tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post8473688337286359174..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: tangled messgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-71999245024107664252009-05-21T13:04:56.264-07:002009-05-21T13:04:56.264-07:00this was so real..bautiful.this was so real..bautiful.godessofnirvanahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18213642663354902851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-80657242274121061052009-05-21T01:14:00.361-07:002009-05-21T01:14:00.361-07:00Gosh I really liked the imagery this gives the rea...Gosh I really liked the imagery this gives the reader. The ending was perfect. Can't wait to see if there's more :)Janice Thomsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02506920585319893814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-70299808745220631002009-05-20T17:24:28.742-07:002009-05-20T17:24:28.742-07:00Another lovely poem. The image of the lost and ta...Another lovely poem. The image of the lost and tangled lady and the strong trucker ties right into "disconnected".Bluebethleyhttp://bethandwriting.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-17075706433611548882009-05-18T23:20:00.000-07:002009-05-18T23:20:00.000-07:00i like the imagery and significance of the comb.i like the imagery and significance of the comb.floretahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18220834824793299258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-667885835522534372009-05-18T14:48:00.000-07:002009-05-18T14:48:00.000-07:00The contrasts! Loved it - the lady - a mess and t...The contrasts! Loved it - the lady - a mess and the trucker, calm and strong...Dee Martinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-35620204811251816592009-05-18T13:28:00.000-07:002009-05-18T13:28:00.000-07:00G'tami, wow! That was an emotive description ...G'tami, wow! That was an emotive description of desperation. Finding sympathy in roughest corners of humanity. Enjoyed that!MichaelOhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16266298848244629919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-55478565744347382132009-05-17T20:16:00.000-07:002009-05-17T20:16:00.000-07:00great work! as usual... :)great work! as usual... :)J. Andrew Lockharthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-62651066393030610932009-05-17T20:10:00.000-07:002009-05-17T20:10:00.000-07:00This is the first poem in read in this series, and...This is the first poem in read in this series, and its a very lovely one. Often in life we get ourselves into so many problems that we find difficult to come out of it. Just like her hair.The Warrior Poethttp://shaikzakeerhussain.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-54934261995190448162009-05-17T19:06:00.000-07:002009-05-17T19:06:00.000-07:00And what a trip it was - nice work!And what a trip it was - nice work!Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-55514953230752620842009-05-17T17:47:00.000-07:002009-05-17T17:47:00.000-07:00always interesting to readalways interesting to readquin brownehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09804746948797234402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-84801290997716849982009-05-17T15:47:00.000-07:002009-05-17T15:47:00.000-07:00This is great stuff. Next please!This is great stuff. Next please!keithhttp://keithsramblings.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-15207450788953569522009-05-17T13:46:00.000-07:002009-05-17T13:46:00.000-07:00there is always a story to follow when I come here...there is always a story to follow when I come hereunknownwriter49http://unknownwriter49.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-27017155628804593382009-05-17T11:44:00.000-07:002009-05-17T11:44:00.000-07:00I have pictures in my head. Love the last verse pa...I have pictures in my head. Love the last verse particularly.jonehttp://deowriter.wordpress.com/2009/05/17/tolerance-disconnected/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68867106337383382332009-05-17T10:37:00.000-07:002009-05-17T10:37:00.000-07:00Your poetry is beautiful.Your poetry is beautiful.Dianehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10519875632878992728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-45575518781109796192009-05-17T09:56:00.000-07:002009-05-17T09:56:00.000-07:00beautifully woven and intriguing - so vivid and de...beautifully woven and intriguing - so vivid and descriptive!!!dannihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14675797306131871129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-61763825442789301972009-05-17T09:03:00.000-07:002009-05-17T09:03:00.000-07:00Very impressive by describing action, thoughts and...Very impressive by describing action, thoughts and emotions without going a long way round. Only when commenting itself (line 7) a bit in the danger of redundancy. But who cares when the whole poem is great stuff to read. <br><br>Best wishes<br>RalfRBroekerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08602494065251750620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-50752380006014373432009-05-17T05:49:00.000-07:002009-05-17T05:49:00.000-07:00I thought this sounded familiar! Now, I'm rea...I thought this sounded familiar! Now, I'm really intrigued. I think these poems could be made into a novel!<br><br>And so nice of you to dedicate your blog to Granny. I almost cried when I read her post about her husband.Linda Jacobshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-43714291590891254812009-05-17T05:24:00.000-07:002009-05-17T05:24:00.000-07:00So tender, G. And vivid. One of your best of late!...So tender, G. And vivid. One of your best of late!Susan Helene Gottfriedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-57397406945422933082009-05-17T03:54:00.000-07:002009-05-17T03:54:00.000-07:00Phew, perhaps the message is in the title, it'...Phew, perhaps the message is in the title, it'll be interesting to see how this untangles.<br><3andyhttp://properjoes.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-61721209344542108192009-05-17T02:45:00.000-07:002009-05-17T02:45:00.000-07:00Your series read like a movie script, and engages ...Your series read like a movie script, and engages the reader.irenethttp://eneri-hot.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-57371504910424697842009-05-17T02:08:00.000-07:002009-05-17T02:08:00.000-07:00Haven't been here for a while but again a firs...Haven't been here for a while but again a first class poemMarjahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17458942200244031009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-89411718266848808812009-05-17T01:43:00.000-07:002009-05-17T01:43:00.000-07:00Nice read..its interesting.Nice read..its interesting.songofseahttp://songofsea.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-5412412842721182442009-05-17T00:20:00.000-07:002009-05-17T00:20:00.000-07:00veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy tangly mess :)but i lo...veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy tangly mess :)<br>but i loved the read!<br><br>http://whenhekissesher.wordpress.com/2009/05/16/disconnected/ADhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04089753612782157378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-88243591749633570872009-05-16T23:45:00.000-07:002009-05-16T23:45:00.000-07:00This is lovely and intense. I look forward to see...This is lovely and intense. I look forward to seeing where this ends up going.Ann (bunnygirl)http://www.maelstromrock.comnoreply@blogger.com