tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post7725980056309568799..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: don't forget to get my cigarsgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-91428264276705811242009-08-20T10:03:17.851-07:002009-08-20T10:03:17.851-07:00My first time here and I am very humbled. you have...My first time here and I am very humbled. you have such a wonderful spectrum. And this one is my fav in my 30 mins spent here. Hope to find more time and go through your poems.<br><br>NAARYANAARYAhttp://naarya.blogspot.com/search/label/Poems...noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-27324498772350117482009-07-31T14:35:59.281-07:002009-07-31T14:35:59.281-07:00Love this line -- "I like the macabre me.&quo...Love this line -- "I like the macabre me." Gorgeous!Jessicahttp://everythingfeedsprocess.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-81963933876682353882009-07-30T19:38:25.362-07:002009-07-30T19:38:25.362-07:00wow. I had to read it a couple times.wow. I had to read it a couple times.Sheila (bookjourney)http://bookjourney.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-16892656091422643592009-07-30T18:50:01.575-07:002009-07-30T18:50:01.575-07:00spooky!spooky!Irene Tohhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12918979903066830662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-10066271161377029812009-07-30T17:49:13.330-07:002009-07-30T17:49:13.330-07:00I think we are the same in death as we were in lif...I think we are the same in death as we were in life.Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-4321278127013307172009-07-30T15:37:24.652-07:002009-07-30T15:37:24.652-07:00very nice.....being a painter especially liked gre...very nice.....being a painter especially liked green merging to brown and grays grow out of red.Wayne Pitchkohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67633504109624343562009-07-30T10:47:13.514-07:002009-07-30T10:47:13.514-07:00A wow of a read - the last line is outstanding and...A wow of a read - the last line is outstanding and joins the earlier lines in producing a vivid and ghostly memoir.Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77893140652878797372009-07-30T10:26:27.563-07:002009-07-30T10:26:27.563-07:00Ah-ha! Love your tone here! Like James, I also l...Ah-ha! Love your tone here! Like James, I also love the idea of serenity being boring to the dead speaker. Great take on the prompt...full of fun surprises.Erin Davishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-48990932827892971692009-07-30T08:38:37.981-07:002009-07-30T08:38:37.981-07:00I love the idea of the serenity boring the dead sp...I love the idea of the serenity boring the dead speaker to death. Nice.Jameshttp://coyotemercury.com/blog1noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-35864425013106065832009-07-30T07:07:25.803-07:002009-07-30T07:07:25.803-07:00"green merges into brownsgrays grow out of re..."green merges into browns<br>grays grow out of red"<br><br>Words to die for...Markhttp://radio-nowhere.org/nb/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-63939235224730714712009-07-30T07:06:50.585-07:002009-07-30T07:06:50.585-07:00yet all this serenitybores me to deathHow Classica...<i>yet all this serenity<br>bores me to death</i><br><br>How Classical Greek: Better a slave and living than a prince in the underworld! as the dead Achilles told Odysseus.<br><br>I like your comparison of new and old headstones' comparative accretions of exhaust fumes.Paul Oakleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17426789386840488470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-3119909365268572122009-07-30T07:02:09.144-07:002009-07-30T07:02:09.144-07:00Hello Gautami,I particularly like the first half o...Hello Gautami,<br><br>I particularly like the first half of the poem, especially the words in the first two stanzas.Derrickhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31328342697913118202009-07-30T06:56:36.902-07:002009-07-30T06:56:36.902-07:00Excellent!! I like how honest this one is- how the...Excellent!! I like how honest this one is- how the speaker says straight out "yet all this serenity bores me to death." And I love the echoing in the line "come midnight, I come alive."wildplumwhisperhttp://wildplumwhisper.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-57743277796619829492009-07-30T06:49:25.705-07:002009-07-30T06:49:25.705-07:00you are on hell of an excellent spook...you are on hell of an excellent spook...Lorrainehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14667955555940467301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-59776580534315964082009-07-30T06:13:42.434-07:002009-07-30T06:13:42.434-07:00I like the twists and turns you achieve in this on...I like the twists and turns you achieve in this one.Nathanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11552467037640904091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-54854244157438006602009-07-30T04:31:14.392-07:002009-07-30T04:31:14.392-07:00Neat take on this prompt!! :) Enjoyed reading thi...Neat take on this prompt!! :) Enjoyed reading this.Bobbiehttp://constantcurrent.blogspot.com/2009/07/brothers.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-33514715361014413362009-07-30T02:58:05.730-07:002009-07-30T02:58:05.730-07:00Hard one. Social and mystical. Especially I like t...Hard one. Social and mystical. Especially I like the lines "yet all this serenity/bores me to death/(oh I am already dead!)/come midnight, I come alive".<br><br>Best wishes<br>RalfRBroekerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08602494065251750620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-32798417632964806292009-07-30T01:59:30.018-07:002009-07-30T01:59:30.018-07:00Nice, very good memoirs of a corpse.Nice, very good memoirs of a corpse.Tarun Mitrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07121533974931375556noreply@blogger.com