tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post6561250412175111444..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: pitching forwardgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77922932280841316932010-09-07T08:45:43.808-07:002010-09-07T08:45:43.808-07:00Very, very nice. I love the way the unusually pai...Very, very nice. I love the way the unusually paired words create an unexpected feel. Thanks for visiting me and leaving the link. Come by any time!tasmith1122http://tasmith1122.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-10545193803685198382010-09-06T11:51:01.927-07:002010-09-06T11:51:01.927-07:00The last 2 lines made the post fabulous and impact...The last 2 lines made the post fabulous and impactingMahesh Kalaalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08671369216676666618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-12112726075219936862010-09-05T01:18:18.633-07:002010-09-05T01:18:18.633-07:00Yes, like the last line too.Yes, like the last line too.irenehttp://enerihot.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-54302333774937919252010-09-03T20:39:00.206-07:002010-09-03T20:39:00.206-07:00and unlike poles attract each other!loved the endi...and unlike poles attract each other!<br><br>loved the ending Gautami!!!Amityhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18222122594130598313noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-51992097947341778282010-09-02T08:26:49.563-07:002010-09-02T08:26:49.563-07:00you put them together nicely and close strongly......you put them together nicely and close strongly...nice.Brian Millerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-30888415533904883862010-09-02T02:34:17.857-07:002010-09-02T02:34:17.857-07:00this was superb !!! amazing :)this was superb !!! amazing :)ladynimuehttp://ladynimue.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-91666988342005538142010-09-02T01:14:22.099-07:002010-09-02T01:14:22.099-07:00Ooh! Loved the last line!Ooh! Loved the last line!Dreamerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10275276379009334446noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-80568916062226573512010-09-01T21:47:41.105-07:002010-09-01T21:47:41.105-07:00I like the bit about wounds that don't show on...I like the bit about wounds that don't show on the surface, but the last line...oh, how fun!Ann (bunnygirl)http://www.ampino.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-55870632169306814392010-09-01T21:15:24.921-07:002010-09-01T21:15:24.921-07:00For a mathematics teacher, the last line is almost...For a mathematics teacher, the last line is almost an everyday occurence, while teaching!<br><br>A cliche, I may add!<br><br>:Dgautami tripathyhttp://firmlyrooted.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68096255579074981802010-09-01T20:11:01.213-07:002010-09-01T20:11:01.213-07:00Ha! as usual, the last line took the breath away.....Ha! as usual, the last line took the breath away.. Gautami..well done..Ramesh Soodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-1652252942037186552010-09-01T13:02:51.139-07:002010-09-01T13:02:51.139-07:00I can feel that note of anxiety running through th...I can feel that note of anxiety running through the poem, and how our thoughts run in all directions when we feel that way, not knowing exactly what to expect, but hoping for the best. I like the fact that you exchanged wordles and wouldn't mind doing the same. <br><br>ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2010/08/31/a-different-seeking/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-34245544722148523102010-09-01T11:53:35.942-07:002010-09-01T11:53:35.942-07:00Lovely piece.Lovely piece.Angelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15164957477462458783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-79037831831858369182010-09-01T11:27:06.072-07:002010-09-01T11:27:06.072-07:00A reverential 'Wow!'A reverential 'Wow!'shailhttp://shailsnest.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-82822072474555592122010-09-01T10:37:14.245-07:002010-09-01T10:37:14.245-07:00Quite a challenge to incorporate so many words. G...Quite a challenge to incorporate so many words. Good job!Jay Thurstonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12369000584179598973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-62796710812624040852010-09-01T10:32:21.301-07:002010-09-01T10:32:21.301-07:00I will agree with everyone else, the ending is won...I will agree with everyone else, the ending is wonderful.ThomGhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-5733120748094606092010-09-01T10:27:12.457-07:002010-09-01T10:27:12.457-07:00like the others before said, the last line is grea...like the others before said, the last line is great! <br><br>Nice piece...Just someonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05292308457359940182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-66963235683205771742010-09-01T10:10:20.806-07:002010-09-01T10:10:20.806-07:00Very impressive...especially since you wrote it wi...Very impressive...especially since you wrote it without thinking! I add my applause re. the last line.Maryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-82689176662359573122010-09-01T09:26:39.869-07:002010-09-01T09:26:39.869-07:00Hmmm. They don't look like such bad words aft...Hmmm. They don't look like such bad words after all. At least now they have had a good home. I like the imagined "pitch forward like a rocket to save the smoking sizzlers", and foolishly for glasses--don't I know about that!barbarahttp://briarcat.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-47769677522296656382010-09-01T08:15:03.114-07:002010-09-01T08:15:03.114-07:00Gautami I agree the last line does make so much se...Gautami I agree the last line does make so much sense!<br>Nicely done<br>Pamelaflauberthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-53699413185276996032010-09-01T07:51:45.706-07:002010-09-01T07:51:45.706-07:00I just love the last line!I just love the last line!Mia Mirzahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10468263325430449591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23393751795931156712010-09-01T07:45:34.085-07:002010-09-01T07:45:34.085-07:00Nice touch at the end.Nice touch at the end.anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.com