tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post7010934045962440175..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: edging firesgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger30125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-54108027811542255032013-03-21T13:24:36.646-07:002013-03-21T13:24:36.646-07:00Yes...that invisible graffiti...wonderful take...Yes...that invisible graffiti...wonderful take...Tess Kincaidhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-15119721141607278072013-03-20T10:54:47.577-07:002013-03-20T10:54:47.577-07:00For me, this poem had much of the same quality as ...For me, this poem had much of the same quality as Picasso's art. The title gives a clue and then the feeling emanates through without being overly specific.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-62884164373043806042013-03-20T07:44:09.216-07:002013-03-20T07:44:09.216-07:00"words you never wrote on the walls", th..."words you never wrote on the walls", that stich/line got me. Jumped of the page. This poem is something made of beauty.emmett wheatfallhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07466994239329611740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-63594038558314793862013-03-19T18:38:56.304-07:002013-03-19T18:38:56.304-07:00Very interesting poem. I read it several time. P...Very interesting poem. I read it several time. Paired with the painting..even more interesting.Sabra Bowershttp://sabrabowers.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-75842715097513187162013-03-19T10:04:07.941-07:002013-03-19T10:04:07.941-07:00I always love the sound of a distant train.Excelle...I always love the sound of a distant train.<br>Excellent response to Picasso's picture.<br>KKay L. Davieshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-22138264706913507452013-03-19T05:59:54.762-07:002013-03-19T05:59:54.762-07:00End tells all. Let me be!End tells all. Let me be!Harshad Mehtahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10747054432059631577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-57649152319538267262013-03-18T18:20:51.784-07:002013-03-18T18:20:51.784-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.This comment has been removed by the author.The Write Girlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-53534533068812080342013-03-18T18:20:50.488-07:002013-03-18T18:20:50.488-07:00Your poem personifies Picasso's art so beautif...Your poem personifies Picasso's art so beautifully.The Write Girlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77811047695409061902013-03-18T17:52:49.534-07:002013-03-18T17:52:49.534-07:00This is lovely. It really does give one pause to ...This is lovely. It really does give one pause to think.razzamadazzlehttp://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-76760346093388884952013-03-18T16:28:00.973-07:002013-03-18T16:28:00.973-07:00nicely done and thanks for sharingnicely done and thanks for sharingWayne Pitchkohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14873809564739628512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-15903628452082053642013-03-18T12:35:39.591-07:002013-03-18T12:35:39.591-07:00Good one and great endingGood one and great endingCathyhttp://thequietone.net/2013/03/18/wordle-100/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-13438638495539799162013-03-18T11:29:46.770-07:002013-03-18T11:29:46.770-07:00Very thought provoking piece.Very thought provoking piece.McGuffy Annhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02041456732211109555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-38276191818114018212013-03-18T11:16:19.245-07:002013-03-18T11:16:19.245-07:00*never wrote on the wall*never wrote on the wallasteria's canvasshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02408565009305995259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-40497675875033842722013-03-18T11:15:32.041-07:002013-03-18T11:15:32.041-07:00im glad i came across your poem.. N my favorite li...im glad i came across your poem.. N my favorite line was the words you wrote on the wall why i find them in streets.. Metaphorical..asteria's canvasshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02408565009305995259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-15598036121086634082013-03-18T09:38:59.238-07:002013-03-18T09:38:59.238-07:00I am mingling with the vision... this can evoke a ...I am mingling with the vision... this can evoke a variety of meanings, scenes. Some of them are wondrous. Some, terrifying.Kim Nelsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-84700195813031474172013-03-18T08:34:38.365-07:002013-03-18T08:34:38.365-07:00This, to me, brings visions of a woman walking in ...This, to me, brings visions of a woman walking in the misty night, everything unclear and with fuzzy edges, the seen may not be real and reality remains unseen.... spooky and mysterious, with a touch of the macabre, elegantly conveyed.Mixihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03929917191909619353noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-34484688079236681162013-03-18T07:37:47.202-07:002013-03-18T07:37:47.202-07:00Visions need to be mingled with...Visions need to be mingled with...Jinksyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-30190239686489424112013-03-17T18:14:45.802-07:002013-03-17T18:14:45.802-07:00Gosh. Beauty. Right now this lives with me only ...Gosh. Beauty. Right now this lives with me only in images. I will return to try to understand "the tiny stretch".Susanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-45771274868341285212013-03-17T16:50:09.236-07:002013-03-17T16:50:09.236-07:00The quest for immortality is unending. Artists and...The quest for immortality is unending. Artists and writers are on the right track that is why we hear the faint sound of the train. You words always enthrall.oldegghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-34252877733325884892013-03-17T16:39:27.433-07:002013-03-17T16:39:27.433-07:00"faint sound of a train in the background...&..."faint sound of a train in the background..." that's a image that always catches me. You set a nice introspective mood with your words.sagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-62199006309755628852013-03-17T16:05:44.306-07:002013-03-17T16:05:44.306-07:00Well, you were obviously looking...Well, you were obviously looking...Stan Skihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-56059665059144945812013-03-17T15:00:17.475-07:002013-03-17T15:00:17.475-07:00..and so it shall be, but is that what her heart r.....and so it shall be, but is that what her heart really wants?Karen S.http://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68741865449915566882013-03-17T14:01:55.710-07:002013-03-17T14:01:55.710-07:00Macabre I would agree! Macabre I would agree! izzyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06379007428464069723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-69637646831220420852013-03-17T13:52:50.935-07:002013-03-17T13:52:50.935-07:00Yikes, the word verification made its way into my ...Yikes, the word verification made its way into my response.<br><br>Mervity...<br><br>Do you really feel you need this? It is an extra step for anyone, and sometimes I just give up.Maryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-29769391623086992982013-03-17T13:51:08.765-07:002013-03-17T13:51:08.765-07:00You really gave life to the painting! Brilliant.Al...You really gave life to the painting! Brilliant.<br><br>Always great to see you in Poetry Pantry!Mervity 1140Maryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com