tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post7902096247366971503..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: filigreed wallsgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger40125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-55731397251544622032009-06-21T13:20:18.277-07:002009-06-21T13:20:18.277-07:00"Ghosts... ran away so fast"...couldn..."Ghosts... ran away so fast"...couldn't imagine...lying absurdly between us.<br><br>Very compelling piece.<br><br>KatPoetikathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16877694888419628533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-5416152316222460012009-06-17T20:50:48.583-07:002009-06-17T20:50:48.583-07:00dumb not to understand the context. :(But the firs...dumb not to understand the context. :(<br>But the first para, of sunlight entering and gushing, the swaying effect is wonderful.Meghahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08456122349556682811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-61557454230269274902009-06-17T11:19:59.635-07:002009-06-17T11:19:59.635-07:00beautiful, romantically passionate.beautiful, romantically passionate.Suehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07764262558160301061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-6019302973519799252009-06-16T07:59:23.112-07:002009-06-16T07:59:23.112-07:00Tami, this wonderful A cleveruse of the prompt I ...Tami, this wonderful A clever<br>use of the prompt I really like your images and the way your wolds flow. This almost seem like a dream scape, where all that is lovely yet sad vanishes in the morning light. Where all that is warm and good awaits you.<br>I just loved this.<br><br><br>love, Melanie-bdBeloved Haiku Dreamshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-65712685650862398022009-06-15T22:41:53.074-07:002009-06-15T22:41:53.074-07:00how interesting! not sure what I would do with the...how interesting! not sure what I would do with the word "wall"J. Andrew Lockharthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-40674902518111872822009-06-15T20:04:38.479-07:002009-06-15T20:04:38.479-07:00Rippling walls that let the light in. How lovely...Rippling walls that let the light in. How lovely.gabriellehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14488809730387509552noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68361934792094439172009-06-15T19:49:37.753-07:002009-06-15T19:49:37.753-07:00Filigreed walls - a beautiful image and words to m...Filigreed walls - a beautiful image and words to match.Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-37703842127993618832009-06-15T13:39:24.956-07:002009-06-15T13:39:24.956-07:00Nice piece, filled with so many pleasant images.Nice piece, filled with so many pleasant images.fourwindshaigahttp://fourwindshaiga.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-92096109670629133992009-06-15T10:06:16.300-07:002009-06-15T10:06:16.300-07:00kind of romantic in the beginning, but kind of sor...kind of romantic in the beginning, but kind of sorrowful at the end, a relationship not yet fruitful, perhaps?lissahttp://www.justwritingwords.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-82072823151239989172009-06-15T10:00:59.518-07:002009-06-15T10:00:59.518-07:00very beautiful. love the entire concept. good job!...very beautiful. love the entire concept. good job!Destineehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11579580954567322817noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-12548924531377744032009-06-15T07:49:35.245-07:002009-06-15T07:49:35.245-07:00your heartbeathurtled into minein a staccatoI can ...your heartbeat<br>hurtled into mine<br>in a staccato<br><br>I can almost feel the pounding! <br><br><br><a href="http://www.delenemartin.com/?p=888" rel="nofollow">Stealing Time #5</a>Dee Martinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05077141911351737390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-88091967231715983362009-06-15T00:45:03.503-07:002009-06-15T00:45:03.503-07:00Excellent-and very romantic!Excellent-and very romantic!Edward S Gaulthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06415140379858811855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-15731576284023476782009-06-15T00:37:23.069-07:002009-06-15T00:37:23.069-07:00This is a beautifully written piece. Thanks for sh...This is a beautifully written piece. Thanks for sharing. :)yyamhttp://yyam.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-53512041679678597552009-06-14T20:24:47.896-07:002009-06-14T20:24:47.896-07:00Lovely rhythm. Reminds me on one I wrote.Lovely rhythm. Reminds me on one I wrote.jonehttp://deowriter.wordpress.com/2009/06/14/one-single-impression-walls/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-39168915313658862252009-06-14T19:24:16.604-07:002009-06-14T19:24:16.604-07:00Beautiful poem. I have been looking for some wood...Beautiful poem. I have been looking for some wooden roll-up shades for my fron porch & they remind me of the filigried walls that you speak of. <br><br>xoxo,<br>JP/debJP/debhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16588554280207421724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-3840206945621006712009-06-14T18:45:49.189-07:002009-06-14T18:45:49.189-07:00Ain't it the truth--dang ghosts won't stay...Ain't it the truth--dang ghosts won't stay around to play or fight in the daylight.<br><br>Tight and dry!<br><br>Thanks--Beth P.http://www.blogger.com/profile/02621990661878989356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-33111073683229422052009-06-14T18:28:24.362-07:002009-06-14T18:28:24.362-07:00You're on with "assimilated" next we...You're on with "assimilated" next week!SandyCarlsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-72068054858511079012009-06-14T15:05:32.337-07:002009-06-14T15:05:32.337-07:00Gautami, with a little more time I do believe I co...Gautami, with a little more time I do believe I could fit Catherine the Great of Russian into the folds of your poem. <br>Your work here certainly draws me in and right away I thought of her, even of her sordid 'love life.'<br>..Jimhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67806433713203697642009-06-14T14:00:01.830-07:002009-06-14T14:00:01.830-07:00Beautiful and enigmatic, and perfectly balanced.Beautiful and enigmatic, and perfectly balanced.Deborah Godinhttp://notesfromthecloudmessenger.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-65809907008600398662009-06-14T12:45:05.346-07:002009-06-14T12:45:05.346-07:00So many wonderful lines in this. Thanks.ParasiteSo many wonderful lines in this. Thanks.<br><br><a href="http://thomg.blogspot.com/2009/06/sunday-scribblings-absurd.html" rel="nofollow">Parasite</a>ThomGhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-53038647282684490332009-06-14T12:34:10.880-07:002009-06-14T12:34:10.880-07:00That was Wow...esp liked the lines.....I felt your...That was Wow...<br>esp liked the lines.....<br><br>I felt your pull<br>drawing me into you<br>your heartbeat<br>hurtled into mine<br>in a staccato<br><br>(makes me shy)songofseahttp://songofsea.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-44210829860898634372009-06-14T11:43:15.577-07:002009-06-14T11:43:15.577-07:00oh so lovely. I so enjoy seeing how things can shi...oh so lovely. <br>I so enjoy seeing how things can shift.Tammie Leehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09018402134070834516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-33305397489801735052009-06-14T11:40:15.665-07:002009-06-14T11:40:15.665-07:00You really have a lovely way of weaving words toge...You really have a lovely way of weaving words together, bravo :)Lorrainehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-63373547815303214652009-06-14T11:19:56.491-07:002009-06-14T11:19:56.491-07:00I can see it...beautiful.bI can see it...beautiful.<br><br>bbhttp://torristravels.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-63456511170622067152009-06-14T10:39:08.323-07:002009-06-14T10:39:08.323-07:00This is beautiful! have a great day :)tThis is beautiful! <br>have a great day :)<br>tTanya Gwen Minnickhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04693382083314985157noreply@blogger.com