tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post5468943662152108736..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: under the shadow of a pine treegautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-62422084894335681102011-01-10T19:50:59.256-08:002011-01-10T19:50:59.256-08:00This was wonderful.I am going to challenge myself ...This was wonderful.<br><br>I am going to challenge myself to write a poem around the challenge. I know I will come nowhere close to your amazing way with words, but I totally want to try!<br><br>Thanks for sharing this excellent use of the prompt.<br><br>Your words always resonate with me.Jennyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12462124067637610359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-81675745632640935782011-01-08T11:26:04.205-08:002011-01-08T11:26:04.205-08:00That was really lovely. You really do have a wond...That was really lovely. You really do have a wonderful way with words!Tgoettehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06850303812765307075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-54577265197142334782011-01-06T12:00:13.737-08:002011-01-06T12:00:13.737-08:00Yep, it's good to sink those roots deep.Nice j...Yep, it's good to sink those roots deep.<br><br>Nice job!<br><br>=)Suehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-38718224225944378862011-01-05T12:26:05.141-08:002011-01-05T12:26:05.141-08:00"winds cannot blow anything away if roots are..."winds cannot blow anything away if roots are firm" - I love that! :-)Susannahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-41296292981151884342011-01-05T06:28:27.683-08:002011-01-05T06:28:27.683-08:00Lovely poem. The last line is perfect!Namaste.......Lovely poem. The last line is perfect!<br><br>Namaste..........cjcj Sschlottmanhttp://theredsweater.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-66062758589856772232011-01-04T10:28:46.533-08:002011-01-04T10:28:46.533-08:00"tiny leaves from that seeds of lovemight rig..."tiny leaves from that seeds of love<br>might right her flawed patience<br>she appears calmed on the surface<br>but a typhoon goes on and on"<br><br>so true for me right now-and I love the last line- very powerful~ Happy New Year!Pattihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04993186190720192589noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-85975595247895044672011-01-04T10:21:10.661-08:002011-01-04T10:21:10.661-08:00Beautifully written. I love your poetry. Good Ce...Beautifully written. I love your poetry. Good Centus.Vikihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14421161703991840468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-33017266148261933422011-01-03T10:06:02.819-08:002011-01-03T10:06:02.819-08:00smart word...Greetings! How are you?I invite you t...smart word...<br><br><br>Greetings! How are you?<br><br>I invite you to become a participant at Thursday Poets Rally Week 36… you have until thisWednesday to make a minimum 18 comments among participants.<br> <br><br><a href="http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/12/29/thursday-poets-rally-week-36-december-29-2010-january-5-2011/" rel="nofollow"> Enter your entry here if you are ready </a> <br><br>Hope to see you in, Happy Monday, best wishes for the year of 2011.<br>Bless you…<br><br>xoxoxJinglehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-44431837032709595052011-01-02T22:43:14.518-08:002011-01-02T22:43:14.518-08:00That was just lovely Gautami. Most of us are like ...That was just lovely Gautami. Most of us are like this...<br><br>Happy New Year!Shail Raghuvanshihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05484123238045040778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-30688106187217286982011-01-02T20:56:55.608-08:002011-01-02T20:56:55.608-08:00Lovely poem!Lovely poem!Judiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02778815502961000469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-51837955121415510972011-01-02T19:21:04.732-08:002011-01-02T19:21:04.732-08:00This is such a wonderful poem. Must agree that th...This is such a wonderful poem. Must agree that there are several layers here. I love them all.Teresahttp://razzamadazzle.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-59265375777739656312011-01-02T18:20:57.272-08:002011-01-02T18:20:57.272-08:00Bravo!So lovely and so many layers to this one. An...Bravo!<br><br>So lovely and so many layers to this one. And I see many different ways this poem can be interpreted. For me, I am struck by the thought that we are made stronger when, in those moments of being in the deep, dark shadows that are a part of every life, we allow ourselves to be embraced by God. For those embraces are indeed nurturing and give rise to the fortitude necessary to continue planting those seeds of love! <br><br>Keep on sowing those seeds my dear!5thsisterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01169693305157071792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23601609371357227582011-01-02T16:26:05.090-08:002011-01-02T16:26:05.090-08:00"She plants Love"...that is the proper w..."She plants Love"...that is the proper way to start a New Year. I wish you much happiness for 2011.giovannicucullohttp://giovannicucullo.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-38127796556773210072011-01-02T15:46:15.291-08:002011-01-02T15:46:15.291-08:00..the typhoon goes on and on.... yes, it does does.....the typhoon goes on and on.... yes, it does doesn't it...ms piehttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2011/01/02/spark-and-stare/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67590816268775542512011-01-02T15:22:59.514-08:002011-01-02T15:22:59.514-08:00Terrific, as usual! Your New Year writing is off t...Terrific, as usual! Your New Year writing is off to a fine start...Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-65170611475516598322011-01-02T15:17:41.043-08:002011-01-02T15:17:41.043-08:00How wonderful How wonderful How wonderfulPlease ha...How wonderful How wonderful How wonderful<br><br><br><br>Please have a good new week.<br><br><a href="http://tagein-tagaus-athen.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">daily athens </a>ρομπερτhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07168914686841679657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-19339453419991517922011-01-02T11:26:34.677-08:002011-01-02T11:26:34.677-08:00Good roots are important! Beautiful poetry. I agre...Good roots are important! Beautiful poetry. I agree with the other commenters. You pull the reader into your text.<br>Clever use of the prompt.<br>Happy New Year!<br>Anna<br><a href="http://annasadornments.blogspot.com/2011/01/mrs-jenny-matlocks-saturday-centus-week.html" rel="nofollow">Anna's SC#35</a>Annahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17926688000745346961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-40239196263123247422011-01-02T09:59:52.197-08:002011-01-02T09:59:52.197-08:00This was a lovely, original take on the prompt. Yo...This was a lovely, original take on the prompt. Your words pulled me along and made me think. Beautifully written. KatKathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12396548112800738809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-2848901254702459822011-01-02T08:39:36.446-08:002011-01-02T08:39:36.446-08:00That first line pulled me right in! Great images....That first line pulled me right in! Great images. Happy New Year to you, too!Linda Jacobshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09156972661541133665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-34969863741912555972011-01-02T08:23:50.914-08:002011-01-02T08:23:50.914-08:00I agree with Sherri! Really thought provoking!I agree with Sherri! Really thought provoking!jfb57http://www.blogger.com/profile/17876700842985406565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-32635865370979693542011-01-02T05:03:37.715-08:002011-01-02T05:03:37.715-08:00This was powerful...it truly resonated with me! I ...This was powerful...it truly resonated with me! I will have to go read this several more times. Beautiful.Sherrihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-2640710904775927032011-01-02T04:00:39.900-08:002011-01-02T04:00:39.900-08:00A very true last line.A very true last line.anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.com