tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post6245357378388383615..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: submergegautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-35127328598486967992008-03-01T09:28:00.000-08:002008-03-01T09:28:00.000-08:00love this.love this.polonahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-36193555656061680012008-02-24T17:44:00.000-08:002008-02-24T17:44:00.000-08:00The essence of that feeling we often find so diffi...The essence of that feeling we often find so difficult to express.<br>Some of us are less sincere and find it easy to deceive with flattery. <br>Love the sentiment; not sure how it would sound coming from me.Stan Skihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-7903483646362030992008-02-23T10:24:00.000-08:002008-02-23T10:24:00.000-08:00Wonderful. Treads with poise on a sensitive line b...Wonderful. Treads with poise on a sensitive line between feeling and some irony.Leonard Blumfeldhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03080438999368983042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-90654767858153632392008-02-22T14:32:00.000-08:002008-02-22T14:32:00.000-08:00Very powerful. I agree with the others that it pac...Very powerful. I agree with the others that it packs quite a punch for a short poem.my backyardhttp://mybackyard.blogsome.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-80265274405411948512008-02-22T10:32:00.000-08:002008-02-22T10:32:00.000-08:00very nice, very powerful for such brevity.very nice, very powerful for such brevity.kryan8907http://kryan8907.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-56880158390867440662008-02-21T23:29:00.000-08:002008-02-21T23:29:00.000-08:00i really enjoy reading your stuff..always a twist ...i really enjoy reading your stuff..<br>always a twist in them..<br>thanks for sharing this one..Scotthttp://misterscott.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-367229346714157842008-02-21T21:32:00.000-08:002008-02-21T21:32:00.000-08:00I like the ambiguity in the first stanza, it leave...I like the ambiguity in the first stanza, it leaves plenty of room to think about. Good job.Mike Mchttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00246506853095718391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-8147674845759230492008-02-21T16:57:00.000-08:002008-02-21T16:57:00.000-08:00It sounds very devious.Plunge into my soul, if you...It sounds very devious.<br><br>Plunge into my soul, if you can find it. <br><br>I can't believe I still haven't added you to my blogroll. Damn it Gautami, I will now.noahthegreathttp://noahthegreat.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-47217871342397632422008-02-21T13:49:00.000-08:002008-02-21T13:49:00.000-08:00yes luminous soul is lovely, this is very good, Ga...yes luminous soul is lovely, this is very good, GautamiJohttp://florescence.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-46845756465811250522008-02-21T13:31:00.000-08:002008-02-21T13:31:00.000-08:00Wow! luminous soul! How cool's that?Wow! luminous soul! <br>How cool's that?SweetTalkingGuyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-2187406302400908602008-02-21T13:14:00.000-08:002008-02-21T13:14:00.000-08:00I like the way both second lines have the same num...I like the way both second lines have the same number of syllables. Very haiku-like with it's simplicity!Linda Jacobshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-61475465753249497572008-02-21T10:20:00.000-08:002008-02-21T10:20:00.000-08:00Wow! That's clever and very good!Wow! That's clever and very good!tumblewordshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-46057810028815319852008-02-21T09:28:00.000-08:002008-02-21T09:28:00.000-08:00short and to the point, excellentshort and to the point, excellentCrafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-83048471510047778742008-02-21T08:58:00.000-08:002008-02-21T08:58:00.000-08:00That is so good. But then your work always isThat is so good. But then your work always iskeith hillmanhttp://keithsramblings.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-24054194159512476592008-02-21T07:42:00.000-08:002008-02-21T07:42:00.000-08:00Thank You for the head's up...Forewarned is Fo...Thank You for the head's up...<br>Forewarned is Forearmed.Homo Escapeonshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10826410608415260786noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-3556616328769953352008-02-21T06:58:00.000-08:002008-02-21T06:58:00.000-08:00Love burrows deep in this. Excellent.Love burrows deep in this. Excellent.anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-29215997986972390332008-02-21T06:31:00.000-08:002008-02-21T06:31:00.000-08:00I really like the last line - I will have to find ...I really like the last line - I will have to find a way to plunge myself into your luminous soul. Like a love poem.lissahttp://www.justwritingwords.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-14414845440272540932008-02-21T06:25:00.000-08:002008-02-21T06:25:00.000-08:00Fair warning Gautami. Very direct.Fair warning Gautami. Very direct.Brianhttp://hummingbunny.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-63213201746605062802008-02-21T05:47:00.000-08:002008-02-21T05:47:00.000-08:00Hoo boy - that is hot and sweet and deep. Gorgeou...Hoo boy - that is hot and sweet and deep. Gorgeous poem, Gautami!hedwyghttp://hedwyg.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-51650785580354785302008-02-21T04:19:00.000-08:002008-02-21T04:19:00.000-08:00Very clever thought turn around in the middle, fro...Very clever thought turn around in the middle, from cautious to actively engaged which is reflected in the structure of the poem. There is something enticing and smilingly tricky and sexy in it.gingataohttp://gingatao.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-82726240027844944932008-02-21T04:13:00.000-08:002008-02-21T04:13:00.000-08:00I like this! Thank you for these words, Gautami.I like this! Thank you for these words, Gautami.Don Iannonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01922412641433868679noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-85515969732908994172008-02-21T03:24:00.000-08:002008-02-21T03:24:00.000-08:00for some reason it makes me feel like being in lov...for some reason it makes me feel like being in love with a ghost or an angel... very beautiful...paisleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-78297303292056709942008-02-20T19:46:00.000-08:002008-02-20T19:46:00.000-08:00So very deep!Wonderful poem!It was a lovely surpri...So very deep!<br>Wonderful poem!<br><br>It was a lovely surprise having you visit me today!<br>Thanks, Gautami for the kind comment!<br><br>MargieMargiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14433759763753850718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23922750232384971932008-02-20T18:13:00.000-08:002008-02-20T18:13:00.000-08:00WOW.WOW.Susan Helene Gottfriedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12778191943289129869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-20666329075501972082008-02-20T17:59:00.000-08:002008-02-20T17:59:00.000-08:00deepdeepKai C.http://www.blogger.com/profile/03525571908541394623noreply@blogger.com