tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post5230463703669838393..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: a spinning tale, which makes no sensegautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-79844343180614053112011-03-05T14:08:44.904-08:002011-03-05T14:08:44.904-08:00Incredible.Where were you when I was leaving my fi...Incredible.<br><br>Where were you when I was leaving my first husband. I would totally have used some of these lines.<br><br>Love this dark and haunting imagery.<br><br>Love the truth of these words.<br><br>Thanks for a wonderful use of this difficult prompt.Jennyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12462124067637610359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-85566823012699689162011-02-26T19:48:57.378-08:002011-02-26T19:48:57.378-08:00Well rendered. The voice of this poem is the voice...Well rendered. The voice of this poem is the voice of someone I need.Patrickhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11028617814529193974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-30674438712723366142011-02-23T14:17:36.098-08:002011-02-23T14:17:36.098-08:00Spinning your tales and never seeing the top. Tha...Spinning your tales and never seeing the top. That would be an exercise in futility. Please look upward. :)<br>I like it, GT!<br>..Jimhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02982249173214655060noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-13885138269472096242011-02-22T11:35:36.445-08:002011-02-22T11:35:36.445-08:00ohhh the sting.... oozing wound...... it is good t...ohhh the sting.... oozing wound...... it is good to walk away and come back another day..... love the confrontation though it feels so good!!!ms piehttp://pieceofpie.wordpress.com/2011/02/19/a-view/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-12221537875096390742011-02-21T19:25:24.898-08:002011-02-21T19:25:24.898-08:00This resonates with me. That damned grenade!This resonates with me. That damned grenade!SandyCarlsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-59246108751688902612011-02-21T17:19:14.599-08:002011-02-21T17:19:14.599-08:00oh yes you have to love a strong and destructable ...oh yes you have to love a strong and destructable person! very nicely done!Karen S.http://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-28334607997762871342011-02-21T16:51:17.323-08:002011-02-21T16:51:17.323-08:00This could be anger ebbing and flowing. I hope it ...This could be anger ebbing and flowing. I hope it tops out.Lisa at Greenbowhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07743973292900758183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-1413988755464773872011-02-21T11:22:16.547-08:002011-02-21T11:22:16.547-08:00a witty spin up!a witty spin up!DeLihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15795530327579458125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-70874594636899337672011-02-21T08:39:11.398-08:002011-02-21T08:39:11.398-08:00wow...this is immensely beautiful...your poetry is...wow...this is immensely beautiful...your poetry is so vivid and rich....I feel embarrassed to call mine poems... :)Rekhahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13484322426994645221noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-10664488479287273232011-02-20T18:23:39.503-08:002011-02-20T18:23:39.503-08:00Intriguing! Love the back and forth, the come and ...Intriguing! Love the back and forth, the come and go of this poem's energy. Great job!Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-13127115931777047222011-02-20T15:08:15.958-08:002011-02-20T15:08:15.958-08:00I like it. Just reading it gives me a catharsis. N...I like it. Just reading it gives me a catharsis. Nicely done.<br>xoRobynRawknrobyn.blogspot.comhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15997241410192066577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-66841053540871941102011-02-20T10:00:46.799-08:002011-02-20T10:00:46.799-08:00Dark...the beginning confuses and leads to questio...Dark...the beginning confuses and leads to questions but makes perfect sense one the poem is fully read...and goosebumps appear! <br>Gems xGemshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11403950713576686303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-53159074122992864682011-02-20T09:22:42.869-08:002011-02-20T09:22:42.869-08:00A spinning tale is right; spinning good and bad.A spinning tale is right; spinning good and bad.terichttp://teric.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-48302725679574546202011-02-20T09:09:31.923-08:002011-02-20T09:09:31.923-08:00Great poem, and great use of the promptGreat poem, and great use of the promptJudiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02778815502961000469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68236533042760069562011-02-20T08:44:06.099-08:002011-02-20T08:44:06.099-08:00Very good use of the prompt, which was a difficult...Very good use of the prompt, which was a difficult one. I'm impressed with your ability to use it in such a deep poem. KatKathttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12396548112800738809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-68417282359531385022011-02-20T07:06:38.114-08:002011-02-20T07:06:38.114-08:00Interpersonal conflict is so ugly! I agree with J...Interpersonal conflict is so ugly! I agree with June Freaking Cleaver. "I think arguments are verbal grenades.."<br><br>Well done!<br><br>Namaste..........cjcj Schlottmanhttp://theredsweater.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-21894244646858427322011-02-20T06:32:34.282-08:002011-02-20T06:32:34.282-08:00Good poem with subtle shifts of meaning, written f...Good poem with subtle shifts of meaning, written from a prompt that I really don't like at all.<br>Well done!<br>Best wishes,<br>Anna<br><a href="http://annasadornments.blogspot.com/2011/02/maisy-jane-mrs-jenny-matlocks-saturday.html" rel="nofollow">Anna's SC week 42 Maisy-Jane</a>Annahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17926688000745346961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-37954446148239758322011-02-20T04:50:53.522-08:002011-02-20T04:50:53.522-08:00imagination flows so high...to the top!imagination flows so high...to the top!sandrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17670821270960081899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-13945243096765777282011-02-20T02:13:26.701-08:002011-02-20T02:13:26.701-08:00Not sure, you sort of turn my thinking on it's...Not sure, you sort of turn my thinking on it's head at the end, but I can see the emotion and passion vividly in thisKodjo Deynoo.http://www.blogger.com/profile/01299996598769756878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-32061591093592194192011-02-20T01:48:20.084-08:002011-02-20T01:48:20.084-08:00This one's very deep.This one's very deep.anthonynorthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-1526244321734702392011-02-20T00:39:37.577-08:002011-02-20T00:39:37.577-08:00In some ways this makes no sense, but in others, i...In some ways this makes no sense, but in others, it has a gut wrenching likeness to many war stories that feature death and destruction...also...senseless!Greyscale Territoryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-48044360918936179692011-02-20T00:35:03.135-08:002011-02-20T00:35:03.135-08:00Do spin it, do weave a tale out of it.... can it n...Do spin it, do weave a tale out of it.... can it not be loving tale?<br><br>I think it can be.Harshad mehtahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10747054432059631577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-11454371631942616002011-02-19T23:06:05.583-08:002011-02-19T23:06:05.583-08:00Good job on this poem. =)Good job on this poem. <br><br>=)Suehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-62461301396722906992011-02-19T23:00:32.537-08:002011-02-19T23:00:32.537-08:00I think arguments are verbal grenades...Great poem...I think arguments are verbal grenades...<br><br>Great poem!June Freaking Cleaverhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02516002280882854450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-15749719094142894232011-02-19T22:31:36.306-08:002011-02-19T22:31:36.306-08:00Very profound!~AmesVery profound!~AmesAmeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15074479473400202674noreply@blogger.com