tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post7428016465574213750..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: deathless ghostsgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-40757610340030984092009-06-26T21:32:41.799-07:002009-06-26T21:32:41.799-07:00Indeed, this tells a 'too late' tale. Nice...Indeed, this tells a 'too late' tale. Nice work.Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-48250075641039619872009-06-24T22:50:20.206-07:002009-06-24T22:50:20.206-07:00hey gautami,this was beautiful.reminded me of some...hey gautami,<br>this was beautiful.<br>reminded me of something...<br><br>beautiful work..<br><br>am following the blog now!Leohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09351446518713188860noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-10603333396737597462009-06-24T14:43:27.466-07:002009-06-24T14:43:27.466-07:00Mine's up at last. I apologise in advance if y...Mine's up at last. I apologise in advance if you find it a bit agressive!keithhttp://ifyouhadwaited.blogspot.com/2009/06/you-would-have-understood-if-youd.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-71245557181290468632009-06-23T10:09:58.463-07:002009-06-23T10:09:58.463-07:00wonderful!wonderful!J. Andrew Lockharthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31181088798771786392009-06-22T22:53:53.963-07:002009-06-22T22:53:53.963-07:00It eerily interesting. Gives a glimpse of how it w...It eerily interesting. Gives a glimpse of how it would feel to be in that situation..huh!!cyclopsevenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11440123931878867581noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-49429372407559364582009-06-22T14:45:28.920-07:002009-06-22T14:45:28.920-07:00You would have understood me had you just waited -...You would have understood me had you just waited - <br><br>truly a priceless line - brilliantWitchScribehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07388819164221290647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-30250064002200802022009-06-22T12:03:19.985-07:002009-06-22T12:03:19.985-07:00kind of mysterious, like someone far away is reach...kind of mysterious, like someone far away is reaching you beyond the gravelissahttp://www.justwritingwords.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-90997947516060792452009-06-22T11:03:13.620-07:002009-06-22T11:03:13.620-07:00I like that shiver...I like that shiver...murat11http://www.blogger.com/profile/00663364407992075130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-78482447715188091252009-06-22T08:09:41.310-07:002009-06-22T08:09:41.310-07:00Tight rhythmic writing, lovely imageryTight rhythmic writing, lovely imageryjabbloghttp://jabblog-jabblog.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-75673402114309952492009-06-22T08:02:25.623-07:002009-06-22T08:02:25.623-07:00i always adore poetry with darker tones and this o...i always adore poetry with darker tones and this one is no exception. loved the visuals it offerstotomaihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01805083472267649276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-61551184278942615542009-06-22T07:25:47.211-07:002009-06-22T07:25:47.211-07:00Very visual...it made me shiver! Loved it... :~)Very visual...it made me shiver! Loved it... :~)Fledgling Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-37566678427659186032009-06-22T06:08:37.413-07:002009-06-22T06:08:37.413-07:00I like the quote at the end. Gives a voice to the ...I like the quote at the end. Gives a voice to the spirits, for me.Julia Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31607545625654294882009-06-22T02:10:59.607-07:002009-06-22T02:10:59.607-07:00Ghostly when ghosts stir..I did not understand the...Ghostly when ghosts stir..I did not understand the last two lines though, it sort of popped up from nowhere..like a ghostly appearanceIrene Tohhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12918979903066830662noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-11033956366516541652009-06-22T01:18:07.556-07:002009-06-22T01:18:07.556-07:00Excellent as usual.Excellent as usual.anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-78814739699361291822009-06-21T21:24:06.948-07:002009-06-21T21:24:06.948-07:00The whole poem is a tight, visual piece of work &a...The whole poem is a tight, visual piece of work & I love the last line!<br><br><i>Peace,<br>JP/deb</i><br><br><a href="http://janepoet.blogspot.com/2009/06/vision-assimilation.html" rel="nofollow">Visual Assimilation</a>JP/debhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16588554280207421724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77927481904076241792009-06-21T19:38:30.524-07:002009-06-21T19:38:30.524-07:00This is amazing...quite haunting and thrilling at ...This is amazing...quite haunting and thrilling at the same time. <br><br>I love the words that finish it too.<br><br>I'm shocked to read your most recent post....I never thought that could happen. Thanks for the tale of caution. It must be a massive loss, I'm sorry. I can't imagine losing 3 years of work. <br><br>Bellabellamochahttp://bellamocha.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31689121578987573432009-06-21T16:20:28.982-07:002009-06-21T16:20:28.982-07:00I think we all dance with ghosts from time to time...I think we all dance with ghosts from time to time. And, who doesn't get chills when someone walks over our grave. Great write. Have a nice night.Michelle Johnsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-64467183427388602922009-06-21T15:17:21.729-07:002009-06-21T15:17:21.729-07:00Interesting: you change your area into a groovy, d...Interesting: you change your area into a groovy, dark and gothic one.<br><br>Best wishes<br>RalfRBroekerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08602494065251750620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-87710405557366972172009-06-21T11:44:41.681-07:002009-06-21T11:44:41.681-07:00Brilliant as ever!Brilliant as ever!keithhttp://keithsramblings.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-75438358482328064142009-06-21T11:33:14.692-07:002009-06-21T11:33:14.692-07:00Bugga, winter can cannot be far away!Bugga, winter can cannot be far away!Whitesnakehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-63995967643442208902009-06-21T11:03:34.595-07:002009-06-21T11:03:34.595-07:00oh I love the other worldy feel of this oneoh I love the other worldy feel of this oneMissyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10572512831301719991noreply@blogger.com