tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post7757210342541783270..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: animal instinctgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-75068072870923182782008-03-18T10:23:00.000-07:002008-03-18T10:23:00.000-07:00oh, that was very very good g!!.. having a dog i w...oh, that was very very good g!!.. having a dog i wanna cry b/c you described her so well.. love stinks sometimes...OneMoreBelieverhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16010376737431344381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-76987791688783195432008-03-17T18:20:00.000-07:002008-03-17T18:20:00.000-07:00You wrote it with amazing clarity and skill, Gauta...You wrote it with amazing clarity and skill, Gautami, though I would have preferred not to have read the ending, but then I avoid all gruesome visuals that I can.Marcia (MeeAugraphie)http://meeaugraphie.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-43055888485241959222008-03-17T06:29:00.000-07:002008-03-17T06:29:00.000-07:00Wow, like so many others I did not expect that - r...Wow, like so many others I did not expect that - really taken by surprise there!<br><br>I don't know what would have been crueler, the killing or abandoning the (cat?) somewhere. Although I can never understand how anyone can be cruel to animals, especially not when using it as a means to hurt someone else.Paulhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06776918959979397311noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-24683608116734611602008-03-14T23:54:00.000-07:002008-03-14T23:54:00.000-07:00Aaww!! Why couldn't he have just let her go?!!...Aaww!! Why couldn't he have just let her go?!! Why kill her!! Story well built though, as always! And, thanks for coming by, Gautami! :)M as in Minthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02737629866326152834noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-56984847813334826022008-03-14T13:50:00.000-07:002008-03-14T13:50:00.000-07:00Bad man...good poem. I like it very muchBad man...good poem. I like it very muchLaurencehttp://semi-retired.livejournal.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-62617290526383891652008-03-14T09:58:00.000-07:002008-03-14T09:58:00.000-07:00Lissa: it's ok. Don't worry.michelle: I so...Lissa: it's ok. Don't worry.<br><br>michelle: I somehow thought suasion was out of place. These are great words and I loved writing this. Thanks!<br><br>keith, jc, tumblewords,noah, jane doe: thanks! I like twisted tails!<br><br>donn: that means, you have not been keeping abreast with my poetry. I write a lot of dark poetry. I suppose, you read only the philosophical ones. <br><br>When I wrote it, I was thinking of a dog. but a cat works just fine!gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-82150506766818593932008-03-14T09:44:00.000-07:002008-03-14T09:44:00.000-07:00A twist of knife - a well done surprise. Nice!A twist of knife - a well done surprise. Nice!tumblewordshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-39386719484663964452008-03-14T03:26:00.000-07:002008-03-14T03:26:00.000-07:00What a great poem, I did not expect the knife, it ...What a great poem, I did not expect the knife, it was a great twist. I always love reading your work, you are a great writer. Hope you have a good weekend. <br><br>JaneJane Doehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11087464056692451751noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-41149823786367323222008-03-13T14:50:00.000-07:002008-03-13T14:50:00.000-07:00Yikes..have you gone over to the dark side? I love...Yikes..<br>have you gone over to the dark side? <br><br>I love how you caught me off guard and then let my little broken heart swirl around the drain.<br><br>This guy has some deep issues to be resolved. Taking it out on the cat won't bring her back buddy! I'm assuming that it's a cat but it could be one of those poncy, little, lapdogs.<br><br>This is exactly what Disney did to all of us in the 60s..show us the noble, loyal, altruistic, family pet and then kill it!<br><br>Not one of my children will ever get to watch Old Yeller..EVER!Donnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10826410608415260786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-43786602078361182712008-03-13T13:31:00.000-07:002008-03-13T13:31:00.000-07:00It is good :).It is good :).noahthegreathttp://noahthegreat.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-48989729429598971742008-03-13T12:44:00.000-07:002008-03-13T12:44:00.000-07:00I admire how easily you wrap us around a concept a...I admire how easily you wrap us around a concept and then yank it away. This is so chilling. And very, very well done!j.c. montgomeryhttp://commonleafs.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-28969531843652813352008-03-13T09:55:00.000-07:002008-03-13T09:55:00.000-07:00Guatami, what a powerful and disturbing piece. You...Guatami, what a powerful and disturbing piece. You have a wonderful way with words.keith hillmanhttp://keithsramblings.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-72747593729673608962008-03-13T08:07:00.000-07:002008-03-13T08:07:00.000-07:00Hello Guatami and welcome back. You've used s...Hello Guatami and welcome back. You've used suasion correctly. I think your poem is really good. Vivid, sad and a bit dark but, good. Thanks for sharing your poetry with the rest of us. You are very talented. Have a nice day.Michelle Johnsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-69508465703663298932008-03-13T06:56:00.000-07:002008-03-13T06:56:00.000-07:00I did not see the knife coming. irrespective. you ...I did not see the knife coming. irrespective. you know how to tell a story.lissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00706027242022517570noreply@blogger.com