tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post5170424208324633353..comments2023-10-05T03:12:14.296-07:00Comments on poemette: lure of the impuregautami tripathyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-9699745451891556232012-10-08T17:48:53.591-07:002012-10-08T17:48:53.591-07:00Wow.I can feel the agony in each carefully craft w...Wow.<br><br>I can feel the agony in each carefully craft word here.<br><br>I was going to say the last verse was my favorite but I reread your work twice and I have to confess that I love the whole thing.<br><br>Start to finish.<br><br>Brilliant and powerful words you have written here.Jennyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12462124067637610359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-39321689993405450882012-10-05T15:29:38.375-07:002012-10-05T15:29:38.375-07:00That is why people should realize what kind of fee...That is why people should realize what kind of feelings can be inflicted even visually. We develope feelings and sensory emotions. <br><br>Strong veribage. Enjoyed this.Melissa Bickelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10572512831301719991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-84973047663453767002012-10-04T18:30:53.296-07:002012-10-04T18:30:53.296-07:00There is palpable pain in this. Well done.There is palpable pain in this. Well done.PattiKenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-79025196528397817492012-10-04T18:06:55.155-07:002012-10-04T18:06:55.155-07:00The fork as amulet is so original, Gautami. I real...The fork as amulet is so original, Gautami. I really enhoyed this aching entity you have constructed. Kutamunhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00475494332523156366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-66052464317602666842012-10-04T18:03:54.431-07:002012-10-04T18:03:54.431-07:00The fork as amulet is so original, Gautami. I real...The fork as amulet is so original, Gautami. I really enhoyed this aching entity you have constructed. Kutamunhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00475494332523156366noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-61052019155771598422012-10-04T09:18:55.905-07:002012-10-04T09:18:55.905-07:00An amazing capturing in words of the photo! You ha...An amazing capturing in words of the photo! You have an amazing talent Gautami!Carrie Burtthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-3282615855683962692012-10-04T00:03:06.453-07:002012-10-04T00:03:06.453-07:00"I am not so sure of the lure of you"lov..."I am not so sure of the lure of you"<br><br>love that line!<br><br>fabulous take on the photo prompt!<br><br>♥my heart's love songshttp://myheartslovesongs.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-40803506970299301712012-10-03T17:11:44.312-07:002012-10-03T17:11:44.312-07:00Amazing use of words. Well written:DAmazing use of words. Well written:DSayantini Bhattacharyahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01726797349113010237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-11138281887671367022012-10-03T13:55:14.406-07:002012-10-03T13:55:14.406-07:00I like how you expressed this- thanks.I like how you expressed this- thanks.izzyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06379007428464069723noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-50139803664429075582012-10-03T12:04:20.197-07:002012-10-03T12:04:20.197-07:00Wow... incredibly written...BRAVO !!!Wow... incredibly written...BRAVO !!!<br>Nonna Beachhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03227580166409342214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-60952866363540784432012-10-03T11:10:54.864-07:002012-10-03T11:10:54.864-07:00Phew... very intense. This can only be written the...Phew... very intense. This can only be written the way if it if one has felt those feelings.<br>Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-27236317666884942032012-10-03T11:04:23.537-07:002012-10-03T11:04:23.537-07:00I like aspect of building walls inside because som...I like aspect of building walls inside because sometimes I do.Gailhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-55681462079381458842012-10-03T10:29:28.131-07:002012-10-03T10:29:28.131-07:00Well done!Well done!Laurie Kolphttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-670626514126032292012-10-03T09:28:57.227-07:002012-10-03T09:28:57.227-07:00sadly and sweetly written.well done.sadly and sweetly written.well done.Kathe W.http://www.blogger.com/profile/06781645436343424010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-39272478892519502772012-10-02T19:07:23.896-07:002012-10-02T19:07:23.896-07:00Poignantly written.Poignantly written.~T~http://www.blogger.com/profile/17969562036638831748noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-35543190530858615642012-10-02T12:22:42.824-07:002012-10-02T12:22:42.824-07:00Lovely...so bittersweet...Lovely...so bittersweet...Tess Kincaidhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-58640271938070137772012-10-01T13:32:49.595-07:002012-10-01T13:32:49.595-07:00a beautiful piece of writing...xa beautiful piece of writing...xKayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16584116146098939783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-8814108117777915672012-10-01T09:15:36.158-07:002012-10-01T09:15:36.158-07:00Dark and deep and beautifully composed ...Dark and deep and beautifully composed ...Helenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-53285488524328893172012-09-30T19:20:35.527-07:002012-09-30T19:20:35.527-07:00Love. The grief can be so intense. An abstractio...Love. The grief can be so intense. An abstraction that requires a distraction if we are to survive it.SandyCarlsonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-51793292062798660082012-09-30T16:54:59.045-07:002012-09-30T16:54:59.045-07:00beautifully writtenbeautifully writtenanitamombanitahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03705021153044549156noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-86279629533389026072012-09-30T16:47:58.007-07:002012-09-30T16:47:58.007-07:00You captured the heartache nicely...You captured the heartache nicely...Strummed Wordshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14345074413602549369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-32700305846967091732012-09-30T14:11:15.322-07:002012-09-30T14:11:15.322-07:00Relationships over empty places and spaces are dif...Relationships over empty places and spaces are difficult. It's no easy task to maintain the feeling of warmth, of love, while also considering indiscretions. You have expressed that so clearly, Gautami. Thank you for sharing this. ♥Lindahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03241402645242821612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-3549198588839868232012-09-30T13:40:04.974-07:002012-09-30T13:40:04.974-07:00Totally amazing.... !!! I loved: my soul burns in...Totally amazing.... !!! I loved: <br><br>my soul burns infernally--<br><br>and the rest...xjjen revvedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15744946229300234443noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-7104562004845618742012-09-30T12:47:29.603-07:002012-09-30T12:47:29.603-07:00Ah yes - such is the lure and devastation of love!...Ah yes - such is the lure and devastation of love!Catfish Taleshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15168156842238803689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6820615718469502862.post-71393043602260503602012-09-30T10:30:09.674-07:002012-09-30T10:30:09.674-07:00You describe this achingly well. You describe this achingly well. Other Maryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.com