tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post5391181653646685949..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: if tomorrow comes----3WWgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67225348202378795202008-01-29T16:40:00.000-08:002008-01-29T16:40:00.000-08:00beautiful!beautiful!Leigh Learhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05188365355748586948noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-51228976650441001292008-01-26T19:18:00.000-08:002008-01-26T19:18:00.000-08:00Once again you throw in a detail I'm not expec...Once again you throw in a detail I'm not expecting and an ending that, though unexpected, fit. I, too, love sad poems. I wonder if it is because to be sad we had to have cared. Laughing is much easier.Marcia (MeeAugraphie)http://meeaugraphie.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-12818191846377509602008-01-26T09:35:00.000-08:002008-01-26T09:35:00.000-08:00Wow, did not expect that ending! I like the phrasi...Wow, did not expect that ending! I like the phrasing of bidding tomorrow goodbye.<br><br>Anyway, thanks for the comment on my first 3WW - can't wait for next week's! :)Clueless Cathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03843194378331410885noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-63896103342260183692008-01-25T04:30:00.000-08:002008-01-25T04:30:00.000-08:00Ooo sad one, but beautiful.Ooo sad one, but beautiful.Truefaith1963http://www.blogger.com/profile/03026809487740731739noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-1323921292073540262008-01-25T01:52:00.000-08:002008-01-25T01:52:00.000-08:00Hello Gautami,You are really good with words and w...Hello Gautami,<br><br>You are really good with words and writing. Always clear and uncomplicated. I like what you wrote.<br><br>Thanks for your encouragement. <br><br>SerenaSerenahttp://quantumchat.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68593746738907976652008-01-24T19:20:00.000-08:002008-01-24T19:20:00.000-08:00Very nice...sad.Very nice...sad.Carloshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04760014102220519736noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-24727096807780933072008-01-24T15:28:00.000-08:002008-01-24T15:28:00.000-08:00That's beautiful. It is so sensual and sad.That's beautiful. It is so sensual and sad.WriterKathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01966875820095185649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-63456361928891252442008-01-24T11:48:00.000-08:002008-01-24T11:48:00.000-08:00O, how beautiful yet so sad and unfortunately this...O, how beautiful yet so sad and unfortunately this does happen in life. So very well done!<br><br>SSandyhttp://mockhaiku.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-58764803801847204552008-01-24T04:02:00.000-08:002008-01-24T04:02:00.000-08:00heartbreakingly beautifulthis piece reminded me of...heartbreakingly beautiful<br><br>this piece reminded me of someone I know, thankfully though her story had a more happy ending.<br><br>enjoyed!Christyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14605702499635622573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31647289387790101812008-01-24T03:30:00.000-08:002008-01-24T03:30:00.000-08:00sometimes the sadness is just as beautiful as the ...sometimes the sadness is just as beautiful as the happiness. you posted a wonderfully, tragic work and i admire you for it all the more.Heather Kathleenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10559289518691894880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-23353347471089902722008-01-24T02:38:00.000-08:002008-01-24T02:38:00.000-08:00She can't give up! Spring is 'round the c...She can't give up! Spring is 'round the corner!Corinahttp://corinajoyc.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-13715732550612528522008-01-23T17:38:00.000-08:002008-01-23T17:38:00.000-08:00Sadly beautiful. 25 years is an awful long time to...Sadly beautiful. 25 years is an awful long time to wait on someone. There is great sadness is waiting that long for something. I thought her letting go was almost an uplifting ending.Herb Urbanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08472788833737826733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-70149210970473051522008-01-23T16:01:00.000-08:002008-01-23T16:01:00.000-08:00I felt that cold void in her through your words bu...I felt that cold void in her through your words but the end still caught me off guard. Well done!<br><br>XXOOTammyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-57055154031698847202008-01-23T15:01:00.000-08:002008-01-23T15:01:00.000-08:00Love these images -- and I love "froze her br...Love these images -- and I love "froze her breath to the walls of her nose" -- I could feel it!!!Sherryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08271529958269038071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-873570924173137562008-01-23T14:06:00.000-08:002008-01-23T14:06:00.000-08:00burrrr....the beauty of answered love...burrrr....the beauty of answered love...LittleWinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16010376737431344381noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-10491666758132225972008-01-23T13:36:00.000-08:002008-01-23T13:36:00.000-08:00I can smell those roses like at a funeral! Sad bu...I can smell those roses like at a funeral! Sad but wonderfully written!Lindahttp://lindaspoetry.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-74491978844516273862008-01-23T11:31:00.000-08:002008-01-23T11:31:00.000-08:00This was striking, gautami, and beautifully writte...This was striking, gautami, and beautifully written.Square1http://www.blogger.com/profile/13559171378908608414noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-56759225185293147602008-01-23T10:42:00.000-08:002008-01-23T10:42:00.000-08:00bid tomorrow goodbye...a final act, for sure. Sad....bid tomorrow goodbye...a final act, for sure. Sad. Well-done.tumblewordshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-63596146668811002482008-01-23T08:19:00.000-08:002008-01-23T08:19:00.000-08:00ooh. yowch. I like the image of all warmth gone ...ooh. yowch. I like the image of all warmth gone over 20 years. I also did a crushed rose today.pjdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05028687955957107957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-31509338116075307462008-01-23T08:07:00.000-08:002008-01-23T08:07:00.000-08:00I really liked it. The words did conjure up a tra...I really liked it. The words did conjure up a tragic ending<br><br>I don't know how you do it--I'm so in awe of good poetrypiahttp://courtingdestiny.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-11903399691485380932008-01-23T08:04:00.000-08:002008-01-23T08:04:00.000-08:00Oh no!!!!!:(Oh what a tragic ending. Very, very sa...Oh no!!!!!<br><br>:(<br><br>Oh what a tragic ending. Very, very sad.TChttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02487739742081226423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-69492839359746055342008-01-23T06:29:00.000-08:002008-01-23T06:29:00.000-08:00that was really beautiful.. nice job!!!that was really beautiful.. nice job!!!paisleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-4761673966865365462008-01-23T05:59:00.000-08:002008-01-23T05:59:00.000-08:00I liked the image of scattering the petals on her ...I liked the image of scattering the petals on her shoes in a routine. Very nice, as always. Good to visit you.<br><br>http://collectingmythoughts.blogspot.com/2008/01/3ww-three-word-wednesday-today-january.htmlNormahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11502895616873273470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67123496873788281262008-01-23T04:48:00.000-08:002008-01-23T04:48:00.000-08:00It's interesting how these three words conjure...It's interesting how these three words conjure up thoughts of sadness and tragedy.watermaidhttp://watermaid.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.com