tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post5526064606339558127..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: charcoal shadowsgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-24139917454056084632010-11-14T06:24:32.325-08:002010-11-14T06:24:32.325-08:00Nice. Really nice.Nice. Really nice.Tinahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08925730745204736744noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68557284535560142112010-11-08T07:26:29.011-08:002010-11-08T07:26:29.011-08:00Thought provoking and beautiful...i love this one ...Thought provoking and beautiful...i love this one Gautami! :-)Carrie Burtthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-54595299235354868722010-11-07T14:23:19.979-08:002010-11-07T14:23:19.979-08:00Wow You did well with Mallory's line it fit in...Wow You did well with Mallory's line it fit in perfectly! I am really glad you liked the Allouette below is a link to the site I find so many poetry variations you might find others you like!<br>http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/types.htmlBloggin'withAmandahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11631827449933791507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-41306072617839493212010-11-07T10:34:21.678-08:002010-11-07T10:34:21.678-08:00Gautami,Love the imagery in this piece.PamelaGautami,<br>Love the imagery in this piece.<br>Pamelaflauberthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-3089245070893990512010-11-07T02:13:58.983-08:002010-11-07T02:13:58.983-08:00awesome!awesome!mallerykhttp://malleryk.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-38380054824690943822010-11-06T20:49:27.211-07:002010-11-06T20:49:27.211-07:00Incredible image!Incredible image!Debhttp://stoneymoss.org/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-25559180193906998432010-11-06T19:57:29.883-07:002010-11-06T19:57:29.883-07:00have a festive holiday...timeless theme,lovely tal...have a festive holiday...<br>timeless theme,<br>lovely tale.Jinglehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-6134003824679421272010-11-05T19:48:10.644-07:002010-11-05T19:48:10.644-07:00Nice idea - the rooster as an interloper.Nice idea - the rooster as an interloper.marousiahttp://marousia.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-34784961615618583312010-11-05T17:59:24.835-07:002010-11-05T17:59:24.835-07:00Watch out for that rooster. I like where you went ...Watch out for that rooster. I like where you went with this poem.Lindahttp://word-painting.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-54658163218556339752010-11-05T16:57:22.087-07:002010-11-05T16:57:22.087-07:00Nice, but that rooster's a bit on the creepy s...Nice, but that rooster's a bit on the creepy side. lolsheilahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07183605567090197137noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-25546243544813224812010-11-05T12:55:34.561-07:002010-11-05T12:55:34.561-07:00You've penned a fine painting - immortal, it i...You've penned a fine painting - immortal, it is.Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-91152635180785387742010-11-05T12:14:15.625-07:002010-11-05T12:14:15.625-07:00This is lovely.This is lovely.marianvhttp://http//Marianv.blog.co.uknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-91500735273406512102010-11-05T09:25:19.361-07:002010-11-05T09:25:19.361-07:00He sees dinner. But then, so does the spider.He sees dinner. But then, so does the spider.Alice Audreyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05142612556457347160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-71800158827471176302010-11-05T08:43:57.320-07:002010-11-05T08:43:57.320-07:00Very nice, indeed.Very nice, indeed.Martin H.http://www.blogger.com/profile/13494219959077922220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-8445623198045129372010-11-05T05:15:49.369-07:002010-11-05T05:15:49.369-07:00Beautiful use of your chosen Big Tent words, an if...Beautiful use of your chosen Big Tent words, an if I squint my eyes a bit I can see the shadow on the yellow paper!Maryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-87528801091534999752010-11-05T03:37:49.610-07:002010-11-05T03:37:49.610-07:00Nice use of a line for your poem! Silver RainNice use of a line for your poem! <br><a href="http://strummedwords.blogspot.com/2010/11/big-tent-poetry-silver-rain.html" rel="nofollow">Silver Rain</a>Strummed Wordshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14345074413602549369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-90000455315150527362010-11-04T19:20:12.905-07:002010-11-04T19:20:12.905-07:00I love your take on the prompt! Who'd guess a...I love your take on the prompt! Who'd guess a rooster intruding on romance.Teresahttp://razzamadazzle.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-2975826797107140092010-11-04T19:07:48.825-07:002010-11-04T19:07:48.825-07:00'the spider calls out to me into its parlour&#...'the spider calls out to me into its parlour' love this. nice write.Reflectionshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-84999358939593300442010-11-04T19:03:08.740-07:002010-11-04T19:03:08.740-07:00Oh that is a nice piece. :)Oh that is a nice piece. :)Kristen Haskellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07481526316071592146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-76672832796193279112010-11-04T18:47:31.890-07:002010-11-04T18:47:31.890-07:00Being "immortalized in yellow paper." I...Being "immortalized in yellow paper." I love the imagery in this poem. It is so alive!Lindahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14937532276250199445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-33610080469027354382010-11-04T18:04:18.252-07:002010-11-04T18:04:18.252-07:00I wish he could talk instead of crowing it all mor...I wish he could talk instead of crowing it all morning. hahaArianhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06622926164829991853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-39273554309571938462010-11-04T15:56:50.123-07:002010-11-04T15:56:50.123-07:00and what did the rooster see?what's he gonna c...and what did the rooster see?<br>what's he gonna crow about in the morning?Rene/ Not The Rockefellershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05088944123595868347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-35891730496047180522010-11-04T14:48:02.854-07:002010-11-04T14:48:02.854-07:00He sees.......... Cool!He sees.......... Cool!Siouxhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15079271353907261500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-36186700834227762532010-11-04T14:10:20.229-07:002010-11-04T14:10:20.229-07:00Oh: rooster no. two this night. Seems to be a farm...Oh: rooster no. two this night. Seems to be a farm somewhere ;-) Nice work.<br><br>Best wishes<br>RalfRalf Brökerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08602494065251750620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-66717218077576638472010-11-04T10:24:55.022-07:002010-11-04T10:24:55.022-07:00Hmm, what does he see? Nice piece.Hmm, what does he see? Nice piece.willowhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.com