tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post8235277378793257941..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: stringsgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31889561863917711412012-05-18T16:09:14.971-07:002012-05-18T16:09:14.971-07:00A powerful mantra type poem that sends the soul se...A powerful mantra type poem that sends the soul searching for comfort.Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23163256933893404932012-05-17T11:21:52.062-07:002012-05-17T11:21:52.062-07:00I might not understand its significanceyet I cut f...I might not understand its significance<br>yet I cut fruits into strings<br><br>Such a powerful image.<br><br>=)Suehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-8204660186395876802012-05-15T20:04:49.185-07:002012-05-15T20:04:49.185-07:00i def like the italicized stanza the best and you ...i def like the italicized stanza the best and you set it up well in the opening...demons are there for sure....Brian Millerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-25470595308101940982012-05-15T19:35:30.908-07:002012-05-15T19:35:30.908-07:00Sometimes the undercurrents of a tradition can be ...Sometimes the undercurrents of a tradition can be much darker than one can fathom. This is the subtle darkness that underlies this poem.Semaphorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-76722300569742402872012-05-14T09:10:04.664-07:002012-05-14T09:10:04.664-07:00an enjoyable read!an enjoyable read!Miskyhttp://miskmask.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-19039465856153074302012-05-14T08:32:58.289-07:002012-05-14T08:32:58.289-07:00A little homage goes a long way...A little homage goes a long way...Trellissimohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02283663872471564907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-91143357545825904682012-05-14T05:06:15.207-07:002012-05-14T05:06:15.207-07:00No, I don't want the demons to visit. And why ...No, I don't want the demons to visit. And why does devastation follow the flags of peace? Or preceed them, overtake them?Yvonne Osbornehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18212188414972694795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-35714878841893538122012-05-14T00:07:14.193-07:002012-05-14T00:07:14.193-07:00intense...demons out!!!My take.intense...demons out!!!<br><br>My <a href="http://blackandwhiteheart.wordpress.com/2012/05/14/the-magpie-tales-week-117/" rel="nofollow"> take</a>.S Jayanthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04454731848877201941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-40547168502166121292012-05-13T19:39:18.753-07:002012-05-13T19:39:18.753-07:00Oh my what a powerful piece! Such a fascinating re...Oh my what a powerful piece! Such a fascinating read!Karen S.http://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-35269572418154686032012-05-13T18:22:32.546-07:002012-05-13T18:22:32.546-07:00Yes, Gautami, the final stanza is beautifully frig...Yes, Gautami, the final stanza is beautifully frightening.<br><br>Pamelaflauberthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-35760455682423558122012-05-13T14:12:01.450-07:002012-05-13T14:12:01.450-07:00Strong write, Gautami. The final stanza is fright...Strong write, Gautami. The final stanza is frightening.brenda whttp://undercaws.com/2012/05/12/pinot-wordled/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-30214716081351374682012-05-13T13:55:13.500-07:002012-05-13T13:55:13.500-07:00"Reaching the summit, only to fall."Ah, ..."Reaching the summit, only to fall."<br>Ah, we'e back with Sisyphus again - well done.Berownehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09524661173663604641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68355191340769522032012-05-13T13:03:34.778-07:002012-05-13T13:03:34.778-07:00There is a fascinating thread running through many...There is a fascinating thread running through many of today's wordles. Bravo.vivinfrancehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67655221133938005832012-05-13T11:41:24.024-07:002012-05-13T11:41:24.024-07:00I like this: "yet I cut fruits into strings I...I like this: "yet I cut fruits into strings I do not wish demons to visit"Shawnahttp://rosemarymint.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com