tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post7206863695667315090..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: nowhereland becomes neverland----Read Write Poem/Monday Poetry Traingautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-41248951988283281242008-03-14T22:43:00.000-07:002008-03-14T22:43:00.000-07:00well i am afraid of flying and i dont think i can ...well i am afraid of flying and i dont think i can overcome it. ironic but i do fly frequently hhe. <br><br>you have captured the feelings i often feel :-)totomaihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01805083472267649276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-21295839059878594382008-03-12T08:27:00.000-07:002008-03-12T08:27:00.000-07:00Very nice poem! I really enjoyed it!Very nice poem! I really enjoyed it!Billyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14815646433314236886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-13462098030657460582008-03-11T14:36:00.000-07:002008-03-11T14:36:00.000-07:00Daydreaming can be just as weird as any dream. I ...Daydreaming can be just as weird as any dream. I do it all the time. :)Tammyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23932254184957722462008-03-11T07:38:00.000-07:002008-03-11T07:38:00.000-07:00The ending surprised me! Nice twist. The imagery o...The ending surprised me! Nice twist. The imagery of the physical sensations (bile, sweaty palms) made me feel it like it was happening to me--and I enjoy flying. Very good.chicklegirlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03000215636803243874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-50356978969504970682008-03-10T21:19:00.000-07:002008-03-10T21:19:00.000-07:00This had such a great feel . . . it made me feel t...This had such a great feel . . . it made me feel the confusion of dreams. <br><br>Thank you so much for visiting. I've come to really, really enjoy your poetry and work here. You have excellent voice and can really convey your message. I'm going to put you on my blog roll in hopes that others can get just as much enjoyment.Maciihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01841915051382774638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-33972591611902743082008-03-10T16:50:00.000-07:002008-03-10T16:50:00.000-07:00Wonderful poem. Very descriptive.Wonderful poem. Very descriptive.Annhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17968479919482739686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-47306727405509879722008-03-10T16:31:00.000-07:002008-03-10T16:31:00.000-07:00A powerful interpretation. You certainly flew writ...A powerful interpretation. You certainly flew writing this.anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-24943207774315061592008-03-10T12:59:00.000-07:002008-03-10T12:59:00.000-07:00This is it! Yes, you captured the feeling so well...This is it! Yes, you captured the feeling so well! Excellent poem!Linda Jacobshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-54058009579412520012008-03-10T11:06:00.000-07:002008-03-10T11:06:00.000-07:00this describes exquisitely just how I feel in crow...this describes exquisitely just how I feel in crowds.Joy Reneehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04976987581528470589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-35494569212653220342008-03-10T10:44:00.000-07:002008-03-10T10:44:00.000-07:00Very very powerful poem. Your images strike fear d...Very very powerful poem. Your images strike fear deep within me. All you had to add was that this was Oceanic flight 816 and I would have died. Well done Tami.<br><br>love-Melanie-bdBeloved Dreamerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-64679541835029432462008-03-10T09:07:00.000-07:002008-03-10T09:07:00.000-07:00Dream or not, you turned your poem into a compelli...Dream or not, you turned your poem into a compelling story. Tightly written.Christinehttp://mariacristina.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-13768071562080477122008-03-10T07:35:00.000-07:002008-03-10T07:35:00.000-07:00I like how it ends up in the airport visitor's...I like how it ends up in the airport visitor's lounge. Only a crowded doctor's office can compete with waiting at an airport to make time feel claustrophobic and at a standstill.Julia Smithhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15392455413201190775noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-78807259710944957252008-03-10T07:28:00.000-07:002008-03-10T07:28:00.000-07:00you've done well in describing your dream. sou...you've done well in describing your dream. sounds so vivid and real.lissahttp://www.justwritingwords.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-45571101726788031022008-03-10T07:08:00.000-07:002008-03-10T07:08:00.000-07:00Interesting take on the dream. I wouldn't have...Interesting take on the dream. I wouldn't have guessed it was about flying. <br><br>Rose<br><br>xoRose Dewy Knickershttp://dewyknickers.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-79802971848666080072008-03-10T00:31:00.000-07:002008-03-10T00:31:00.000-07:00There must be a dream theme going on here, just fl...There must be a dream theme going on here, just flew in from Art Predator.<br><br>I laughed when I read your first lines "it is truly a big circular mess" - that's how I feel about my life sometimes!Danika / OpenChannelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06472222686878922186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-64431686293926625582008-03-09T19:56:00.000-07:002008-03-09T19:56:00.000-07:00Even if you are not afraid of flight, Gautami,(and...Even if you are not afraid of flight, Gautami,(and I don't think I am too), you have probably really capture the feeling of it! Simple descrive pure panic!Jillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12871047592501542942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-30910590353661999142008-03-09T18:08:00.000-07:002008-03-09T18:08:00.000-07:00Strange dreams.I understand where this comes from,...Strange dreams.<br><br>I understand where this comes from, though.noahthegreathttp://noahthegreat.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-80612263499432327032008-03-09T16:56:00.000-07:002008-03-09T16:56:00.000-07:00I like this, G. It really makes me feel what the n...I like this, G. It really makes me feel what the narrator's feeling, and while I don't have a fear of flying, I can certainly understand someone who does.<br><br>I particularly like the never-ending leather. Ugh.Susan Helene Gottfriedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-42726466917735142582008-03-09T09:54:00.000-07:002008-03-09T09:54:00.000-07:00i think that is a good way of dealing with disturb...i think that is a good way of dealing with disturbing dreams.<br>i can somehow relate to this as i can't stand suspense.polonahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-71255668239177743012008-03-09T09:10:00.000-07:002008-03-09T09:10:00.000-07:00Powerful dreams, I think. To be listened to. It he...Powerful dreams, I think. To be listened to. It helps writing poems about dreams...I did that for a while and it adds to our insight about the dream. Hope you're well.Don Iannonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01922412641433868679noreply@blogger.com