tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post8630253454677747075..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: entanglinggautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger40125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-41755442887318788972008-11-06T08:30:00.000-08:002008-11-06T08:30:00.000-08:00Loved it! Thanks for visiting!Loved it! Thanks for visiting!Maciehttp://www.pavementponderings.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-29163587796381489102008-11-05T12:24:00.000-08:002008-11-05T12:24:00.000-08:00I love the idea that hair might gossip. This is a ...I love the idea that hair might gossip. This is a good fun poem.fourwindshaigahttp://fourwindshaiga.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-48699524980899952222008-11-04T09:58:00.000-08:002008-11-04T09:58:00.000-08:00i see this as a very sensual poem with just enough...i see this as a very sensual poem with just enough intrigue to make it work... love itpolonahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-15024526225889120242008-11-04T09:19:00.000-08:002008-11-04T09:19:00.000-08:002 prompts 1 post - sweet!liked the poem as well.2 prompts 1 post - sweet!<br><br>liked the poem as well.Fangshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16433565057778885520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-38784721103180457632008-11-03T19:48:00.000-08:002008-11-03T19:48:00.000-08:00ssst... i want to hear your hair gossiping...ssst... i want to hear your hair gossiping...latreehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07521924109825718501noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-9563829421381216402008-11-03T11:18:00.000-08:002008-11-03T11:18:00.000-08:00Woohoo! Lovely disguise!Woohoo! Lovely disguise!tumblewordshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-91876740671780023552008-11-03T08:55:00.000-08:002008-11-03T08:55:00.000-08:00Very Sensual Tami and nice job in combining promts...Very Sensual Tami and nice job in combining promts.Tammyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-3950987003124149592008-11-03T07:46:00.000-08:002008-11-03T07:46:00.000-08:00i liked this one Gautamiwishesdevikai liked this one Gautami<br><br>wishes<br>devikaDevikahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-51450268061002861052008-11-03T04:59:00.000-08:002008-11-03T04:59:00.000-08:00I really like the line about your hair gossiping. ...I really like the line about your hair gossiping. Very beautiful take on the prompts.Pamhttp://coosacreek.org/amputated/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-18933898470241830622008-11-03T02:31:00.000-08:002008-11-03T02:31:00.000-08:00What an original, and very sensual, take on the pr...What an original, and very sensual, take on the prompt. Very nicely done Gautami.Robinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02409530202277375625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-64365662088445944122008-11-02T21:34:00.000-08:002008-11-02T21:34:00.000-08:00What a gorgeous poem.What a gorgeous poem.Ravenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04996538460071167819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-43847536844715422472008-11-02T15:29:00.000-08:002008-11-02T15:29:00.000-08:00makes me long (for just a second) for the days whe...makes me long (for just a second) for the days when my hair was long enough to entangle two lovers. :) Beautiful poem.Suehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07764262558160301061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-35491990262118778242008-11-02T15:28:00.000-08:002008-11-02T15:28:00.000-08:00the rhythm of this is lovely!the rhythm of this is lovely!bkclubcarehttp://bkclubcare.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-2347297539874158942008-11-02T14:11:00.000-08:002008-11-02T14:11:00.000-08:00Original and sensual. Beautiful.Original and sensual. Beautiful.bella rumhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07551543776509110496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-28594675817417282342008-11-02T13:14:00.000-08:002008-11-02T13:14:00.000-08:00"...if my hair could gossip, believe me it wo..."...if my hair could gossip, believe me it would have so much to convey." <br><br>wowsers. I've played this game...both as the disguise and the disguised...powerful images like a gut punch!<br><br>Thanks, Gautami--Beth P.http://www.blogger.com/profile/02621990661878989356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-57262027118429357432008-11-02T13:12:00.000-08:002008-11-02T13:12:00.000-08:00"Look in the mirror describe what you see the..."Look in the mirror describe what you see the face of an angel standing,staring at me."Whitesnakehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-71508851515548857412008-11-02T11:04:00.000-08:002008-11-02T11:04:00.000-08:00This painted wonderful pictures in my mind. Lovel...This painted wonderful pictures in my mind. Lovely!Alisa Calloshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01769123227296380262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-32439328537837078742008-11-02T10:52:00.000-08:002008-11-02T10:52:00.000-08:00Beautiful, and so sensual and intimate I almost fe...Beautiful, and so sensual and intimate I almost feeling like I'm inadvertantly eavesdropping!Deborah Godinhttp://notesfromthecloudmessenger.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-87172275549242491802008-11-02T09:37:00.000-08:002008-11-02T09:37:00.000-08:00makes me long for a disguise.makes me long for a disguise.Crickethttp://cricket51.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-36566523600296116482008-11-02T04:39:00.000-08:002008-11-02T04:39:00.000-08:00very intimate,, almost erotic.. i liked this very ...very intimate,, almost erotic.. i liked this very much...paisleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-7734550847857530982008-11-02T04:25:00.000-08:002008-11-02T04:25:00.000-08:00In this world, love is the best disguise to be ado...In this world, love is the best disguise to be adopted!?:)Boruthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13990298332042076231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-33360243830381661102008-11-02T02:47:00.000-08:002008-11-02T02:47:00.000-08:00Deeply psychological. You're certainly back on...Deeply psychological. You're certainly back on form with this.anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-28397007787694700832008-11-02T01:50:00.000-07:002008-11-02T01:50:00.000-07:00Your own hair as a disguise, pulling close to hide...Your own hair as a disguise, pulling close to hide...these images resonate with me, even though my hair is rather short! I know the experience. Often I close my eyes to hide..<br><br>This is beautifully done.SandyCarlsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-17137844894498309802008-11-01T22:23:00.000-07:002008-11-01T22:23:00.000-07:00I was engrossed and now I am confused. Not in tha...I was engrossed and now I am confused. Not in that "my disguise is you" line, rather about the mechanics and how it all could be acted out. It's the engineer in me.<br>At any rate I liked it, I still get engrossed each time I read this poem. Perhaps trying to get in on the gossip as well.<br>..Jimhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-39757511180832788032008-11-01T22:13:00.000-07:002008-11-01T22:13:00.000-07:00I like the sensuality of this, and the way the sen...I like the sensuality of this, and the way the senses bleed into the emotions.Billhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10717622168200846486noreply@blogger.com