tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post6572172859898524611..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: up in smoke---3WWgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-9408350294865302942007-11-30T17:34:00.000-08:002007-11-30T17:34:00.000-08:00A night out with a first love/ date telling secret...A night out with a first love/ date telling secrets. What a beautiful image you have evoked in my mind. I also liked the lines 'pausing, I crush moist grass<br>between my bare toes.' Thanks for sharing such a lovely piece. Keep up the good work. Have a nice weekend.<br><br>Side note- I think the disclaimer really added to this piece. And, it is always better to not start those things anyway.Michelle Johnsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15157059633840032305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-84011251581100086572007-11-30T06:48:00.000-08:002007-11-30T06:48:00.000-08:00I like the bare toe images and glad you posted the...I like the bare toe images and glad you posted the disclaimer! :)sagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-75701607248164220922007-11-29T21:38:00.000-08:002007-11-29T21:38:00.000-08:00Love this!Love this!firebirdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08924005848870170400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-49024494209944068752007-11-29T14:56:00.000-08:002007-11-29T14:56:00.000-08:00"sharing pocketful of secretsto last until mo..."sharing pocketful of secrets<br>to last until morning."<br>My old roommate used to smoke and I think this is a perfect description! loved the words!!!A Tag Along Travelerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00997688533571949049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-73134547221425933682007-11-29T14:08:00.000-08:002007-11-29T14:08:00.000-08:00I agree. These are beautiful lines, Gautami.The b...I agree. These are beautiful lines, Gautami.<br><br>The bare toes crushing moist grass, and the smoke signals... great imagery.Bonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10096591352278195759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-91140173322976848822007-11-29T11:12:00.000-08:002007-11-29T11:12:00.000-08:00i have never smoked either but i think this convey...i have never smoked either but i think this conveys the feeling so well...polonahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-18493735302598059262007-11-29T10:10:00.000-08:002007-11-29T10:10:00.000-08:00great stuff!...i can imagine standing outside, qui...great stuff!...i can imagine standing outside, quietly reflecting, having a puff..best part..wet grass between my toes...LittleWinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16010376737431344381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-80990055987727923232007-11-29T06:21:00.000-08:002007-11-29T06:21:00.000-08:00Very nice, gautami. you created a contemplative, e...Very nice, gautami. you created a contemplative, evening mood.<br>I thinks it's important for people to realize that we are writers, and what we write about is not autobiographical. I know you wrote the disclaimer about not using unhealthy substances, which is why I say this.Christinehttp://mariacristina.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-84256485592898060552007-11-29T04:40:00.000-08:002007-11-29T04:40:00.000-08:00you did well with these words, much enjoyed readin...you did well with these words, much enjoyed reading<br><br>ChristyChristyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14605702499635622573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-30935767904428757412007-11-29T04:31:00.000-08:002007-11-29T04:31:00.000-08:00Sure liked this one too, esp. the disclaimer had m...Sure liked this one too, esp. the disclaimer had me smiling ..thank you. :)ULhttp://ul-typingaway.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-53325620015762590032007-11-28T22:10:00.000-08:002007-11-28T22:10:00.000-08:00sounds like my cigars. :)sounds like my cigars. :)J. Andrew Lockharthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12567156257114496618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-1306993476612695992007-11-28T19:19:00.000-08:002007-11-28T19:19:00.000-08:00Glad you don't smoke...yuck!Great three word t...Glad you don't smoke...yuck!<br>Great three word thingie.<br>xo<br>GillianGillian @ Indigo Bluehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08845512494417503198noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-90972572817771388042007-11-28T19:01:00.000-08:002007-11-28T19:01:00.000-08:00As a night owl who still drinks a little, your wor...As a night owl who still drinks a little, your words perfectly capture<br>those lonely hours of quiet contemplation and inner conversion I relish all to myself.Herb Urbanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08472788833737826733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-78477907550730563652007-11-28T18:20:00.000-08:002007-11-28T18:20:00.000-08:00i saw the prompt and the cigarette led me offtrack...i saw the prompt and the cigarette led me offtrack... <br><br>so wonderful to see what you've don..the imagery is perfect...<br><br>***moist grass <br>between my bare toes***heavenly!!!<br><br>and i echo your disclaimer too :))Thinking aloudhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14191649124291527517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-81706585158500451402007-11-28T17:35:00.000-08:002007-11-28T17:35:00.000-08:00nice imagery of solitude and woe when I read it.nice imagery of solitude and woe when I read it.Jujeehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11075945120950670714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-52281212537520730292007-11-28T17:30:00.000-08:002007-11-28T17:30:00.000-08:00Ah, I like this a lot!!Ah, I like this a lot!!tumblewordshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-2934017556643895752007-11-28T16:23:00.000-08:002007-11-28T16:23:00.000-08:00I picture a summer night rendezvous from this...I picture a summer night rendezvous from this...TChttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02487739742081226423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-26436473427733934772007-11-28T15:12:00.000-08:002007-11-28T15:12:00.000-08:00smoker or no,, it certainly has an air of romantic...smoker or no,, it certainly has an air of romanticism around it doesn't it?????paisleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-13072276486117389112007-11-28T13:39:00.000-08:002007-11-28T13:39:00.000-08:00A lovely tome...And I'm with Whitesnake. I do ...A lovely tome...<br><br>And I'm with Whitesnake. I do smoke, I do drink and they are, definitely, drugs.Within Withouthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05545398587099834271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-65136292832327037762007-11-28T12:29:00.000-08:002007-11-28T12:29:00.000-08:00I do smoke, I do drink and they ARE Drugs!I do smoke, I do drink and they ARE Drugs!Whitesnakehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-16806545878443825562007-11-28T10:56:00.000-08:002007-11-28T10:56:00.000-08:00Well put, Gautami.......Well put, Gautami.......Johttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15149139820474072721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-88260451069238962222007-11-28T09:38:00.000-08:002007-11-28T09:38:00.000-08:00I love how you can take something i have an aversi...I love how you can take something i have an aversion to and make it seem so tempting. Another verse well written.Square1http://www.blogger.com/profile/07497081826047619051noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-53607571190950520802007-11-28T09:22:00.000-08:002007-11-28T09:22:00.000-08:00it is good!it is good!Ghost Particlehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07439371766182405053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-36791747281085909702007-11-28T08:58:00.000-08:002007-11-28T08:58:00.000-08:00Makes it seem so right. :)RosexMakes it seem so right. :)<br><br>Rose<br><br>xRose Dewy Knickershttp://dewyknickers.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-28722452539346656002007-11-28T08:35:00.000-08:002007-11-28T08:35:00.000-08:00You strike the just the right words. I love your u...You strike the just the right words. I love your usage of words like - crushing moist grass between my bare toes. Nicely done.lissahttp://walktotheleft.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.com