tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post7147536072737941819..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: chequered shadowsgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger36125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-74863932210033221982008-03-01T09:30:00.000-08:002008-03-01T09:30:00.000-08:00oh, that was perfect!oh, that was perfect!polonahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-60011495872426229652008-02-28T16:39:00.000-08:002008-02-28T16:39:00.000-08:00beautiful...the quiet storm... what no cigarette s...beautiful...the quiet storm... what no cigarette shared... wonderful that he spoke to her... this was no wham bam thank you mam..LittleWinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16010376737431344381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-37044130224201697912008-02-28T07:05:00.000-08:002008-02-28T07:05:00.000-08:00This was so beautifully written - palms upward- de...This was so beautifully written - palms upward- dewy lips, I felt the rain - you captured the 'wetness' and then what a fun ending...I agree I hope she got what she needed before that started!Amarettogirlhttp://amarettogirl.squarespace.com/the-written-word/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-65185014439642679242008-02-26T10:38:00.000-08:002008-02-26T10:38:00.000-08:00just like a man to sleep afterward.nicely written....just like a man to sleep afterward.<br><br>nicely written.lissahttp://www.justwritingwords.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-83705757268049839672008-02-25T13:24:00.000-08:002008-02-25T13:24:00.000-08:00Oh, wow! this one was so much fun! Passion-ed even...Oh, wow! this one was so much fun! Passion-ed even!tumblewordshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-66406245060618642152008-02-24T21:37:00.000-08:002008-02-24T21:37:00.000-08:00ahh a poem with a twist..or was it a twist..;) rea...ahh a poem with a twist..or was it a twist..;) <br><br>really loved the lines *lashes casting chequered shadows<br>on silken smooth cheeks*<br><br>in facet evrything about it...<br>:)Thinking aloudhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14191649124291527517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-14338686063680713212008-02-24T07:41:00.000-08:002008-02-24T07:41:00.000-08:00The sad thing is, I wasn't even sruprised by t...The sad thing is, I wasn't even sruprised by the ending! What's that say about my love life?<br><br>Really, really well-written!Linda Jacobshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-86824343911991436882008-02-24T07:39:00.000-08:002008-02-24T07:39:00.000-08:00Yes, I had this very romantic sweeping scenario on...Yes, I had this very romantic sweeping scenario on my head strongly contrasted with that shot of reality.<br><br>Great poem.Goodnight, Momhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01188093753876297741noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-29647478248233920462008-02-24T06:37:00.000-08:002008-02-24T06:37:00.000-08:00Wonderful poem that caught the "truth" o...Wonderful poem that caught the "truth" of the ending perfectly.Lisahttp://thetonguetiedmuse.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-45163521362680418752008-02-24T05:32:00.000-08:002008-02-24T05:32:00.000-08:00and that's the way it is. great post yet agai...and that's the way it is. great post yet again!Heather Kathleenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10559289518691894880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-15002095134353824692008-02-24T04:32:00.000-08:002008-02-24T04:32:00.000-08:00Great ending! Definitely full of passion.Great ending! Definitely full of passion.Januaryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13036651950996873368noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-18795993236879760632008-02-24T03:24:00.000-08:002008-02-24T03:24:00.000-08:00Nicely done--a gentle slam on the male gender for ...Nicely done--a gentle slam on the male gender for falling asleep afterwards :)<br><br>Maybe if my sinuses clear up, I'll write on this topic today.sagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-70374019448212974892008-02-23T22:38:00.000-08:002008-02-23T22:38:00.000-08:00Excellent use of the prompt! Enjoyed your wonderf...Excellent use of the prompt! Enjoyed your wonderful poem.forgetfulonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07895803172098820967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-54546505714629103762008-02-23T19:28:00.000-08:002008-02-23T19:28:00.000-08:00Very good indeed - and I agree with Rose.Very good indeed - and I agree with Rose.Cricket's Hearthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07523010235470023580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-5664578437394702602008-02-23T10:52:00.000-08:002008-02-23T10:52:00.000-08:00Snoring away to glory. Great ending. Perfect con...Snoring away to glory. Great ending. Perfect contrast.CHEFDRUCKhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01581859830585809291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-32658820508886381422008-02-23T10:38:00.000-08:002008-02-23T10:38:00.000-08:00hehe the ending is brilliant! But I really liked t...hehe the ending is brilliant! But I really liked the sensual dimension of it, the shadows of the eyelashes, very nice :)))Devil Moodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16083722657651175729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-50153780911428675382008-02-23T07:39:00.000-08:002008-02-23T07:39:00.000-08:00kind of brings one back to the boring reality of i...kind of brings one back to the boring reality of it all doesn't it......paisleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-43560021899391578582008-02-23T06:50:00.000-08:002008-02-23T06:50:00.000-08:00why do men fall asleep after 'passion'? lo...why do men fall asleep after 'passion'? lol<br>great take on passion!Just Jenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06461423815235750171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-2840911679112053792008-02-23T06:16:00.000-08:002008-02-23T06:16:00.000-08:00Excellent piece - sound effects and all!Excellent piece - sound effects and all!anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-24004344257446538622008-02-23T05:39:00.000-08:002008-02-23T05:39:00.000-08:00Very clever, enjoyed this very much;)Very clever, enjoyed this very much;)Rednesshttp://over-it.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-80763110760490581212008-02-23T03:32:00.000-08:002008-02-23T03:32:00.000-08:00Excellent! at least he didn't leave the money ...Excellent! at least he didn't leave the money on the table and go home to his wife...<br><br><br>Great write again :)Inconsequentialhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03543390380268105131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-73955532992095375042008-02-23T02:28:00.000-08:002008-02-23T02:28:00.000-08:00I love the closer to this poem! Just when I though...I love the closer to this poem! Just when I thought it was the height of romantic passion...Betty C.http://www.blogger.com/profile/17155852272383173880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-56091212106447329972008-02-22T22:05:00.000-08:002008-02-22T22:05:00.000-08:00perfectly written poem....passion ignited and dous...perfectly written poem....passion ignited and doused....expected ending on his part...snore away! LOL.rebeccahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18248554235709475320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-74893207432869968112008-02-22T19:12:00.000-08:002008-02-22T19:12:00.000-08:00i love the way you described passion...esp. that b...i love the way you described passion...esp. that bit of his face buried in her hair..so very beautiful...ULhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15005895432233940416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-35347874771968768272008-02-22T16:16:00.000-08:002008-02-22T16:16:00.000-08:00deep slumber after deep passion? I enjoyed your p...deep slumber after deep passion? I enjoyed your poem Gautami. :)Awarenesshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06098432781380754899noreply@blogger.com