tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post7696278680212132931..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: baton of timegautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-88563961727127053982010-10-02T23:16:29.292-07:002010-10-02T23:16:29.292-07:00My wings flutter and I fly away... nice words and ...My wings flutter and I fly away... nice words and I enjoyed the poetry.. lovely...<br><br>ॐ नमः शिवाय<br>Om Namah Shivaya<br>Twitter: @VerseEveryDay<br>Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.comShashihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-78569948239015516592010-09-28T18:55:31.593-07:002010-09-28T18:55:31.593-07:00if you did not sign in to follow us yet, please fe...if you did not sign in to follow us yet, please feel free to do so.<br>Welcome back next week,<br>Glad to read you today.Jinglehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-16253671401188184412010-09-28T18:54:37.770-07:002010-09-28T18:54:37.770-07:00love it,the sun burns, it also gives you light.bri...love it,<br>the sun burns, it also gives you light.<br>bright words.Jinglehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-12403458141255190212010-09-28T17:38:19.162-07:002010-09-28T17:38:19.162-07:00Love this Gautami!PamelaLove this Gautami!<br>Pamelaflauberthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68947970565305855252010-09-28T06:41:52.204-07:002010-09-28T06:41:52.204-07:00http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/awards-from-the-...http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/awards-from-the-blogging-universe/sweet-princess-award-4-female-community-members/<br><br>awards for you.<br>Thanks for the support.Jingle Poetryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00364147117851373747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-3958089166059077132010-09-24T22:00:59.865-07:002010-09-24T22:00:59.865-07:00when the clock talks we are afraid and throw it aw...when the clock talks we are afraid and throw it away...But Time is the fire in which we all burn and finally we go and time stays. Nice depiction.Nankahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-29178448087064426122010-09-24T15:44:15.923-07:002010-09-24T15:44:15.923-07:00Nicely! but please don't fly too close to the ...Nicely! but please don't fly too close to the sun!<br><br><3Andy Sewinahttp://properjoes.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-59506113693738545072010-09-24T07:26:31.562-07:002010-09-24T07:26:31.562-07:00I think this is one of your best poems, yet! Righ...I think this is one of your best poems, yet! Right from the first line I was hooked. So many scrumptious poetic elements to it!Linda Jacobshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09156972661541133665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-86184694989323791862010-09-24T07:19:17.488-07:002010-09-24T07:19:17.488-07:00I am reminded of the story of Icarus but with a tw...I am reminded of the story of Icarus but with a twist. Yet I can conjure several meanings from this. Interesting concept. Nice title.Collective Epiphanieshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05845563042924617384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-18800792806895345042010-09-24T06:39:16.634-07:002010-09-24T06:39:16.634-07:00wonderful poem.. made me thinkof the poor overwork...wonderful poem.. made me thinkof the poor overworked guardian angel assigned to me..lol.. maybe I'll behave today and let him rest.. <br>Have a great day!<br>PatsyPblacksawhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16959380392842211295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-3960280577553057382010-09-23T09:50:57.913-07:002010-09-23T09:50:57.913-07:00A dream of consequence. It changed me, and it mad...A dream of consequence. It changed me, and it made me laugh in delight.christopherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-25931693843166355112010-09-23T02:26:43.603-07:002010-09-23T02:26:43.603-07:00great flow. Trademark Gautami linesgreat flow. Trademark Gautami linespiahttp://courtingdestiny.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-5034111204207179272010-09-22T18:39:39.234-07:002010-09-22T18:39:39.234-07:00Flying is good for the soul! Nice piece!Flying is good for the soul! Nice piece!Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-59524658432183022602010-09-22T18:13:33.991-07:002010-09-22T18:13:33.991-07:00Beautiful rhythm and imagery -- this poem soars. :...Beautiful rhythm and imagery -- this poem soars. :)Thomma Lynhttp://www.thommalyngrindstaff.com/storiesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-13551549440746525912010-09-22T13:21:55.534-07:002010-09-22T13:21:55.534-07:00I loved how this flows, much like a butterfly in f...I loved how this flows, much like a butterfly in flight. Such great lines, too. I really enjoyed this.ThomGhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-74948865007507744542010-09-22T11:45:45.352-07:002010-09-22T11:45:45.352-07:00Wonderfully done!Wonderfully done!Sweetest in the Galehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-83591443345333674202010-09-22T10:15:30.846-07:002010-09-22T10:15:30.846-07:00If Sun burns you.. it will be you giving light.......If Sun burns you.. it will be you giving light....Gautami..sun would have played his role..giving you light before you burn..don't know..have started feeling that unless one burns..one can't spread light.. Thank you, as always.. you are on a roll..flowing creativity..Ramesh Soodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-37781347664963210122010-09-22T09:41:36.392-07:002010-09-22T09:41:36.392-07:00Nice take on time as a gift.Nice take on time as a gift.Tony Nolandhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15090583562737225942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-12397653473245446972010-09-22T09:17:57.982-07:002010-09-22T09:17:57.982-07:00A thought provoking poem, lovely.A thought provoking poem, lovely.Deborahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06231195313149947101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-73285965197469536082010-09-22T09:08:57.049-07:002010-09-22T09:08:57.049-07:00This is wonderful. Nice write. Love and Light, Sen...This is wonderful. Nice write. Love and Light, Sendersenderupwordshttp://senderupwords.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-15780996551608624472010-09-22T07:33:24.558-07:002010-09-22T07:33:24.558-07:00this made me think a lot of images .. something mi...this made me think a lot of images .. something might inspire me soon i know .. thank you !ladynimuehttp://ladynimue.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-425487528796445832010-09-22T06:30:53.142-07:002010-09-22T06:30:53.142-07:00so tender the wings of a butterfly. so fly careful...so tender the wings of a butterfly. so fly carefully :)<br>this was wonderful!Priyanka Bhowmickhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11658819351312019129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68601673240815096652010-09-22T05:58:46.864-07:002010-09-22T05:58:46.864-07:00I can really relate to this writing. Very beautifu...I can really relate to this writing. <br>Very beautiful... <br>Thank you<br><br>Happy 3WW!gigidiazhttp://gigidiaz.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-80368751077360918232010-09-22T04:57:25.348-07:002010-09-22T04:57:25.348-07:00A butterfly? Moth? Nice capture of the struggle to...A butterfly? Moth? Nice capture of the struggle to escape the cocoon.~willow~http://noweepingallowed.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.com