tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post6480409636973314517..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: dead woman and her wantsgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-4378573806999001042010-12-26T19:43:45.161-08:002010-12-26T19:43:45.161-08:00You're working so well with the form - amazing...You're working so well with the form - amazing how much it has opened in your hands...Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-13203312979849668772010-12-26T16:03:59.696-08:002010-12-26T16:03:59.696-08:00The form is working on your behalf! There are som...The form is working on your behalf! There are some terrific images in this. So glad you like the form!debhttp://stoneymoss.orgnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-61609704921174116512010-12-26T03:26:07.567-08:002010-12-26T03:26:07.567-08:00It's great to find a poetic form you feel comf...It's great to find a poetic form you feel comfortable with; I'm like that with haiku/senryu.Tilly Budhttp://thelaughinghousewife.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-57190725119098755492010-12-25T21:59:12.809-08:002010-12-25T21:59:12.809-08:00This is amazing stuff - draws you in and keeps you...This is amazing stuff - draws you in and keeps you guessing; great use of the dead poet form ...S.E.Ingrahamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02135141369161538082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-5506530276558052482010-12-25T15:29:23.699-08:002010-12-25T15:29:23.699-08:00The stream of consciousness feel really pulls the ...The stream of consciousness feel really pulls the reader along. Glad the dead man idea is working for you!djvorreyerhttp://djvorreyer.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-22737668391482319222010-12-24T12:03:25.930-08:002010-12-24T12:03:25.930-08:00What a lively dead woman poem! Love the vivid det...What a lively dead woman poem! Love the vivid details.Laurie Kolphttp://www.lkharris-kolp.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-61417199339443250402010-12-24T10:19:29.989-08:002010-12-24T10:19:29.989-08:00Well done! Thanks so much!Well done! Thanks so much!annellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-37995064650598817352010-12-24T06:51:45.182-08:002010-12-24T06:51:45.182-08:00Second time around and found a whole new level of ...Second time around and found a whole new level of liking your poem and the form itself. It is so exciting to have something grab that drive inside and take it somewhere different, somewhere new. Congratulations,<br><br>ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-70323589279999159972010-12-24T06:47:03.905-08:002010-12-24T06:47:03.905-08:00Very good! I like the thought of the dead bringin...Very good! I like the thought of the dead bringing our voices to life!sagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-14777574317471824862010-12-24T03:03:39.957-08:002010-12-24T03:03:39.957-08:00the opener was a fantastic pull..really enjoyable ...the opener was a fantastic pull..really enjoyable read...lots to think here...thanks for the share..peteOne Stop - The Place For Poets, Writers and Artistshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07020684469937853500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-5253380104131748522010-12-24T02:19:04.751-08:002010-12-24T02:19:04.751-08:00These are building into a worthwhile collection. ...These are building into a worthwhile collection. Bravo.vivinfrancehttp://vivinfrance.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-28261490622978281762010-12-23T22:40:39.645-08:002010-12-23T22:40:39.645-08:00Gautami, this is really really good.Gautami, this is really really good.christopherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04201537517464996231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-51283211649039568612010-12-23T11:37:44.990-08:002010-12-23T11:37:44.990-08:00someone has oiledthe cemetery gatewinter skyHappy ...someone has oiled<br>the cemetery gate<br>winter sky<br><br>Happy New Year, Gautami.Billhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10717622168200846486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-52047565593778857492010-12-23T11:09:57.644-08:002010-12-23T11:09:57.644-08:00Wonderful imagination and very creative this is......Wonderful imagination and very creative this is... :)Sumit Sarkarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05508519847517495863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-46047700449443226032010-12-22T20:46:06.333-08:002010-12-22T20:46:06.333-08:00Well done!!Well done!!lalita choudharyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09688302536340138757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-90933613627045595682010-12-22T20:44:02.763-08:002010-12-22T20:44:02.763-08:00nicely done Gautami...loved it....I really like th...nicely done Gautami...loved it....I really like this form also...so enjoy the moment....and the season...CheersWayne Pitchkohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-4938298850991639532010-12-22T20:39:40.344-08:002010-12-22T20:39:40.344-08:00My favorite line, Dead woman has no aura... Howeve...My favorite line, Dead woman has no aura... However the Dead Man Cycle began, keep it coming. You are onto something here, Gautami, and I'm into it. 3WW, whenever I see your name, I automatically click to see what you're up to.<br><br>Thanks. My takes on it are here:<br>http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2010/12/23/control-questioning-authority-three-wd-weds/<br><br>Peace, Amysharplittlepencilhttp://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-27324279213103111022010-12-22T19:32:02.842-08:002010-12-22T19:32:02.842-08:00An imaginative approach. I do wonder how it's ...An imaginative approach. I do wonder how it's to be both dead and alive.irenehttp://enerihot.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-20165392872860159792010-12-22T15:03:48.811-08:002010-12-22T15:03:48.811-08:00Impressive ..unique and i like :)Impressive ..unique and i like :)Desert Rosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77590428086860208432010-12-22T12:42:19.906-08:002010-12-22T12:42:19.906-08:00The dead woman can't have any of those things ...The dead woman can't have any of those things - her credit cards have all been cancelled. (LOL!)<br><br>Nice One Shot, Gautami!Eric Alderhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-3391400029225935562010-12-22T12:37:28.765-08:002010-12-22T12:37:28.765-08:00Good for you! It's so cool when we are refres...Good for you! It's so cool when we are refreshed by something new. I agree about that deafening silence line!Linda Jacobshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09156972661541133665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-28533922212683677582010-12-22T11:00:48.787-08:002010-12-22T11:00:48.787-08:00A truly inspiring poem - you've seen beauty in...A truly inspiring poem - you've seen beauty in the "dead man" form that passed a great many of us by.<br>Bravo.vivinfrancehttp://vivinfrance.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-2070217598424345732010-12-22T10:39:12.850-08:002010-12-22T10:39:12.850-08:00'she is so dead, yet she lives'She will co...'she is so dead, yet she lives'<br><br>She will continue to.. God bless!Ramesh Soodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-3218653146232795542010-12-22T10:30:59.385-08:002010-12-22T10:30:59.385-08:00I really liked the line, "silence of the dead...I really liked the line, "silence of the dead woman is so deafening that it scares her too."<br><br>It's always a treat when something or someone inspires us in ways that we've not been before.Bonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10096591352278195759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-3170811679007904902010-12-22T10:20:16.822-08:002010-12-22T10:20:16.822-08:00'dead woman wants a clock' - what a stunni...'dead woman wants a clock' - what a stunning opening sentence. This series of poems are just so powerful..Jaejaerosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.com