tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post5312559525725979637..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: guts wrench out in the open making a spectacle for allgautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger42125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-57228219403123220632009-01-03T01:25:00.000-08:002009-01-03T01:25:00.000-08:00I ache for you. Romantic love is rare, in my opini...I ache for you. Romantic love is rare, in my opinion. Too sadly, many of us find that we can love but not have a life with someone. Yet the questions can plague our soul when we feel it would work...<br><br> This pieces certainly spills from your heart and, as always, is written well. I hope the new year brings a new special someone into your life. You deserve the best, Gautami.<br><br>hugs,<br>gelgelhttp://shadowsinthemoonlight.typepad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-27074239195457408032009-01-01T15:52:00.000-08:002009-01-01T15:52:00.000-08:00hey gautami!!loved this post so much....can comple...hey gautami!!<br>loved this post so much....<br>can completely understand how it feels when someone walks out from ur life...Nairobihttp://songofsea.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-15212076835907041632009-01-01T15:24:00.000-08:002009-01-01T15:24:00.000-08:00~I will live but barely so for a long time to come...~I will live but barely so for a long time to come or never~ I know this feeling very well, but there will be that person who deserves all that you have to give. Beautifully written. Thank you.Melodyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05181775494535352497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-4446576492230402842008-12-31T09:44:00.000-08:002008-12-31T09:44:00.000-08:00rawhonestpassionatethis inspired thoughts of relat...raw<br>honest<br>passionate<br><br>this inspired thoughts of relationship with another as well as the deepest intimate relationship with oneselfTammie Leehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09018402134070834516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-32535530558473529812008-12-30T12:09:00.000-08:002008-12-30T12:09:00.000-08:00Oh thank you for the encouragement!!!I don't k...Oh thank you for the encouragement!!!<br><br>I don't know if I'm just PMSing or what, but that poem brought a tear to my eye...<br><br>Thank you!Onionhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00212825203076248889noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-14181922471240676232008-12-30T09:26:00.000-08:002008-12-30T09:26:00.000-08:00Awesome poem. Raw and emotional.Awesome poem. Raw and emotional.forgetfulonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07895803172098820967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-63018456604908927502008-12-30T08:34:00.000-08:002008-12-30T08:34:00.000-08:00deeply moving Gautami...deeply moving Gautami...rob kistnerhttp://image-verse.com/1295noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-35415626519994050952008-12-30T08:18:00.000-08:002008-12-30T08:18:00.000-08:00"walking away is easy for youjust let me know..."walking away is easy for you<br>just let me know how do I do it<br>nonchalantly, just the way you did"<br><br>Soulful words that speak to my being - words that can rarely be a product of fiction. <br>And yes, sometimes you just have to write about love. The all-consuming kind.Captain Moleculehttps://captainmolecule.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-36869432130929687572008-12-30T07:51:00.000-08:002008-12-30T07:51:00.000-08:00Loved the way the poem ended...."yes, I will ...Loved the way the poem ended....<br>"yes, I will live but barely so<br>for a long time to come or never"neilinahttp://neilina.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-4312744085145411672008-12-30T01:05:00.000-08:002008-12-30T01:05:00.000-08:00unrequited love beautifully expressed!Loved the po...unrequited love beautifully expressed!<br><br>Loved the poem!Winnie the poohihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11445691463105808647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-40666235049990632012008-12-29T21:59:00.000-08:002008-12-29T21:59:00.000-08:00I will live but barely so...A good friend is going...I will live but barely so...<br><br>A good friend is going through a terrible relationship where the guy is not sensitive to her love for him and keeps her hanging on for marriage. She can relate to this. <br><br>Love that is not reciprocated is a real killer!Asma Ahsanhttp://asmaahsan1974.wordpress.com/2008/12/28/i-believe-in-you/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-72932233182264402862008-12-29T21:03:00.000-08:002008-12-29T21:03:00.000-08:00So tragic Gautamy, and so powerful. You really cap...So tragic Gautamy, and so powerful. You really captured that unrequited desperate love.ChefDruckhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01581859830585809291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-24774601087985339652008-12-29T19:56:00.000-08:002008-12-29T19:56:00.000-08:00Wow!I love the image of "tears fill my eyes/u...Wow!<br>I love the image of "tears fill my eyes/unknown to me visible to all"<br><br>A powerful declaration, Gautami!angiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04688052197234143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-47354944461461198362008-12-29T18:32:00.000-08:002008-12-29T18:32:00.000-08:00Gotta do it. Well done. I admore the candor. I kno...Gotta do it. Well done. I admore the candor. I know the feeling. Thanks.SandyCarlsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-24123590154231141762008-12-29T06:56:00.000-08:002008-12-29T06:56:00.000-08:00your passion is clear...your love undefined becaus...your passion is clear...your love undefined because of lack of communication (?)...human!!ifhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07861930312460679629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-9507387030154479212008-12-29T00:05:00.000-08:002008-12-29T00:05:00.000-08:00Very nicely done. Sometimes love happens at the w...Very nicely done. Sometimes love happens at the wierdest times wierdest places but I am sure in time you will to find love again.jadeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15878795387580544093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-10727026547650459332008-12-28T18:28:00.000-08:002008-12-28T18:28:00.000-08:00Well done - surely tears at the heart and marks th...Well done - surely tears at the heart and marks the fine line between love returned and love not.Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-90236610082287942922008-12-28T14:27:00.000-08:002008-12-28T14:27:00.000-08:00Hmm, I will live but barely so - I loved that :)Hmm, I will live but barely so - I loved that :)Devil Moodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16083722657651175729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-82322901425477111182008-12-28T13:14:00.000-08:002008-12-28T13:14:00.000-08:00"the gates would open up wrenching us both&qu..."the gates would open up wrenching us both"- it captures passion so well. And I can relate to the last lines...Annamarihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06611955404994410354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-41506808593636271812008-12-28T07:15:00.000-08:002008-12-28T07:15:00.000-08:00beautiful - tugged at me heartstrings..and i hope...beautiful - tugged at me heartstrings..and <br> i hope it's only the geography that's keeping you apart yet i feel it's his/her loss and not yours; there's bound to be someone who needen't teach <br>you how to walk away nonchalantly!? <br><br>much peaceDoehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18133281861291670527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-1893559294171212372008-12-28T00:48:00.000-08:002008-12-28T00:48:00.000-08:00Nicely done. I think we all recall that gut-wrench...Nicely done. I think we all recall that gut-wrenching need for someone.Leatherdykeukhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13048590167153841615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-58169318092466294012008-12-27T23:30:00.000-08:002008-12-27T23:30:00.000-08:00Painful....to not exist for someone who means exis...Painful....to not exist for someone who means existence for you.Vaidya_Vaakyahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13471434838030380993noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-69464119779532966972008-12-27T19:41:00.000-08:002008-12-27T19:41:00.000-08:00Nicely done... unrequited love is frustrating...Nicely done... unrequited love is frustrating...John Tranhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14594659729954601082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-88018678898393728522008-12-27T19:23:00.000-08:002008-12-27T19:23:00.000-08:00Achingly beautiful. This is obviously written abo...Achingly beautiful. This is obviously written about someone undeserving of your love and affection.Herb Urbanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08472788833737826733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-81622552687859998512008-12-27T18:45:00.000-08:002008-12-27T18:45:00.000-08:00"I wish I could reach out to your very soul a..."I wish I could reach out to your very soul and submerge myself within you". Beautful. To know and be known.presenthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16853240090222371220noreply@blogger.com