tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post5355181660543943054..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: the beast demandsgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-26100495049217850852011-03-28T04:46:00.168-07:002011-03-28T04:46:00.168-07:00If we could only tame the beast.If we could only tame the beast.Tess Kincaidhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-36528810771945066552011-03-27T14:53:29.322-07:002011-03-27T14:53:29.322-07:00I think the beast is going to need creative farmin...I think the beast is going to need creative farming rather than weapons of mass destruction to keep it fed.<br><br>Great poetry, though!<br><br>Mine is at:<br><br>http://rnsane.blogspot.com/2011/03/magpie-tales-58-eve-before-battle-march.htmlRNSANEhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02841873957894861725noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-37688651279649668162011-03-25T16:12:49.490-07:002011-03-25T16:12:49.490-07:00I recognized the quoteas your voice; I agree thisi...I recognized the quote<br>as your voice; I agree this<br>is a very powerful statement,<br>muscular poetics, for the beast<br>bursts from within us all,<br>carried like our god force,<br>hidden behind organs, sometimes<br>surfing through our blood as it<br>boils, as it pounds in our temples,<br>or in the temples of the Infidels.Glenn Buttkushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-11334374940896776252011-03-24T08:59:10.252-07:002011-03-24T08:59:10.252-07:00The quotations are my own. It is my signature, u c...The quotations are my own. It is my signature, u can say, the way I keep those separated from the poem..gautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-10234296100448324812011-03-24T04:11:11.032-07:002011-03-24T04:11:11.032-07:00The beast demands... and very apt that you reach o...The beast demands... and very apt that you reach out for Sabre.. I liked it vry much Gautami.<br>Thanks for sharing...<br><br><br><br>ॐ नमः शिवाय<br>Om Namah Shivaya<br>http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/03/whispers-seed-and-senseless-living.html<br>At Twitter @VerseEveryDayShashihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-36285573236804901932011-03-23T18:17:03.061-07:002011-03-23T18:17:03.061-07:00Wonderfully written piece!Wonderfully written piece!Hopehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07423174840229628807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-67768967403474029352011-03-23T17:55:42.813-07:002011-03-23T17:55:42.813-07:00The beast is insatiable...this was very well done....The beast is insatiable...this was very well done. Vbversebenderhttp://versebender.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-79802617525768902542011-03-23T16:19:16.089-07:002011-03-23T16:19:16.089-07:00Intriguing! I sense a story behind the graphic yet...Intriguing! I sense a story behind the graphic yet symbolic picture you paint.violethttp://vnesdolypoems.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-52563409578880810022011-03-23T14:36:05.226-07:002011-03-23T14:36:05.226-07:00The Beast, eat or be eaten. Tough choice, unless ...The Beast, eat or be eaten. Tough choice, unless you simultaneously yield your arms. Here's to hope. In this day, killing for convenience starts early.<br><br>Well written and thoughtful piece.Joannahttps://intostillness.wordpress.com/2011/03/22/one-shot-wednesday-week-38/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-39776271023493803642011-03-23T11:57:08.275-07:002011-03-23T11:57:08.275-07:00There is always so much depth to your writing. Muc...There is always so much depth to your writing. Much is said with an economy of words. Good writing!Elainehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04251279808111725003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-86102216139663355902011-03-23T11:55:21.313-07:002011-03-23T11:55:21.313-07:00Nothing can hide the ugliness of violent death...Nothing can hide the ugliness of violent death...Jinksyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-33415560512692249772011-03-23T11:24:40.743-07:002011-03-23T11:24:40.743-07:00If only the light would lead us out of the dark. A...If only the light would lead us out of the dark. A wise poem indeed, Gautami.<br><br>Pamelaflauberthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-76885190902066907202011-03-23T11:07:17.636-07:002011-03-23T11:07:17.636-07:00I like your response to the prompt. War is so ofte...I like your response to the prompt. War is so often glorified, often quite unintentionally.jabbloghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12176958811589489979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-61706971455885098922011-03-23T11:04:29.678-07:002011-03-23T11:04:29.678-07:00What does the beast fear that he is so angry? Wher...What does the beast fear that he is so angry? Where is his sadness that he continues to lash out? When will the madness stop?Lolamousehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-44032023405078647082011-03-23T10:04:05.177-07:002011-03-23T10:04:05.177-07:00Beasts can be so greedy - the root of all evil!Nic...Beasts can be so greedy - the root of all evil!<br><br>Nice One Shot, Gautami!Eric 'Bubba' Alderhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-85346089220759964702011-03-23T09:50:14.971-07:002011-03-23T09:50:14.971-07:00I hope soon, we tame the beast. Unfortunately, it...I hope soon, we tame the beast. Unfortunately, it doesn't look that way. Your poem speaks volumes of truth.Myrna R.http://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-50161990101210545872011-03-23T02:35:18.752-07:002011-03-23T02:35:18.752-07:00Powerful poem - thank you for sharingPowerful poem - thank you for sharingmarousiahttp://marousia.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-73729713951483845142011-03-22T23:34:40.179-07:002011-03-22T23:34:40.179-07:00This time a rainbow warrior bornI claim it as my w...This time a rainbow warrior born<br>I claim it as my way<br>Not my task to render flesh torn<br>'Tis time for a brand new day<br>Now I put it all to very different end<br>I did not come back to kill and die<br>But to be a warrior among healing men<br>With the light of love in my eye<br><br>Onelove--Tiger WindwalkerBig Sur Blogispherehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13080435178381510742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-82450443801622229092011-03-22T21:24:56.674-07:002011-03-22T21:24:56.674-07:00We do. Give in to it. Slow learners. A well writte...We do. Give in to it. Slow learners. A well written piece!Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-54100137041074397862011-03-22T20:01:38.108-07:002011-03-22T20:01:38.108-07:00Nice poem! The outward beauty of the sword and shi...Nice poem! The outward beauty of the sword and shield can't deny the blood they have spilled. Say no to wars..periwinklerhttp://periwinkler.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-14527170619604307112011-03-22T19:37:26.634-07:002011-03-22T19:37:26.634-07:00may the light lead us out of the dark...may the light lead us out of the dark...Brian Millerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-69812669014446386272011-03-22T14:13:20.477-07:002011-03-22T14:13:20.477-07:00You have written a wise and profound piece ....You have written a wise and profound piece ....Helenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-17854919418880932202011-03-22T11:18:09.988-07:002011-03-22T11:18:09.988-07:00Gautami,Our 'take' on warfare seems hand-i...Gautami,<br><br>Our 'take' on warfare seems hand-in-hand.<br><br>How do you inter-related the quotations with the poems -- it's an interesting process.<br><br><br>TrulyfoolTrulyfoolhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13385653066007723233noreply@blogger.com