tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post6112112829586771666..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: scattered with the windgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-25618592753153102742011-03-02T12:48:39.955-08:002011-03-02T12:48:39.955-08:00welcome join poets rally week 39, share a free or ...welcome join poets rally week 39, share a free or old random poem, make new poetic friends, have your work fully represented by the end of the rally..<br><br>you have 7 days to make 18 comments.<br>thanks for the time.<br>Happy Writing.<br>Hope to see you in.<br>xoxoxPromising Poets Parking Lothttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04817313233737719262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-66729886123032521222011-03-02T12:48:23.332-08:002011-03-02T12:48:23.332-08:00love it.scattered yet beautiful.love it.<br><br>scattered yet beautiful.Promising Poets Parking Lothttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04817313233737719262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-28927184458605994632011-02-27T17:06:49.602-08:002011-02-27T17:06:49.602-08:00what an observant take on the prompt.we are all co...what an observant take on the prompt.<br>we are all connected..one pull here means a push there and a shift hereRene/ Not The Rockefellershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31305735282733802332011-02-25T15:36:54.388-08:002011-02-25T15:36:54.388-08:00The sad truths of life.. no?!Good one, Gautami..&q...The sad truths of life.. no?!<br>Good one, Gautami..<br><br>"the chaotic world in which whole become holes" -- really liked this line.. very profound!Kavitahttp://kavisionz.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-39082092999457256362011-02-25T12:09:15.952-08:002011-02-25T12:09:15.952-08:00Sadly, a little chaos needed to find order...lovel...Sadly, a little chaos needed to find order...lovely worldRekhahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13484322426994645221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-90830759899271350502011-02-25T11:33:12.429-08:002011-02-25T11:33:12.429-08:00Each hole gets some stress... and hard to repair!Each hole gets some stress... and hard to repair!Margarethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-106368454860695742011-02-25T07:47:29.093-08:002011-02-25T07:47:29.093-08:00Loved it from the title!Loved it from the title!120 Sockshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05912071192179983603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-13500108420224637312011-02-25T05:38:09.820-08:002011-02-25T05:38:09.820-08:00just loved it, the way you mixed both themes and c...just loved it, the way you mixed both themes and created a brilliant poem.<br><br>trisha<br>http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/02/24/stress/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-11896580321884732382011-02-25T03:39:15.512-08:002011-02-25T03:39:15.512-08:00'The chaotic world in which whole becomes hole...'The chaotic world in which whole becomes holes' Love it! Nice Magpie.Sue Jhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15864986500627496240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-12418644573129747912011-02-25T00:13:55.679-08:002011-02-25T00:13:55.679-08:00I love the startling image "...of the chaotic...I love the startling image "...of the chaotic world in which whole become holes..."<br><br><a href="http://poetry-24.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Poetry24…where news is the Muse</a>Martin H.http://www.blogger.com/profile/13494219959077922220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-26940804372722165252011-02-24T19:18:53.179-08:002011-02-24T19:18:53.179-08:00I agree, another strong piece that just begs for a...I agree, another strong piece that just begs for a read - and re-reading.ThomGhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23056783100779434832011-02-24T16:58:58.851-08:002011-02-24T16:58:58.851-08:00What a good pairing..whole, holes..very stong imag...What a good pairing..whole, holes..very stong images!Lynhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11985979258848310351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-33742325651375877392011-02-24T14:18:28.591-08:002011-02-24T14:18:28.591-08:00Powerful line - chaotic world in which wholes beco...Powerful line - chaotic world in which wholes become holes. I've read your work before but I realized I missed a lot so I will follow so that doesn't happen again.Kristen Haskellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07481526316071592146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-21426267100542390542011-02-24T12:59:07.177-08:002011-02-24T12:59:07.177-08:00Beautiful use of the prompt words. Very much in t...Beautiful use of the prompt words. Very much in tune with our world at this moment... on a precipice, trying to fit the pieces together.<br><br>Peace, Amy<br>http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/02/24/finally-fit-3ww-abc/sharplittlepencilhttp://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-22688565482758795672011-02-24T11:49:30.702-08:002011-02-24T11:49:30.702-08:00Excellent.Excellent.Tess Kincaidhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-34465115244889908122011-02-24T11:41:43.826-08:002011-02-24T11:41:43.826-08:00Symbolic chaos... that's a jigsaw.Symbolic chaos... that's a jigsaw.Trellissimohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02283663872471564907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-946446688125656342011-02-24T11:06:14.852-08:002011-02-24T11:06:14.852-08:00Very powerful on many levels.Very powerful on many levels.jabbloghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-44186527150595920982011-02-24T09:56:01.311-08:002011-02-24T09:56:01.311-08:00very true and a strong onevery true and a strong oneGaurang Raohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01197327991289339685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-26079433972166719582011-02-24T08:44:13.222-08:002011-02-24T08:44:13.222-08:00I too liked the whole-holefragmented by stressI kn...I too liked the whole-hole<br><br>fragmented by stress<br>I know this breaking asunder<br>wonderful poem<br>and thank you for your kind commentSuzhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10329289442910294160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31369569595392394742011-02-24T06:27:09.690-08:002011-02-24T06:27:09.690-08:00It's fascinating! "whole - hole" Tha...It's fascinating! "whole - hole" Thanks for sharing it with us!Mariya Kolevahttp://www.phoenix-em.com/mariyakoleva/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-32143641061630541872011-02-24T06:00:24.903-08:002011-02-24T06:00:24.903-08:00Yes, great imagery and comment..another very stron...Yes, great imagery and comment..another very strong piece..Jaejaerosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-65002461791871319342011-02-24T03:38:21.212-08:002011-02-24T03:38:21.212-08:00There's a lot of hole digging going on at the ...There's a lot of hole digging going on at the moment - this strong piece reflects our concerns.Old Altonianhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02841390371168941022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-3372243335339481282011-02-23T19:32:41.742-08:002011-02-23T19:32:41.742-08:00Sheilagh Lee said truly powerful words .Sheilagh Lee said truly powerful words .Fear Not the Darkness but What lies Withinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-33380531298147832312011-02-23T14:37:28.718-08:002011-02-23T14:37:28.718-08:00This may be my favorite! Provocative and powerful....This may be my favorite! Provocative and powerful.Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.com