tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post6264404437209313485..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: now close, now opengautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-54064777652850555562010-03-23T12:02:21.981-07:002010-03-23T12:02:21.981-07:00a lot of different emotions in this...I enjoyed it...a lot of different emotions in this...I enjoyed itmotherveghttp://motherveg.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-75750112966257004602010-03-23T05:51:54.988-07:002010-03-23T05:51:54.988-07:00Hi Gautami,I really like the lines:'mists of s...Hi Gautami,<br><br>I really like the lines:<br><br>'mists of sleep/block me out'<br>and<br>'magenta turns maroon gold'Derrickhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-51573525848193885922010-03-21T12:10:41.916-07:002010-03-21T12:10:41.916-07:00I like the trip in this one...I like the trip in this one...Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-77106897264559320852010-03-20T13:58:08.069-07:002010-03-20T13:58:08.069-07:00I love the question at the end, opening up all sor...I love the question at the end, opening up all sorts of speculation.Karenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12003379181294550035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-33318114463989740102010-03-20T11:11:16.922-07:002010-03-20T11:11:16.922-07:00I agree with Raven- great emotion and description ...I agree with Raven- great emotion and description of frustration. I have written one with the same tone years ago when my children were young, and the weather was grey...<br><br>India! I love cooking the foods of your country- I had personal lessonsChef Ehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11198603107302675448noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-86633798011846403572010-03-20T08:46:35.842-07:002010-03-20T08:46:35.842-07:00I like how the clashing colors in the first lines ...I like how the clashing colors in the first lines set the tone for the rest of the piece.Elizabethhttp://www.poems.elizabethenslin.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-270602854586043462010-03-20T04:40:27.211-07:002010-03-20T04:40:27.211-07:00open up to the airlet your heart poundbreath all t...open up to the air<br>let your heart pound<br>breath all the sounds<br>feel the wind around<br>can you hear silence <br>when all you need is sound<br>feel the wild wind<br>let go to the howl<br>its gonna be peace day aheadiamyuvahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14317831523155115391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-6807019061202474082010-03-19T20:27:26.070-07:002010-03-19T20:27:26.070-07:00I love the last stanza! Wow!PamelaI love the last stanza! Wow!<br>Pamelaflauberthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-84726777103750468262010-03-19T13:08:29.132-07:002010-03-19T13:08:29.132-07:00Great description and an emotional quality, a frus...Great description and an emotional quality, a frustration, in both stanzas.<br><br>-NicoleRaven's Wing Poetryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-11223201722099106442010-03-19T02:48:54.230-07:002010-03-19T02:48:54.230-07:00Nice, simple, direct, compact, all good qualities....Nice, simple, direct, compact, all good qualities. And it all rides so well into the equally condensed ending lines which really add to the momentum of the poem. Nice job, very nice!bearlyaudiblehttp://bearlyaudible.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-53870183690844499992010-03-18T19:28:50.126-07:002010-03-18T19:28:50.126-07:00Plans open anew, the always do......robImage &...Plans open anew, the always do...<br>...rob<br><a href="http://www.image-verse.com/magenta-lace" rel="nofollow"><i>Image & Verse</i></a>Robhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08166835029205143266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-72815694124306779402010-03-18T18:45:56.301-07:002010-03-18T18:45:56.301-07:00interesting!interesting!sagehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17499891950639742366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-32424331412581938352010-03-18T14:56:24.722-07:002010-03-18T14:56:24.722-07:00Love the last two lines.Love the last two lines.SOLhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09663418154339084941noreply@blogger.com