tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post8583768392175944494..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: writing on a blank wallgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23332652301706182502012-05-26T20:45:42.437-07:002012-05-26T20:45:42.437-07:00Jagged time === a beautiful phrase and lovely poem...Jagged time === a beautiful phrase and lovely poem. k.manicddailyhttp://manicddaily.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-49042280178711711382012-05-26T15:36:44.650-07:002012-05-26T15:36:44.650-07:00rhyming away you are - beautifully! :)rhyming away you are - beautifully! :)Hannah Denskihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09894458424175347031noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-74370495421204961842012-05-25T14:06:39.120-07:002012-05-25T14:06:39.120-07:00I enjoy the images and how you weave color into th...I enjoy the images and how you weave color into the unfolding of the poem. Just beautiful.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67527463360118183992012-05-25T09:36:14.604-07:002012-05-25T09:36:14.604-07:00Excellent write. Love the adjectives, very cool. ...Excellent write. Love the adjectives, very cool. Great read. ThanksFred Rutherfordhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-76045325338733250662012-05-25T09:35:19.356-07:002012-05-25T09:35:19.356-07:00This is my first visit to your site...am so happy ...This is my first visit to your site...am so happy you visited mine...thank you...<br>This is lovely...like others, I am drawn to the first two lines and the last stanza...but the entire poem is wonderful.<br>Peace,<br>Siggi in Downeast MaineSiggi in Downeast Mainehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12977578917775406831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-9605193701388426692012-05-24T11:24:34.299-07:002012-05-24T11:24:34.299-07:00Great work.Anna :o]Great work.<br><br>Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-34458795281874935592012-05-24T09:57:13.366-07:002012-05-24T09:57:13.366-07:00I like the notion of massive crocuses...considerin...I like the notion of massive crocuses...considering they are so small...nice...Tess Kincaidhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-37146369843444329522012-05-23T07:39:59.691-07:002012-05-23T07:39:59.691-07:00This is beautifully filled with melancholy thought...This is beautifully filled with melancholy thoughts of passing time. Your imagery is wonderful.Myrna R.http://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-62488420666581431612012-05-22T12:11:55.214-07:002012-05-22T12:11:55.214-07:00Lovely write."the massive crocusses swayakin ...Lovely write.<br><br>"the massive crocusses sway<br>akin to the hips of a buxom dancer in a bar<br>a flower child of bygone era <br>now rotting in secret of her mind clatter" These lines blew me away.Nara Malonehttp://naramalone.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-83214600196879362562012-05-21T13:20:06.711-07:002012-05-21T13:20:06.711-07:00Simply brilliant, especially the last few lines.Simply brilliant, especially the last few lines.keiths ramblingshttp://www.keithsramblings.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-60487984909095886742012-05-21T11:44:43.662-07:002012-05-21T11:44:43.662-07:00stillness chills the griefbut cannot bend the marr...stillness chills the grief<br>but cannot bend the marrow<br><br>equals<br><br>word majesty.<br><br>=)Suehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-83653458998400217942012-05-21T09:56:38.548-07:002012-05-21T09:56:38.548-07:00I think this is my favorite of this Whirl. Top to...I think this is my favorite of this Whirl. Top to bottom beautifulbarbarahttp://briarcat.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-51939822699161396422012-05-21T09:44:17.436-07:002012-05-21T09:44:17.436-07:00I agree, the first two lines and the jagged time i...I agree, the first two lines and the jagged time image rise above the rest of the poem.christopherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-83990287178962577952012-05-21T01:23:25.417-07:002012-05-21T01:23:25.417-07:00The 'empty hand' and the 'jagged time&...The 'empty hand' and the 'jagged time' in it paint a moving picture.Rinkly Rimeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-76059989260973808752012-05-21T01:20:31.280-07:002012-05-21T01:20:31.280-07:00Gauthami,Read 2 poems now. Tears do clear out one&...Gauthami,<br><br>Read 2 poems now. Tears do clear out one's mind to see things more clearly without shades of grey. This one shows confidence to achieve what one wants inspite of doubts by others.<br><br>Take careJackhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15896075408610203350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-43367880769904499242012-05-20T20:42:32.901-07:002012-05-20T20:42:32.901-07:00I like the empty hand jagged time...this is a grea...I like the empty hand jagged time...this is a great work!! :)Hannahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-79552857034552328972012-05-20T20:18:26.192-07:002012-05-20T20:18:26.192-07:00Love the last stanza.Love the last stanza.awalkinmyhearthttp://awalkinmyheart.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77040442448736829292012-05-20T18:31:13.386-07:002012-05-20T18:31:13.386-07:00your writings are also well written and from the h...your writings are also well written and from the heart. ThanksQuotes,Photos and a little Poetryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12912336424986923049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-32161539397414451852012-05-20T17:43:49.686-07:002012-05-20T17:43:49.686-07:00I agree about the last line....but it is all good ...I agree about the last line....but it is all good and thanks for sharing your wordsWayne Pitchkohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-85639042954471867282012-05-20T15:40:01.182-07:002012-05-20T15:40:01.182-07:00I enjoyed the whole poem but especially the last l...I enjoyed the whole poem but especially the last lines...an "empty hand filled with jagged time"..there are a lot of people inflicted with that disease...gsbhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15407137341843413701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-49839202270929812792012-05-20T15:19:27.943-07:002012-05-20T15:19:27.943-07:00This is lovely - and as the others have said, the ...This is lovely - and as the others have said, the first two lines are brilliant ... also the last stanza but really, the whole thing is very nice ...<br><br>http://thepoet-tree-house.blogspot.ca/2012/05/no-one-would-think.htmlS.E.Ingrahamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02135141369161538082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-28130455740005243922012-05-20T12:58:15.583-07:002012-05-20T12:58:15.583-07:00Jagged time bites us all...Jagged time bites us all...Jinksyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-5975731642008359962012-05-20T12:49:58.046-07:002012-05-20T12:49:58.046-07:00I like the first two lines, as well. I also love ...I like the first two lines, as well. I also love the last stanza. Well done.brenda whttp://undercaws.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-4022379821284221292012-05-20T12:31:25.279-07:002012-05-20T12:31:25.279-07:00Those first two lines are exquisite!Those first two lines are exquisite!Mama Zenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.com