tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post5432256155377209023..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: dead woman and her treasuresgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-55792895830170623242011-02-21T11:21:33.434-08:002011-02-21T11:21:33.434-08:00I think this poem is impressive and beautiful, but...I think this poem is impressive and beautiful, but I cannot say that I really understand it.<br><br>I guess it is this mysterious quality to art that keeps us guessing and keeps us interested.<br><br>Wonderful post!<br>Best wishes,<br>Anna<br>P.S.<br>I'm sorry that I am commenting so late. I am going back to older posts that I have missed.<br>Here is my SC-text:<br><a href="http://annasadornments.blogspot.com/2011/01/mrs-jenny-matlocks-saturday-centus-week_29.html" rel="nofollow"> 'Infrequent visitor' SC week 39</a>Annahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17926688000745346961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-16419870680461545722011-02-12T17:06:33.167-08:002011-02-12T17:06:33.167-08:00Imagery is very thought provoking and disturbing a...Imagery is very thought provoking and disturbing at the same time...very good !!!Nonna Beachhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03227580166409342214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-19825698111746905972011-02-10T07:52:50.291-08:002011-02-10T07:52:50.291-08:00I was really impressed with the quality of this wr...I was really impressed with the quality of this writing.<br><br>It feels like something that should be included in an anthology.<br><br>Really excellent visualization and flow.<br><br>I enjoyed the intensity you conveyed here.<br><br>Thank you for linking.Jennyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12462124067637610359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-65281744263942190882011-02-05T12:24:10.023-08:002011-02-05T12:24:10.023-08:00well all die with our secrets ... wonderful piece!...well all die with our secrets ... wonderful piece!<br><br>jp/deborahJanePoet ~ deborahhttp://www.janepoet.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-36113003772166213462011-02-04T17:25:06.163-08:002011-02-04T17:25:06.163-08:00This is a very intriguing piece. The imagery is lo...This is a very intriguing piece. The imagery is lovely. I'll be thinking on this one for some time. Well done. KatKathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12396548112800738809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-19321336771964044462011-02-04T10:53:01.368-08:002011-02-04T10:53:01.368-08:00The coins she tosses out after the words, reminded...The coins she tosses out after the words, reminded me of that old practice of placing coins on the eyes of a corpse to weigh them down so they will remain shut. You turn that around here, she tosses them after what has weighted her down, keeping her immovable, as well as unseeing. Fantastic write, and glad to see you are still as intrigued as I am,<br><br>ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2011/02/03/wordle-frustration/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-53654380264588025312011-02-04T10:15:24.087-08:002011-02-04T10:15:24.087-08:00Wow, a lot to think about here.Wow, a lot to think about here.Vikihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14421161703991840468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-43659970914629838582011-02-04T07:52:07.312-08:002011-02-04T07:52:07.312-08:00The images of this piece are very powerful, making...The images of this piece are very powerful, making it visual as well as well written.<br><br>Thanks..........cjcj Schlottmanhttp://theredsweater.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-73092468445090762902011-02-03T21:49:44.478-08:002011-02-03T21:49:44.478-08:00I didn't realize this was part of a series - I...I didn't realize this was part of a series - I'll have to go check the rest out. I was wondering if the dead woman was a friend or stranger. Perhaps I'll find out when I find the others.The Accidental Novelisthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06472222686878922186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67716321581067880132011-02-03T09:51:43.106-08:002011-02-03T09:51:43.106-08:00I like it so much!I like it so much!Mariya Kolevahttp://www.phoenix-em.com/mariyakoleva/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-78132558267295058372011-02-03T01:15:31.229-08:002011-02-03T01:15:31.229-08:00Cast out so she is dead to the world and now she d...Cast out so she is dead to the world and now she discards what little she has that tied her to the past. That must have been so hard for her. However it does give her chance to start again, doesn't it? I certainly hope so.<br><br>Really powerful writing.oldegghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-59494416429846553402011-02-02T21:53:06.079-08:002011-02-02T21:53:06.079-08:00Gautami! Your Dead Woman poems continue to become...Gautami! Your Dead Woman poems continue to become more fully alive with each writing. She lives inside all of us who embrace loss as a means to finding the next good thing.<br><br>Lovely take on 3WW. <br><br>Peace, Amysharplittlepencilhttp://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-62680399991991688722011-02-02T21:16:44.564-08:002011-02-02T21:16:44.564-08:00This is intense...This is intense...Lost in thoughtshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09177323757059035525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-30700322878566085672011-02-02T20:42:09.858-08:002011-02-02T20:42:09.858-08:00Sounds like she finally got her freedom...poor wom...Sounds like she finally got her freedom...poor woman...Jenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12573262524755768643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-88966284212776804342011-02-02T16:10:00.273-08:002011-02-02T16:10:00.273-08:00This makes one think hard about this woman. Dark ...This makes one think hard about this woman. Dark and intense, yet also inspiring.JackSamMumhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06880295170339104548noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-84219860625512047402011-02-02T14:44:58.744-08:002011-02-02T14:44:58.744-08:00Sheilagh Lee said: very interestingGreat workSheilagh Lee said: very interesting<br>Great workFear Not the Darkness but What lies Withinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-87010359112914580022011-02-02T13:53:03.588-08:002011-02-02T13:53:03.588-08:00Sometimes she is deep inside every woman........Sometimes she is deep inside every woman........Whitesnakehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-70303956666669890192011-02-02T09:09:36.940-08:002011-02-02T09:09:36.940-08:00She must have gone to find one who is truly alive ...She must have gone to find one who is truly alive and living better than her.. well she may find one.. <br>Very intense poem, this!!Ramesh Soodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05589155663544312563noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-53023700454658003082011-02-02T09:00:17.617-08:002011-02-02T09:00:17.617-08:00We can only guess..you have given us some wonderfu...We can only guess..you have given us some wonderful clues and images to imagine how she lives..haunting as ever..Jaejaerosehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.com