tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post548020958849554456..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: stolen momentsgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-71024496867322780342011-10-18T22:43:43.864-07:002011-10-18T22:43:43.864-07:00Many interesting images within this "remember...Many interesting images within this "remembered" poem. And thanks for what may well be a provocative prompt. ~neilneil reidhttp://bearlyaudible.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-11393214495812920042011-10-15T11:40:39.552-07:002011-10-15T11:40:39.552-07:00Beautiful poem! I am definitely a saver of keepsa...Beautiful poem! I am definitely a saver of keepsakes. I like the idea that they represent the moments and/or people that stole a goosebump from me. :)Rachel Hoythttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12565668664072704971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-80990792419789037062011-10-14T17:11:14.367-07:002011-10-14T17:11:14.367-07:00Lovely poem about keepsakes and memories, Gautami....Lovely poem about keepsakes and memories, Gautami.<br><br>Pamelaflauberthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-50202419435771148202011-10-14T14:58:42.185-07:002011-10-14T14:58:42.185-07:00Interesting poem.Hoarding does sometimes become th...Interesting poem.Hoarding does sometimes become the way by which a person tries to retain memory.Ravenblackhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07408808375869234480noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-60680306252927117682011-10-14T07:13:49.286-07:002011-10-14T07:13:49.286-07:00very nice imagery and an interesting prompt.very nice imagery and an interesting prompt.Annettehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02875705582058188289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-2818052661822757762011-10-14T06:51:18.402-07:002011-10-14T06:51:18.402-07:00Sometimes the very thing we cling onto the most is...Sometimes the very thing we cling onto the most is the very undoing of us.<br>Lovely, lovely prose. :)Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-33868912135815137852011-10-13T15:13:52.606-07:002011-10-13T15:13:52.606-07:00Good work, Gautami!<3Good work, Gautami!<br><br><3Andy Sewinahttp://sewina.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-86357939600247187402011-10-13T03:28:44.506-07:002011-10-13T03:28:44.506-07:00The closet...great metaphor! I like the prompt and...The closet...great metaphor! I like the prompt and look forward to writing to the notions of keepsakes and memories.nanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03445777687088584603noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67480666807952810972011-10-13T00:17:11.888-07:002011-10-13T00:17:11.888-07:00smart piece...smart piece...The Orange Treehttp://cooloceanwaves.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-69295276829671196952011-10-12T19:29:03.041-07:002011-10-12T19:29:03.041-07:00I have braided our intermingled breathin the knob ...I have braided our intermingled breath<br>in the knob on the closet door<br><br>That's lovely!mareymercyhttp://mareymercy.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-22716074458748899372011-10-12T19:28:28.969-07:002011-10-12T19:28:28.969-07:00You've set up another fine situation. I do wa...You've set up another fine situation. I do want the question answered, though. Was the other following, or was a tether left on one braided breath?barbarahttp://briarcat.wordpress.com/2011/10/11/chain-chain-chain/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-71429425132701234682011-10-12T15:07:13.402-07:002011-10-12T15:07:13.402-07:00We all have hidden places that we hide memories in...We all have hidden places that we hide memories in and this was so well done and enjoyed it so much<br>http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/11/the-day-of-the-dead/#comment-1682Ann LeFlorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09421100825301270608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-61775884955149389712011-10-12T12:25:52.697-07:002011-10-12T12:25:52.697-07:00So many layers to this poem. Love that. It is like...So many layers to this poem. Love that. It is like stowing away treasure but at the same time I sense fear in the character's voice - that is is one aspect of their person they wish to exercise control over because they're afraid of losing what is precious to them, of exposure. Just me spinning my own yarns of course. It's been a long day!:)Adura Ojohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10787703060107491771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-84637059597882152011-10-12T11:33:33.530-07:002011-10-12T11:33:33.530-07:00We keep entire containers of "archives" ...We keep entire containers of "archives" from favorite clothing to old posters. Every so often we run across on archive and say "Oh, I totally forgot about that." Hide them? Not on purpose.<br><br> <a href="http://www.aliceaudrey.com/?p=7894" rel="nofollow">Alice</a>Alice Audreyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05142612556457347160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-20880632548790757772011-10-12T06:00:45.835-07:002011-10-12T06:00:45.835-07:00Very revealing, and beautifully visual.Very revealing, and beautifully visual.miskmaskhttp://miskmask.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-34642270121171779482011-10-12T05:40:18.316-07:002011-10-12T05:40:18.316-07:00The metaphor of innermost self is strongly portray...The metaphor of innermost self is strongly portrayed in this beautiful poem. It is one thing to reveal what we choose in our writing, and quite another to be invaded involuntarily.vivinfrancehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-45977706228127626252011-10-12T02:08:51.806-07:002011-10-12T02:08:51.806-07:00Ah, the intangible stuff, the hiding place. I like...Ah, the intangible stuff, the hiding place. I like the drift of your poem and the prompt is gonna be great. Thanks Gautami.irenehttp://enerihot.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-76131166466318964372011-10-11T21:47:37.746-07:002011-10-11T21:47:37.746-07:00great imagery here...having our hiding places.. of...great imagery here...having our hiding places.. of whatever sort they may be.. invaded is tough..Claudiahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-48631931188877078152011-10-11T19:08:11.756-07:002011-10-11T19:08:11.756-07:00well done and brave of you to write this poem of a...well done and brave of you to write this poem of all your memories and keepsakes.Quotes,Photos and a little Poetryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12912336424986923049noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-43187187674123168082011-10-11T18:15:51.387-07:002011-10-11T18:15:51.387-07:00memories are a treasure and I felt this in your po...memories are a treasure and I felt this in your poem.ayalahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-63086782310003015802011-10-11T18:11:54.987-07:002011-10-11T18:11:54.987-07:00Such memories are truly our own, letting others ha...Such memories are truly our own, letting others have a peak wouldn't be the best, great verse.Pat Hatthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-11097610484179238442011-10-11T17:53:18.592-07:002011-10-11T17:53:18.592-07:00Clever and I love how you added these keepsakes as...Clever and I love how you added these keepsakes as treasured thoughts of holding one's soul! It was scary good!Ellahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-26236723050907321982011-10-11T09:03:35.105-07:002011-10-11T09:03:35.105-07:00def felt...i think in some ways we all cling to ta...def felt...i think in some ways we all cling to tangible memories...to have those violated is a scary thought...Brian Millerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com