<br>Pamelaflauberthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-60715220506267301752010-10-03T06:33:37.960-07:002010-10-03T06:33:37.960-07:00A wonderful piece, with an excellent surprise at t...A wonderful piece, with an excellent surprise at the end! =)<br><br>-WeaselSystematic Weaselhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12467584502095433332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-3008041650044636582010-10-03T03:05:20.959-07:002010-10-03T03:05:20.959-07:00Love the words "soar is getting sour"! Y...Love the words "soar is getting sour"! Your palette of emotions reflects the creative spirit seeking new pastures! beautiful!Gemma @ Greyscalehttp://greyscaleterritory.blogspot.com/2010/10/rejoice-in-words.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-46091886320240718782010-10-03T02:57:05.127-07:002010-10-03T02:57:05.127-07:00Well written and very clever, I really liked it!Well written and very clever, I really liked it!Deborahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06231195313149947101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23244566497050000532010-10-03T01:00:14.084-07:002010-10-03T01:00:14.084-07:00Great ending.Great ending.anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.com