tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post7344111482593576563..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: slithering snakesgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-33961005787857666112008-04-13T03:48:00.000-07:002008-04-13T03:48:00.000-07:00nightmarish stuff... well done!nightmarish stuff... well done!polonahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-43343384779767753982008-04-12T09:30:00.000-07:002008-04-12T09:30:00.000-07:00thiss is nice, esspecially the ending. :)thiss is nice, esspecially the ending. :)dsnake1http://www.blogger.com/profile/08724264906690080704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-72672862281097091382008-04-11T17:39:00.000-07:002008-04-11T17:39:00.000-07:00This is ssssssssuperb!However I do feel taking a s...This is ssssssssuperb!<br><br>However I do feel taking a ssssshot at sssssnakes is not in ones best interest essssspecially while sssstanding in front of one.<br><br>WS<br>Chief CEO<br>Snakes Worldwide Inc.Whitesnakehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-79245812032463410222008-04-11T15:03:00.000-07:002008-04-11T15:03:00.000-07:00It is really amazing the way you have stringed tog...It is really amazing the way you have stringed together those different lines; great work!Just someonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05292308457359940182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-84931779490268853362008-04-11T07:54:00.000-07:002008-04-11T07:54:00.000-07:00such imagery. Great movement and transition.Been ...such imagery. Great movement and transition.<br>Been there tooozymandiazhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07891897071966903895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-44665327794928814862008-04-11T05:56:00.000-07:002008-04-11T05:56:00.000-07:00Loved that. And very apt. Myth and mind are so clo...Loved that. And very apt. Myth and mind are so closely related.anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-89311327602886460432008-04-10T21:39:00.000-07:002008-04-10T21:39:00.000-07:00Great team work :DGreat team work :DAareet Krsnahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06066319239357776250noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-13884077468664723362008-04-10T20:11:00.000-07:002008-04-10T20:11:00.000-07:00Exssssssssssssscellent!Exssssssssssssscellent!Donnnnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10826410608415260786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-39984985566992826892008-04-10T17:42:00.000-07:002008-04-10T17:42:00.000-07:00That worked out really well, Gautami. What fantas...That worked out really well, Gautami. What fantastic imagery, as others have said. Mostly, though, this was really sensory -- sultry atmospheric feelings in my heart.<br><br>Wow. What a line!Susan Helene Gottfriedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-3997485440016773802008-04-10T17:26:00.000-07:002008-04-10T17:26:00.000-07:00Very intense. The imagery of the snakes makes this...Very intense. The imagery of the snakes makes this poem have a primal feeling to it.writerwomanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07645753712657412094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-88617759395005357972008-04-10T15:18:00.000-07:002008-04-10T15:18:00.000-07:00This poem scared me. Nice job!This poem scared me. Nice job!my backyardhttp://mybackyard.blogsome.com/2008/04/07/beach-birds/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-66782963484062523712008-04-10T15:04:00.000-07:002008-04-10T15:04:00.000-07:00I like where all these lines took you, gautami. I ...I like where all these lines took you, gautami. I still haven't posted mine. It's fun, isn't it?christinehttp://mariacristina.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-70361424948822057632008-04-10T13:46:00.000-07:002008-04-10T13:46:00.000-07:00Fantastic ending and I love all the "s" ...Fantastic ending and I love all the "s" sounds in here! Gave me chills!Linda Jacobshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-83912407947140988222008-04-10T12:42:00.000-07:002008-04-10T12:42:00.000-07:00It's great how you wove these lines into an in...It's great how you wove these lines into an integral whole!<br><br><a href="http://steerforth.wordpress.com/2008/04/10/the-maggots/" rel="nofollow">The Maggots</a>steerforthhttp://steerforth.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-51835090549852538102008-04-10T09:40:00.001-07:002008-04-10T09:40:00.001-07:00I really enjoyed this. We poets are weird- consume...I really enjoyed this. We poets are weird- consumed by our own thoughts... love it!C. Elizabethhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11957562888440201122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-83103361519077237172008-04-10T09:40:00.000-07:002008-04-10T09:40:00.000-07:00Nicely done! Slithering snakes and ropes of though...Nicely done! Slithering snakes and ropes of thought! Nice!tumblewordshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-45877079576762918142008-04-10T09:16:00.000-07:002008-04-10T09:16:00.000-07:00it is well stitched! Also makes me feel a bit quea...it is well stitched! Also makes me feel a bit queasy, all those snakes together,,,,Crafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-66802419479351126492008-04-10T08:40:00.000-07:002008-04-10T08:40:00.000-07:00Very strong imagery here throughout. Excellent wo...Very strong imagery here throughout. Excellent work!Billyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14815646433314236886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-90539346663387258692008-04-10T07:59:00.000-07:002008-04-10T07:59:00.000-07:00oops, again I forgot to leave a direct URL, which ...oops, again I forgot to leave a direct URL, which I'm trying to do with Blogger blogs cause I really think people don't care much to browse my blogger profile pagelissahttp://www.justwritingwords.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-75850326553754032872008-04-10T07:57:00.000-07:002008-04-10T07:57:00.000-07:00very well done, all the lines sounded just rightI ...very well done, all the lines sounded just right<br><br>I like the ending, I think that's the best line, I think I had that same dream and I'm also terribly afraid of snakes so you dive into that fear quite welllissahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00706027242022517570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-87931158045534516702008-04-10T01:43:00.000-07:002008-04-10T01:43:00.000-07:00Wow, I'm very impressed by how you put this to...Wow, I'm very impressed by how you put this together.....how did you know where to go looking for the lines, it is well-stitched too.johttp://florescence.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com