tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post5480734553617333401..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: face on the wallgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-29102484314434245232011-03-26T11:17:37.774-07:002011-03-26T11:17:37.774-07:00Thanks for commenting on my poem; it made me come ...Thanks for commenting on my poem; it made me come back and read this one again. I like how you captured that duality of watching and being watched. Her face is so compelling, but you also told it from her perspective.Mr. Walkerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68614604987621154002011-03-25T02:30:25.883-07:002011-03-25T02:30:25.883-07:00A very good one Gautami!! "I might not be ide...A very good one Gautami!! <br>"I might not be identical to my image"<br> Duality nicely expressed!! <br>Loved the pace your poem runs!!Nankahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-79326161561642076602011-03-24T16:27:51.238-07:002011-03-24T16:27:51.238-07:00I admire your talent. Very enjoyable poem.I admire your talent. Very enjoyable poem.(Diane) Bibliophile By the Seahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10519875632878992728noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-90132709047769263782011-03-24T11:51:30.930-07:002011-03-24T11:51:30.930-07:00The thinking face that sees, observes and ignores....The thinking face that sees, observes and ignores....lovely thought.Rekhahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13484322426994645221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-19214207849053325162011-03-24T01:44:50.479-07:002011-03-24T01:44:50.479-07:00Loved the last lines.Loved the last lines.Tilly Budhttp://imnotaverse.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-58431392401960493312011-03-23T22:38:14.409-07:002011-03-23T22:38:14.409-07:00Lovely poem and good use of the prompt!Lovely poem and good use of the prompt!Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-45394891401258250712011-03-23T22:33:16.213-07:002011-03-23T22:33:16.213-07:00Very thoughtful exploration... I wonder, if the wr...Very thoughtful exploration... I wonder, if the writer viewing the photo is also the face itself, then does it become a mirror? Duality indeed. :)Joseph Harkerhttp://namingconstellations.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-89248151181793245732011-03-23T18:37:15.579-07:002011-03-23T18:37:15.579-07:00I like the rhythm of your work, very nice :)I like the rhythm of your work, very nice :)Apryl Gonzales Sweethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04387238145856711796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-65516768208872039902011-03-23T14:28:16.275-07:002011-03-23T14:28:16.275-07:00I love the way you make that picture so real. Nic...I love the way you make that picture so real. Nicely done.VL Sheridanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12831104283855298430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-58371716049856447222011-03-23T14:20:33.618-07:002011-03-23T14:20:33.618-07:00Permanently present yet free to seek and find illu...Permanently present yet free to seek and find illumination. Another strong and seemingly mystical poem, Gautami. I love what you do,<br><br>ElizabethElizabethhttp://intuitivepaths.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-15268244564483920942011-03-23T13:31:19.591-07:002011-03-23T13:31:19.591-07:00Another way of looking at the woman - you have giv...Another way of looking at the woman - you have given her a personality. Nice conclusion.Marianvhttp://Marianv.blog.co.uknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-87245118763739588052011-03-23T13:27:05.601-07:002011-03-23T13:27:05.601-07:00The many changing faces of the day reflected in th...The many changing faces of the day reflected in the face on the wall. Reminds me of Monet and his cathedral. Beautiful.Old Altonianhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02841390371168941022noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-52682111502711004142011-03-23T12:44:22.107-07:002011-03-23T12:44:22.107-07:00Almost the same thought i had in ym mind .. how wi...Almost the same thought i had in ym mind .. how will the real person feel looking at this !<br><br>Well written :)ladynimuehttp://ladynimue.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-59151323244756697312011-03-23T12:33:33.461-07:002011-03-23T12:33:33.461-07:00I love this...you ascribe to her more of the silen...I love this...you ascribe to her more of the silent watcher idea than that of a woman trapped. I especially like the last two lines. Nicely done.<br><br>- NicoleRaven's Wing Poetryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23998024111576868302011-03-23T12:09:12.951-07:002011-03-23T12:09:12.951-07:00Speaks to me about living with ambiguity.Nice work...Speaks to me about living with ambiguity.<br><br>Nice work!JamieDedeshttp://musingbymoonlight.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-62743544246625491312011-03-23T11:34:34.154-07:002011-03-23T11:34:34.154-07:00Beautifully done.Beautifully done.anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-20560037665532971402011-03-23T11:13:03.916-07:002011-03-23T11:13:03.916-07:00Agreed the face as an observer is an interesting a...Agreed the face as an observer is an interesting angle. Lovely piece, Gautami.<br><br>Pamelaflauberthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-22796086010535208712011-03-23T10:01:57.404-07:002011-03-23T10:01:57.404-07:00The face as observer...great idea inspired a great...The face as observer...great idea inspired a great poem! Love it!<br>~Brendabrenda whttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-47292829518465212352011-03-23T09:54:34.427-07:002011-03-23T09:54:34.427-07:00Sheilagh Lee said: truly lovelySheilagh Lee said: truly lovelyFear Not the Darkness but What lies Withinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-62495197197446689682011-03-23T09:24:11.578-07:002011-03-23T09:24:11.578-07:00This is so beautiful..to be able to thrive in dual...This is so beautiful..to be able to thrive in duality..a strong stuff that!!!Ramesh Soodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-44114042172030653942011-03-23T07:49:46.343-07:002011-03-23T07:49:46.343-07:00A face captured..still the same but changing..love...A face captured..still the same but changing..love the atmosphere of smoke and mirrors in this piece..Jaejaerosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.com